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HEY EVERYONE! AS I SAID I DO HAVE ONE STORY IN MY MIND, SO I THOUGHT I WOULD GIVE U A PROLOGUE AND THEN AFTER SEEING THE RESPONSE I WILL THINK ABOUT THE FURTHER PLOT.
SO HERE U GO:
Shipra to niharika: Priya ek bar Ram se aur sudhir se baat karna chahti hai
Niharika: aap neeche jayie mai baat karti hu Priya se
Inside room: priya was continuosly calling Ram on his cell but he was not picking her call. She murmurs, "Ram please pick up the phone, I neeed to talk to you, please'its important". There ram switched off his cell n thinks, "ye Priya bhi na, aaj meri shhaadi hai still mujhe tang kar rahi hai"
Niharika enters the room.
Priya: aap ne papa aur Ram se kaha k mujhe unse baat karni hai
Priya: par kyu?
Niharika: Priya is waqt tumhare papa is halat mai nahi hai k tumse kuch keh sake
Priya pleadingly: par aunty aap janti hai k meri lyf k saare decisions sirf papa hi lete hai aur phir ye toh itna bada decision hai aur Ram, kya wo iss shaadi ke liye tayyar hoga, aap jante ho wo kabhi haan nhi kahega
Niharika: janti hu Priya k wo kabhi haan nahi kahega isiliye usey abhi tak nhi bataya, tumhari ek haan se Ram ki aur tumhare papa ki dono ki izzat bach jayegi, please Priya'.shayad tumhare papa bhi yehi chahte hai
Priya: par Ram ko jhoot aur dhoke se sakt nafrat hai, jab usey pata chalega ki uski shaadi mujhse hui hai wo bhi usey bataye bagair aur di apne boyfriend k saath bhag gayi hai toh aap janti ho kya anjam hoga?
Niharika: tum Ram se bahot pyar karti ho na, hamesha se
Priya stood dumfounded. She stammers: aap'.apko kaise pata?
Niharika: sawal ye nhi hai, tum pyar karti ho usse?
Priya with tears flowing from her eyes says yes.
Niharika: kya tum chahogi k uski badnaami ho, wo abhi business world mai apni image bana raha hai aur agar aaj uski shaadi nhi hui toh uski kitni badnaami hogi tum ye jaanti ho
Priya cryingly: haan mai hamesha se chahti thi k meri shaadi Ram se ho par is tarha usey andhere mai rakh kar nahi
Niharika: Priya ye tym emotional hone ka nahi hai, zara khidki ke bahar dekho tumhare ma papa ki kya halat hai, mujhe jo kehna tha wo maine keh diya, ab aage tumhari marzi
With that Niharika left the room. Priya stand near the window n looks at her parents. They were completely shattered after her sister has eloped from the marriage and she glances at Ram too, who was so happy n smile was not leaving his face. He was so excited that he was going to marry the girl to whom he loves.
Priya had to decide her fate. Though she always dreamt of marrying Ram but not under this circumstances''..without informing Ram'.. she knew Ram's anger n also how much he hate people who deceives him or cheat him. She don't want to marry him thinking what if after marriage if she loses his friendhip too. But Niharika was also right, it will bring him bad name n there are many rivals who can bring him much defame. He is very near to be the number one businessman of country and also her father reputation is also at stake.
She is totally caught between her heart n mind. She don't know to whom to follow: mind or Heart? She has never thought that her life will take her to the point where she has to take such a drastic decision.
So what will Priya do? Will she marry Ram or not?
What do u guys think should be her decision? Should she marry him or not?
Do leave your comment.
I have posted this prologue just to know ur opinion. If u people thinks it's a good story then I will continue it otherwise I'll not write this story. I have not even decided the name of the story, if u ppl want me to continue then pls do suggest names too. I don't promise but I will definitely try to give update if I get some free tym.
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