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Originally posted by ramkideewani23

OMG OMG Its actually hereHug
1st - Superb job done by Sara with the Signature MontageHeartDay Dreaming
2nd-Vinnie u beat my record...U didn't waste timeLOL 

Story started with a bang. The tractor scene, magnificentBig smile. Rewa wanting to go away from Mawari and Vickram battling to keep cool with her craziness and wants...I am dying to read the rest. 
Sugni and Vickram friendsEmbarrassed Haaye haayeCool 
We finally get to see the Sugni that doesn't believe in being a bedniClapClap Thnks to VinnieStar
Waiting on next chapterBig smileStar


 Hello  Simi  Madam  ...I  am looking forward to reading your  reviews on this  story  after each chapter lol... Please  stay  tuned and  i  hope  that you  enjoy   the rest of   the story!

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Wow!Vinnie,another superb and fantastic start to your new FF.Clap
Also,thanks to Sara for the title and montage as well-they are both beautifulThumbs Up
I do love the tractor scene too.
Guess this is another logical way in which the original story should have been told-not the garbage we were subjected to in the last 8 months of the show.
Once,again,thanks for starting another one Vinnie-your'e going GREAT GUNS!Thumbs UpDancing


Hi Rose,   thanks for all your appriciation  and  i  do hope to see your  reviews  on the rest of this story...  Stay  tuned and  i  hope you  enjoy this ride!

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Chapter 2

"Divorce?"  His mother, Godhavari, said as she looked  at him.

"Yes Maa'I can't do this anymore"

"What you mean you can't do this  anymore?" She asked looking  at hi m as though  he was 3  instead  of 33  "Vickram'.I don't care what you think Divorce is not an option  you  hear me 'you  have this families reputation to protect'I gave her father  my  word  that   you would marry her and take care of her..and Marriage my  dear is a lifelong commitment!" She said

"Really  mother?" He laughed  bitterly'"Why  don't you tell that to  Uma's Husband'I  think he missed the memo!" he  said scathingly'His  sister's  husband  abandoned her with child when he ran off  with a bedni 5  years ago..he was never herd of sence..

"I am talking about my  son! Not..that man!"  She said

"Hold  on one minute here!" Neeranjan   said  ..finally  speaking up  since Vickram  told them his decision. He decided  to make things easier on him self and break the news to all of them  at once and  save himself the trouble of  having to repeat himself to them.

Reva  was crying  on her brothers  shoulders.  Somehow  watching her  cry   was not affecting him as it should. He spent a lot of his life  trying to decipher between her real and fake tears.

"You can't do this to her..you can't just throw her out'Vickram  she loves you'"

"Neeranjan, who says I am  throwing her out'.believe me  I will take care of her she will want for nothing  for the  rest of her life'that I promise! But I can't do this  anymore." He sighed.  "Can you two give us a minute I want to speak to her  please?"  reluctantly  His  mother and   Neeranjan  left the study.

Reva was now sitting on the couch on the room ,  she was still crying.  Taking a box  of tissues he  went to her and sat. Offering her one. She  refused.

"I am sorry  Reva'I  know I am probably  being unfair to you. But please understand,  Reva something has changed, I have changed  I  am tired Reva'." He  stopped when she  looked at him with  dry  eyes, as she laughed'

"Ohhh I  understand! You are tired, of taking care of the mad woman right'.you  think I  don't know'.! " She began shaking her head from side to side.  "you want to keep me trapped here '.that is what you  want'.but  no'no'nooo''I am not  going!!!!"  She said still shaking her head 'She began rocking back and forth '

"Reva'.calm down ..shhh" He said as he saw  the beginnings of a full blown  tantrum. He put his hands on her arms trying to  calm her. She shoved against him  hard sending him reeling back, before he could sit up she got off the couch moving to the desk she  took up a paper weight as she  throw it towards him, hitting him  at the  side of his face, he dodged  the next few missles she  began flinging in his direction as he got up'

"You bas***d'.I  hate you  Vickram'.you  will pay '" She  said madly,  reaching her side he held her  arms restraining her.

"Neeranjan!"  he called  his brother  in law'. Who came in after what seemed like forever. "Call the doctor!"  He ordered as he took a screaming Reva to her room.

 

Vickram  stood outside the bedroom  in the hallway  watching Nieeranjan  pace the floor, his mother  was standing  at the corner , lost in her own  thoughts.  Vickram sighed .

"Satisfied now , you  bas***d?"  Neerajan  said  to Vickram , he was now standing in front of him with an angry  look on his face.  "you  got what you wanted'she was getting  better  but you had  to spoil it." he spat at Vickram. Vickram looked at him  as he  tried to remain clm.

"Look I am sorry '.I"'

"He  is  sorry.. oh  save it'I  am warning you  if anything happens to my  sister  I  will make you pay." He said .

"Hey!"  Godavari  said coming to  stand   close to neeranjan.   "Look  this is  not the time for this'let the Doctor  finish  checking her.  Neeranjan, beta  go  take a walk ok.!"   She said .  reluctantly   he left them  and went out.  Vickram pinched the bridge of his nose as he let out a sigh. Both brother and sister can  be drama queens at time'although he admitted maybe the way  he made his declaration known  was wrong.

"Vickram?" His mother said softly, she came to stand at his side.  Godavari  was a proud  woman, she was  a Thakur's  wife  and she knew  what  that  entailed the good side and the bad.  She was a stickler for  reputation  though and  no matter what happened  to her   her  familys  good name meant the world.   They  were  Thakurs..and in the Thakur clan  divorce was not an option. 

"Son, I know what you're going through.  And believe me  had I known about her condition before your wedding I  would have refused, but Vickram  the  minute you started took that first  round around the sacred fire, you made a promise to her  to take care of her for life. You did it for so long'now suddenly."she sighed. "You  know Vickram, I  heard  that if women  who are ill like Reva were to have  a child it can cure them."  She said  staring at him.

Vickram gave his mother  ans incredulous look.  'What? Mother, please 'you have any  idea what you are saying?"  He shook his  head.  Sometimes  his mother  surprise him.

"Oh  come on'at least give it a try 'maybe  if you try spending more time with her, instead of running  like you have been doing since she returned you  wouldn't be so frustrated." She  said looking at him.

"Oh God!" Vckram sighed'the last person  one wants to have this type of conversation with is his  mother.

"I  mean before her accident you spent more time with her, you  shared a room'now she is back  and you two  are living in separate rooms , you don't spend  5 minutes together.  And  she is much  calmer than she was before the accident' Why  is that Vickram?"

'It was different'I was different'.Mother  look whatever happened I resigned myself  with my  marriage. And I  tired  to make make the best of it'you know that,  and then the accident and she was gone'after months I began  moving on, it was the end of an era for me.  Then she comes back'and I should be  happy about it'but when did she give me a chance to be?'two days  after coming here she begins nagging to go back,  if I am with her for more than ten minutes she starts  acting up looking for  an argument that makes no sence'so  for peace  of mind and  in this house  I  leave her alone!  I don't know if I can handle doing all this again!"  He  closed his eyes.

"Vickram  it's not her fault what is happening to her, you  know that. Whatever it was for that bond you two had befor the accident..that love'

"Love?, bond?'Oh  come on mother'when  in  this marriage was there ever time for that to develop'Reva  was nothing more  than a responsibility  handed to me. The only  thing I  have been  doing since the beginning of this  marriage was  running after her, taking care  of her. My  day  was good if she was  good if she did  not have an "episode' True I felt  sorry for her, and  I  hated  seeing her in pain I tried to keep her happy. Spend enough time  with some one and you  do develop an affection for them, and yes when she was  lucid she was'nt that bad.. Since  her  return  even that feeling is gone . 'Don't you think she would be better off if she was where she could get the proper care Mother? The world has change you know."  He said  hoping he was  able to get through to her.

"Maybe so, but I  have  not'Vickram  for me, for her give it a chance. Look son , Thakurs do not divorce their wives. It's not a part of a culture. " Vickram  laughed  sarcastically, he could feel his anger raising.

"No  they  don't divorce their wives'but  have no problem  flaunting  the bedni's in their faces and  ill treating them'you  don't have to look far, your  own  daughter IS married  to  a gem of a Thakur'is that what you want  me to do'Shall I  go out  and  look for a Bedni??...Wow your stubbornness and false sense  of  honur  astounds me! "  he said.

"Vickram!"  She said , his words stung as she stared at him that was no less than a slap.  He cold feel the anger  rolling out of her. 

Godhavari  looked at her son,  Vickram  was always  her perfect son, he followed her foot steps and did  everything with out complaint.  Even when he saw what Reva was,  he rallied and did  what Vickram dose made the best of it.  So all of a sudden  his  wanting to give  up and brake  tradition and his marriage was shocking to her.  Deep down though  she knew he was right, he never got any  happiness  from this marriage.    But it was ingrained in her , her father said it, her husband said it, her mother obeyed it, and she did her best to pass it on'"the reputation of this families name ,  is more important that the happiness of the members of the family."  If Vickram breaks that now by  this divorce business,  how would she face them'she  also know  he  was as stubborn as her..and unfortunately  she could not  control him.

"Fine'do whatever you  want, you will any  way, but I am telling you  you will drag this families name through the mud, and remember one thing, that girl needs on you Vickram good or bad'you made a promise  to her, to be with her  for life, and only  a coward of a man abandons his sick wife!  You  understand   me??"  She turned and  walked off, leaving him staring after her.  Vickram  closed his eyes as he let out a  sigh, of course  he would end up being the bad one here.!

The  door  opened ,  and the  Doctor  came out,  Dr. Suman was her name a  pyscologist."How is she?"  He asked.

"I gave her a sedative she should be a sleep  soon."  She said.

"What happened?"  he  asked.  " She was doing well , in fact  this is  the  first  attack she had   in over  a  year!" He was  almost  sure she was getting better.

"Yes 'but  getting  shocking news , or where  the brain is under stress, it can trigger these  things, Mr. Singh you  should know that." She said  looking at him  sternly.  Another person  on the Vickram is scum bandwagon he saw.

"She should be  ok and back to normal  soon, but  I am warning you this is not good for her'.you  need to be very  careful with her."  She told him.

"Yes doctor." He said.

"So what was it? that triggered this'all she kept saying was she won't go?"  Suman  asked.  Vickram looked  at her resigned  to tell the  events of the day.

"I just thought 'if I told them all together it would be easier."

"For who?" She asked.   She looked at him  with a slight pitiful  smile.

"Look  Mr. Singh, I  know  taking care of  a spouse  like  Reva is difficult,  and you did  it for a long time, longer than most, so I  understand what you are going through."

Vickram  look at her, " I  honestly  think she will be better off  if she  had the proper care, and I am willing to  arrange  whatever she needs'but I can get a divorce on medical  grounds?"  He   asked.

"Yes  you can'I  will  testify  to that'but I  have one request."  She said

"What is it."

'Right now , she is  stressed and she attached to this place'and change  can be difficult'I will try  to councel  her to agree'but  if you  do so now it can send her over the edge, and we have to be careful with her'give me a few  months to  prepare her'get her to agree'are you willing to do that?" She asked.

Vickram nodded.  "Ok.."

 

After the  Suman left  Vickram  went into the Reva's   room she  seemed asleep.   Today  was a hard day, but this was not going to be easy. He looked at her with a slight feeling of uneasiness, as his mother's  words  played in his head.  It was not her fault of her condition is true, but was he being fair to both of them  if he grew bitter towards her..

He turned to go out when she held his hand. Turning to look at her .

"Sahib" She said softly  sitting up slightly, he sat at her side.

"Hey" 'She looked  at him  as her eyes  filled with  tears.

"I am sorry, I  know , my  head'bu'but  please  don't send me away'I'll try  to be better." She said as she  hugged  him

"Shhh..don't think about it now'get some rest'hmm?" he said

"No  Sahib'promise me 'promise you  won't send me away'Please" She cried

"Reva..Reva shh..OK  'I  won't send you'" He said "Relax  I  promise you'll be OK"  He  said as he closed his eyes.

""OK'Sahib?"

"Hmm?"

"I am sleepy."  She said softly.   He moved away making her lie down, as he covered her.

"Good night."  He said taking off the bed side  lap as he  walked out her room  into his,  he footsteps and his heart both heavy'.

Reva waited a few minutes after   Vickram left the room before throwing off the  covers and  sitting up .  She  let out a  sigh  of  relief.   She came this close to  losing everything  she worked hard for. Divorce? Oh no  Vickram  Singh  that was not  possible.   She may  not know much  but she  knew  how to play  her trump card, Poor  Vickram  was nothing  if not soft  hearted'and she  figured  out by  now which  buttons  of his  she  could push' For  now she  brought her herself  some  time, and  she could see  she had no time to  loose' once  he  got  an idea  in his  head  he  would   not give up.  One day  he would  get what he wanted and befor that she had to do what she needed  to do. 

 The ringing of her cell phone  broke  her out of her  thoughts, looking at the  caller Id  she smiled.

"Hello dear'."

"Where  is your husband I was sure he would  spend the night at your bedside!"  The voice laughed

Reva Shuddered at that thought. "Oh  please don't give me night mares 'it'll be  a cold day  in hell before I let him touch me! I  sent him  to his room,  not that he was dying to stay  by  my  side.

"Good  move'you  are really  are smart!"

"Well  we have to move fast now'Plan A is  failing."

"We have to move on to Plan B."

"Ok'but  let things cool down a bit'we need him back  to  ignoring me for that to work."'

"Hmmm. Well  good  night!" the voice  said.  Reva disconnected the call, yes  she  needed  him to put the divorce business on the back burner. 

The plan was foolproof there is no way it would fail. She was sure.  She  was smiling as she fell  asleep.

Edited by Vinnie79 - 09 July 2013 at 4:00pm

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Okay. Firstly. I will start with this...Dr. Suman?Shocked ROFL Vickram Ji u better keep extra 4 eyes on the doctor ji. I don't trust her. Besides she got bad recordsEmbarrassed I can only imagine Bhushan pushing away Suman right nowROFL Can't see her as a Doctor...bad records jiD'oh 
Two...Thnks for actually writing Maa Sahib's name  out...Never knew itEmbarrassed Embarrassed Approve I know it was something sounding close to Gulabiya JiEmbarrassedBig smile
3rd- What is Rewa up to and who was she talking to? Yes I'm a curious cat rite now...Wait no I hate catsAngry I am a curious rat rite nowThumbs Up That sounds betterCool 
4th- Gulabi--somethingEmbarrassed Okay maa sahib cares about saving Rewa Vikram marriage and forgets about her daughter's plight?Shocked What kind of mother are u Gulab Jamun Ji?Shocked Shocked 
5th- If I was Vickram, one straight right been catching NeranjanAngry How dare he call Vickram a bas*tar*?Angry Angry 

Okay so now my final analysis. Story moving pretty fastThumbs Up I think Vinnie is purposely doing this for me to not miss a chapter like the last timeWink I missed Sugni today.Cry Overall superb episode..Clap Wait y am I calling it an episode?Geek Overall superb ChapterClap Can't wait for the next one, as I am at the edge of my seatBig smile Wanna know what Rewa ji is up to. And what Gulab Jamun will do to keep her son and Rewa togetherBig smile

Nice oneStar


Edited by ramkideewani23 - 09 July 2013 at 7:49pm

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OMG Vinnie...i absolutely loved it. I was speechless after reading this chapter.I just can't believe Reva,how can a person be so mean?... For a moment my heart went out to her but after Vikram left the room and we saw her true face... i felt like slapping myself for having felt sorry for herLOL. As i said before Vinnie,  i strongly believe in marriage being a lifetime commitment ... a marriage is based on trust, love ,loyalty, respect and understanding which without can never survive. I know before a couple is married they make a promise to each other with God as their witness, to stand by each other come what may and Vikram did that, he fulfilled that promise by  taking care of Reva in all those years and is even willing to take care of her needs if he gets to divorce her, i am sure he has made a lot of sacrifices for her sake but had their relationship started on the foundation of love, it would have been a different story, he would have never consider divorcing her...things would have been much different between the two of them... but in this case it was not so... everyone deserves  their share of happiness...it is indeed unfair to stay in  a relationship that brings more sorrow than happiness just to fulfill your responsibilities,i guess all it does is make your life hopeless and each day becomes a struggle to survive (i hope God agrees with meLOL) .I do believe in making sacrifices but there are limits involved as well and we can see what kind of a person Reva really is... must he really sacrifice his happiness for her sake ?. I know him wanting a divorce will surely add a different dimension to this story as there is his family's reputation and the society at large to consider but i really do hope that somehow Vikram will change these people's perspective about divorce and show them that divorce is not a crime if there is no love and  the relationship you have to endure brings a lot of pain. 

It was a truly amazing chapter Vinnie. You are very creative and i am sorry for my comments being so longEmbarrassed


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hey vinnie very good progress...

vikram had a great point to his Mother - divorce is crime and having a behdni is ok how ? good point but to be honest if u look at old thakurs and even king life style they had a wife and they had other ladies to serve them I am glad vikram is not like all those men and he is special .. he wants to move On .. and have a better Life..
 
I can understand what he is going thru and its not an easy life but the grand shock is that reva is Okay else who would speak to her On the phone It means again again again she was acting EmbarrassedDead if she is normal and again attacking vikram she is not a great wife and if she was ill the way they said may b we would feel sorry for her any ways .. she is acting and I wonder who is it on the phone
does she has an affair or any boyfriend or she is just planning to steal vikram's money and run away ..
Lets see
any ways good progress !!

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Originally posted by ramkideewani23

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Okay. Firstly. I will start with this...Dr. Suman?Shocked ROFL Vickram Ji u better keep extra 4 eyes on the doctor ji. I don't trust her. Besides she got bad recordsEmbarrassed I can only imagine Bhushan pushing away Suman right nowROFL Can't see her as a Doctor...bad records jiD'oh 
Two...Thnks for actually writing Maa Sahib's name  out...Never knew itEmbarrassed Embarrassed Approve I know it was something sounding close to Gulabiya JiEmbarrassedBig smile
3rd- What is Rewa up to and who was she talking to? Yes I'm a curious cat rite now...Wait no I hate catsAngry I am a curious rat rite nowThumbs Up That sounds betterCool 
4th- Gulabi--somethingEmbarrassed Okay maa sahib cares about saving Rewa Vikram marriage and forgets about her daughter's plight?Shocked What kind of mother are u Gulab Jamun Ji?Shocked Shocked 
5th- If I was Vickram, one straight right been catching NeranjanAngry How dare he call Vickram a bas*tar*?Angry Angry 

Okay so now my final analysis. Story moving pretty fastThumbs Up I think Vinnie is purposely doing this for me to not miss a chapter like the last timeWink I missed Sugni today.Cry Overall superb episode..Clap Wait y am I calling it an episode?Geek Overall superb ChapterClap Can't wait for the next one, as I am at the edge of my seatBig smile Wanna know what Rewa ji is up to. And what Gulab Jamun will do to keep her son and Rewa togetherBig smile

Nice oneStar
wow simmi u r so funny
gulab jamuun hahahahhahaa good one ...
oh yes DR suman .. good point u have there ... and niranjan cursing vikram ... very bad !!!
any ways good points !!!

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Great chapter Vinnie. You keep getting better with each FF you write

Vikram should have given Neeranjan a tight slap for calling him a bas***d. Angry 
Anyways, good to see Reva's true face revealed although I had thought she was genuinely sick tooLOL

I am very curious to find out just who she was talking to on the phone.

Good to see Dr. Suman still treating patients after Ranveer in RSSIWink

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