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Posted: 9 years ago

Part 7

NEXT MORNING  WAS  AS  USUAL  FOR  ALL OF THEM .

HEER WAS HELPING JEEVIKA IN KITCHEN , MANVI  IS AS USUAL DOING HER NAUTANKIS  AND VIRAT WAS LOOKING AND  LAUGHING AT HER  ANTIC  THINGS. 

ALL  HEAD TOWARDS  BREAKFAST  TABLE

FIRST BEEJI , BADI BEEJI , CHACHU AND CHACHI HAD BREAKFAST  LATER ALL YOUNGSTERS  SIT  FOR BREAKFAST . BREAKFAST WAS QUITE WITH SILENCE WHICH WAS NOT UPTO MANVI . SO SHE START DOING HER OWN NAUTANKI BAZI SO THAT THERE SHOULD BE HAVE SOME FUN OVER THERE . VIRAT IN HIS MIND ...YEH LADKI KABHI BHI SHANTI SE KHANNA NI KHA SAKTI ...

JEEVIKA TO MANVI : MANVI KYA KR RI HAI ARAM SE KHA NA

MANVI : DI KYA KARU KHAYA NI JA RHA

JEEVIKA : KYU KYA HUA TERI TABIYAT TO THIK HAI NA

MANVI : JI DI MERI TABIYAT KO KUCH NI HUA BAS BREAKFAST TABLE PAR ITNI SHANTI ACHI NI LAG RI

JEEVIKA : MANVI TU BHI NA

ALL LAUGH THERE

HEER : MANVI TU KABHI NI SUDHAR SKTI  JAISI THI  VAISI HI  HAI  . PTA HAI PREM MANVI HAMESHA AISA HI KRTI HAI ...AUR HUM SAB KO ENTERTAIN KRTI HAI

PREM : VO TO DIKH RHA HAI

MANVI : HOOO JIJU PLZ MEI ITNI BHI BURI NI HU

JEEVIKA : MANU CHUP CHAP KHA

WHILE EATING FOOD VIREN WAS LOOKING AT JEEVIKA  WITHOUT SOME ONE NOTICE  HIM

PREM : VIREN AJ HUMHE  YHI SHURUAT KRNI HOGI  .  KHI SE KOI TO CLUE MILE

VIREN : THIK HAI AJ CHALTE HAI

PREM LOOKS AT HEER .

HEER TUM TENSION MAT LO SAB THIK HO JAYEGA .

HEER : HA PREM MUJHE TUM PAR PURA BHAROSA HAI KI TUM BAHUT JALD IN SABSE BHAR AA JAOGE

BOTH  ARE HAVING EYE LOCKING SCENE WITH BACKGROUND MUSIC

PREET : LO HO GYE SHURU NAIN MATAKA IN DONO KA

PREET : BHAI BHABHI KO DEKHNE KE LIYE PURI LIFE HAI ABHI KHANA KHA LO VARNA THANDA HO JAYEGA

PREM : PREET TU HAMESHA KABAB MEI HADDI VALA KAM KIA KR

PREET : SO SWEET OF U BHAI

HEER LOOK DOWN WITH BLUSHING FACE

MANVI : OYE HOYE JIJU AAP TO BADE HI ROMANTIC HO HAA

HAAYE KASH MUJHE BHI KOI AISA HI MIL  JAYE ...VIRAT LOOK AT MANVI

VIRAT : TUMHE TO KOI BANDR HI MILEGA

MANVI KNOWS WHY HE SAY SO

MANVI WAS ABOUT TO GIVE RETURN ANS TO HIM SUDDEN JEEVIKA SPOKE UP MANVI KHANA KHA

MANVI : JI DI SHE LOOK AT VIRAT WHILE MAKING HER USUAL FACE

AFTER  BREAKFAST ALL R SITTING IN HALL ...MANVI WAS CHATTING WITH HER BADI BEEJI ON USUAL TOPIC OF GETTING HER BANGLES

SUDDEN DOOR BELL RINGS

JEEVIKA SAID MEI DEKHTI HU WHOSE THERE

SHE GOES TO OPEN THE DOOR

HER NEIGHBOUR  SHANTI CAME

JEEVIKA : ARE AUNTY JI AAP NAMASTE

SHANTI : NAMASTE BETA

JEEVIKA : ANDR AAIYENA

BEEJI : KON HAI JEEVIKA

JEEVIKA : BEEEJI SHANTI AUNTY AAI HAI

SHANTI : NAMASTE JI

BEEJI : NAMASTE AAIYE NA BAITHIYE

AAJ YHA KAISE AANA HUA

MANVI : PAKKA KUCH LENE AAI HONGI

JEEVIKA : MANVI TU CHUP KAR

BEEJI ROLLED HER EYES TO MANU AND MANVI KEEP HER HEAD DOWN

SHANTI : VO MANVI AAJ MEI KUCH LENE NI AAI HU MEI TO KUCH DENE AAI HU

BEEH=JI : JI MEI KUCH SMJHI NI

SHANTI : VO DARASAL BAAT YEH HAI KI MEI NA JEEVIKA  KE VASTE EK RISHTA LAI HU

ALL R SHOCKED WITH THIS NEWS ESPECIALLY JEEVIKA  AND VIREN

VIREN LOOK AT JEEVIKA

BEEJI : RISHTA

SHANTI : HA RISHTA VO KYA HAI NA MERE MAAYKE MEI MERI BHABHI KA BHAI HAI  . VO ACHE KHANDAN KA HAI ...KAMATA THIKTHAK HAI ...JEEVIKA RAAJ KAREGI

BEEJI : JI HUMNE ABHI SOCHA NI SHAADI KE LIYE

SHANTI  : ISME SOCHNE VALI KYA BAAT HAI ...AB TO UMAR BHI NIKLTI JA RI HAI LADKI KI ...

EK BAR BAAT KRNE MEI HARZ HI KYA HAI

SUDDEN DABBU TALK IN BETWEEN AND SAID SHANTI AUNTY AAP AAI BAHUT ACHA LAGA ...AAPNE HAMARI JEEVIKA DI KE BARE MEI SOCHA YEH BHI ACHA HAI ...MAGAR AB AAP YHA SE JA SKTI HAI

ALL WERE SHOCKED WITH DABBU BEHAVIOUR

BEEJI : DABBU TU YEH KYA KR RHA HAI ...MEHMANO SE AISE BAAT KRTE HAI KYA

DABBU : BEEJI AGR MEHMAN ACHE KE LIYE AAYE TO ACHA LAGTA HAI VARNA UNKA YHA KOI KAM NI

SHANTI : TERE KEHNE KA MATLAB KYA HAI ...HUM ACHE KHANDAN KE NHI HAI KYA

DABBU : VO TO DIKH RHA HAI

SHANTI : SAB KUCH TO PTA HAI TERI BEEJI KO MERE MAAYKE VALO KE BAREMEI TO KYA PROBLM HAI IS RISHTE SE

BEEJI : DABBU BAS KAR  CHUP AB TU KUCH NI BOLEGA ...SHANTI JI MEI AAP SE MAFI MANGTA HU

HAATH JOD KE DABBU KI TARAF SE

DABBU : BEEJI AAP MAFI KYU MANG RHI HAI ...YEH JEEVIKA DI KA BHALA KRNE NI AAI HAI UNKE LIYE MUSIBATO KA PAHAD LEKE AAI HAI

SHANTI : TERE KEHNE KA MATLAB KYA HAI

DABBU : AAP NE YEH TO BTA DIA KI AAPKE BHABHI KA BHAI ACHA HAI MAGR YEH NI BTAYA KI USKA DIVORCE HO CHUKA HAI ...VO  35 SAAL  KA HAI  AUR USKE DO BACHE HAI

ALL WERE SHOCKED ESPECIALLY JEEVIKA

BEEJI : YEH TU KYA KEH RHA HAI DABBU

DABBU : BEEJI MEI SHI KEH RHA HU ...AB AAP BOLTI KYU NI SHANTI AUNTY ...BOLIYE JO KUCH BHI MEINE KHA VO SACH NI HAI

SHANTI : AB AB  HA YEH SACH HAI TO KYA HUA AGR USKE DO BACHE HAI ...PHLI BIWI KE SAATH NI NIBI TO ISME USKA KYA DOSH

BEEJI : BAS KIJIYE

AAPNE KYA SMJHA KI HUM APNI BETI KA HAATH ESE KISI KE BHI HAATH MEI DE DENGE ...HAMARI BETI HAMARE UPAR BHOJ NI ...SMJHI AAP

SHANTI  : MEI TO BHI BHALA HI KRNE AAI THI ...VAISE BHI  JEEVIKA KE LIYE KON  SA KOI  RAJKUMAR AANE VALA HAI ...EK BAR AGAR LADKI KI SAGAI KE BAAD RISHTA TOOT JAI TO KON KAREGA USSE SHAADI ... IS SE ACHA HOTA KI  ... RAAM JANE UN LADKE VALO NE RISHTA TODA YA JEEVIKA KE LAKSHAN KO DEKH KR ...

MANVI : BAS KIJIYE AAP MERI DI KE BARE MEI KUCH BHI NHI BOLEGI ...MERI DI AISI NHI HAI ...SMJHI AAP ...

JEEVIKA WAS HURT BY THIS ... SHE RAN FROM THERE WHILE CRYING ...

MANVI : DI DI AAP KHA JA RI HO

MANVI : SHANTI  AUNTY AAP YHA SE CHUP CHAP JAYEGI YA MEI KOI TAKLEEF UTHOU AAPKO DARWAZE TAK LEKE JANE KI

SHANTI : WHILE MAKING HER FACE ...MEI BHI DEKHU KON KRTA HAI JEEVIKA RANI SE SHAADI

AND MOVES FROM THERE

MANVI : INKI HIMMAT KAISE HUI DI KO KUCH BHI KEHNE  KI ...AB YEH MUJHSE NHI BACHEGI ...

DABBU : HA MANVI DI AB TO YEH NI BACHEGI INKI VAJAH SE AJ  JEEVIKA DI KITNI HURT HUI HAI

BEEJI : MAGR  DABBU TUJHE YEH SAB KAISE PTA CHALA

DABBU :  VO BEEJI  MUJHE  SONI NE  BATAYA  THA ...EK  BAR

JAB YEH RISHTE KI BAAT KR RI THI APNI BHABHI KE BHAI KE SAATH MEI TABHI SMJ GYA KI YEH VHI LADKA HAI

BEEJI HAMARI JEEVIKA DI KE  HAMARE LIYE KOI BHOJ NI HAI ...HUM JEEVIKA DI KA HAATH AISE KISI KE HAATH MEI NHI DENGE

BEEJI : TU SHI KEH RHA HAI DABBU ...MEI TO TUJHE NALAYAK SMJHTI  THI LEKIN TU TO BAHUT HI SMJHDAR BACHA HAI ...

MANU HUG DABBU AND SAID THANKU DABBE AJ TERI WAJAH SE DI IS MUSIBAT SE BACH GYI

DABBU  :  KYA MANVI DI AAP MUJHE THANKU BOL RI HAI MEI HUMESHA AAPKI AUR DI KI RAKSHA KE LIYE KHADA RAHUGA ...AUR VAISE BHI MEI TO AAPKI TISRI BEHN HU NA

ALL LAUGH AT THIS

MANVI : ACHA CHAL  AB   DI KO LEKE AATE HAI VO BAHUT HURT HUI HAI

DABBU  :  HA CHALTE HAI MGR DI KHA GYI HOGI ...ARE MEI TO BHUL  GYA DI HUMESHA GANGA GHAT JATI HAI ...CHALO

VIRAT TO VIREN :  BHAI AJ JO KUCH BHI HUA JEEVIKA JI KE SAATH VO  GALAT HUA ...UNHE HAMARI WAJAH SE YEH  SAB  JELHNA  PAD RHA HAI ...

VIREN :  HA VIRAT TU SHI KEH RHA HAI AJ JEEVIKA JO BHI HAALAT HAI USKA ZIMEDAR  MEI HU ...I HOPE JEEVIKA MUJHE MAAF  KR DE ...

BOTH BROTHERS CONVO WAS BEING LISTEN BY PREM

PREM : YEH VIREN AUR VIRAT YEH SAB KYA KEH RHE HAI ...KYA  CHAUDARY'S VADHERAS KO JANTE HAI ...SUDDEN THE  FLASHBACK SCENES CAME IN FRONT OF PREM AND NOW HE IS  CONFIRM THAT KUCH TO HAI INKE BICH ...PTA LAGANA PADEGA...MAGAR KAISE

SUDDEN HE GOT AN IDEA...

HE CALLS VIREN AND BOTH MOVES FOR THEIR CASE...

AT HOME RANDOM CHATS ARE  GOING ON But JEEVIKA WAS NOT PART OF THEM ...SHE  WAS  NOT  HAPPY DUE TO MORNING INCIDENT .  PREM AND VIREN ALSO COMES HOME AFTER THEIR INVESTIGATION .

BEEJI ASKED PREM :  PREM BETA DUE YOU GET CLUE  ABOUT  YOUR  CASE  ...

PREM : JI BEEJI  KUCH  TO  MILA HAI AB BAS KUCH AUR CLUES JODNA BAKI HAI FIR SARA MATTER CLEAR  HO  JAYEGA.

TILL THEN VIREN WAS LOOKING AT JEEVIKA  BUT JEEVIKA HEAD WAS DOWN ...THIS WAS NOTICED BY PREM .

MANVI WANTS TO LITE UP HER DI'S MOOD SO SHE TALK  SOME FUNNY JOKES BUT JEEVIKA DOESN'T SMILE . ALL WERE  NOT HAPPY DUE TO JEEVIKA'S SAD FACE. THEY WANT HER TO BACK  TO  NORMAL.  DABBU AND MANNU PLAY THERE FAVOURITE SONG ...EK HAZARO MEI MERI BEHNA HAI ...AT LAST JEEVIKA SMILE AND ALL R HAPPY  INCLUDING VIREN .

CHACHI JI : SHUKR HAI RABB DA JEEVIKA TERE CHEHRE PAR SMILE TO AAI ...AISE HI HASTI RAHA KR

JEEVIKA :  BEEJI MUJHE AAPSE KUCH MANAGNA HAI

BEEJI : HA BOL KYA CHAHIYE TUJHE

JEEVIKA :  BEEJI AAP PHLE PROMISE KARIYE KI AAP MANA NHI KAREGI ...

BEEJI : ACHA VAADA KRTI HU ...AB BOL KYA CHAHIYE TUJHE

JEEVIKA : BEEJI MEI ABHI SHAADI NI KRNA CHAHTI ...ISLIYE PLZ AAP YEH RISHTE  KI BAAT KRNA BAND KR DIJIYE. JAB MEI MAN SE SHAADI KRNE KE LIYE TYAR HO JAUGI TAB KRA DENA ...JIS MARZI AAP KAHEGI ...ABHI MUJHE GHOOTAN HOTI HAI ...DAR LAGTA HAI KHI DUBARA SE SAPNA NA TOOT JAYE ...PLZ BEEJI VADA KARIYE

BEEJI AFTER SOMETIME : THIK HAI MEI VADA KRTI HU KI JAB TU CHAHEGI TAB TERI SHAADI HOGI ...USSE PHLE KOI BHI SHAADI KI BAAT NHI HOGI ...

JEEVIKA HUG HER BEEJI AND SAID THANKU BEEJI ...

WHEN ALL ELDERS GONE ...HEER ASKED JEEVIKA  : JEEVIKA EK SAWAL PUCHU

JEEVIKA : HA PUCHO NA

HEER : DEKHO MEI NHI JANTI KI TUMHARI SAGAI KYU TOOTI ...LEKIN AJ JO HUA ISSE LAGTA HAI KI  USKA ASAR AJ BHI TUM PAR HAI ...KYA TUM  US LADKE SE PYAAR KRNE LAGI THI ...JISKI VAJAH SE TUM AJ BHI AAGE NI BAD PAAI ...

KYA PTA VO LADKA AAGE BAD GYA HO ...KYU INTEZAAR KR RI HO USKA JO TUMHARA HONE NI VALA ...

HEER WAS TALKING TO JEEVIKA WHILE VIREN EYES WERE ON TO JEEVIKA ONLY

JEEVIKA : HEER  TUMNE SAHI KHA MEI AJ BHI US WAQT SE AAGE BAD NI PAAI ...AJ BHI VO YAADEIN ZINDA HAI KHI MERE DIL MEI ...TUMNE PUCHA THA NA KI KYA US LADKE SE PYAAR KRNE LAGI THI TO HA KRNE LAGI THI USSE PYAAR ...BAHUT ZAYADA...MAGR JAB VO SAPNA TOOTA TO PYAAR KA EHSAAS ADHURA REH GYA ...PTA NI KYU USSE BULNE KI KOSHISH KRTI HU TO BHULA NI PAATI ...ISLIYE SHAYAD USKI JAGAH KISI AUR KO NI MIL PAAI ...AUR SHAYAD KABHI MILEGE BHI NI ...

HEER : MGR ESE PYAAR KA FAIYA BHI KYA KYA PTA VO AAGE BAD GYA HO

JEEVIKA :  NHI MEI JANTI HU VO AAGE NI BADA HAI ...VO BHI VHI HAI JHA MEI HU ...SHAYAD KOI EHSAAS YA UMEED AJ BHI HUM DONO KE DIL MEI HAI JO HUMHE AAGE NI BADNE DE RHI ...

HEER : TO PROBLEM KYA HAI

JEEVIKA :  HAALAT ...MAZBOOR HAI HUM DONO KI HUM MIL KR BHI NHI MIL SKTE...HUM APNE GHR VALO KE KHILAF NI JA SKTE...HEER ...HUM DONO APNE PYAAR KO MARNA ZARURI SMJHA...KYUKI HUMARE LIYE HAMARI FAMILY PHLE AATI HAI ...

HEER : TO TUM APNI FAMILY KO EK BAR DUBARA MANALO AUR VO APNI FAMILY KO

JEEVIKA : AGR YEH POSSIBLE HOTA TO BAHUT PHLE HI MANA LETI ...

JEEVIKA : JO HUM DONO KI KISMAT MEI HOGA VHI HOGA ...AGR HUMHE MILNA HOGA TO MIL JAYEGE NHI TO ...LOOKING AT VIREN ...IS ZANAM NA SHI AGLE JANAM ME HUM SAATH HOGE...

VIREN WAS LOOKING AT JEEVIKA WITH PAIN IN HIS EYES FOR LOOSING HER ...

NOW MANVI END UP THIS TOPIC  AND SAID DI CHALO BHAR CHALTE HAI CHAT KHANE YEH SARI BAATEIN TO BAD MEI BHI HO JAYEGI

PREET : HA BHABHI CHALTE HAI

HEER : CHALO THIK TUM SAB LO CHALO MEI FRESH HO KR AATI HU

PREET : BHAI AAP TO CHALO

PREM : A PREET TU CHAL IN SAB KE SSATH MEI HEER KE SAATH AATA HU

PREET : ACHA G LATE MAT HONA LAILA MAJNU ...

PREM : PREET

PREM WENT TO HIS ROOM AND GAVE THUMBS UP TO HEER

PREM THNKU HEER AB KOI CONFUSION NHI SAB CLEAR HO GYA

HEER : HA PREM AGR TUM MUJHE SUBAH NHI BATATE TO SHAYAD  HUMHE KABHI PTA NI CHALTA VIREN HI HAI JEEVIKA KA PYAAR

PREM : HA HEER MUJHE PHLE DOUBT THA BUT AB PURI TARAH CONFIRM HO GYA

HUMHE AB BAS YEH JANNA HAI KI INKI SAGAI TOOTI KYU THI  TAKI YEH PROBLM SOUGHT OUT KRKE YEH DONO MIL JAYE.

YEH DONO TO AAPAS MEI BAAT BHI NI KRTE  : HEER

PREM : HMM

DONO BAAT KAREGE ...DEKHNA TUM AUR VO BHI AJ HI ...

ALL WERE IN MARKET ...

VIREN WAS MOVING BEHIND JEEVIKA AND VIRAT BEHIND MANVI ...

MANVI : DI VO DEKHO SWINGS CHALO NA VO LETE HAI PARK MEI ...CHALO HEER DI AAP BHI CHALO

SUDDEN PREM GOT AN IDEA HE SAID HA CHALO LETE

HEER : PREM MANVI TO BACHO KI TARAH REACT KRTI HAI AUR TUM BHI

PREM : TO KYA HO GYA AJ DUBARA BACHPAN JE LANGE

HEER : OK CHALO

THERE WERE 4 SWINGS ...BOTH PAIRS WERE INFRONT OF EACH OTHER

ON ONE SWING  MANVI SIT , ON SECOND HEER , THIRD JEEVIKA AND ON FORTH PREET

REST SAID HUM SAB KHA BAITHEGE

VIRAT : AE BANDARIYA UTH MUJHE BAITHNA HAI

MANVI  : MEI PHLE AAI THI

VIRAT : KYA BACHO KI TARAH MEI PHLE AAI THI

NAAM LIKHA HAI KYA TUMHARA

MANVI : HA LIKHA HAI KYU KYA KAROGE

JAO JAKR KHI AUR BAITH JAO

VIRAT NOT ARGUING FUTHER AS HE KNEW SHE WILL NOT MOVE SO HI WENT FROM THERE AND STAND WITH VIREN

HEER :  AB JITNE LOG KHADE VO HUM SAB KO SWING KAREGE

PREM : ACHA G KYU

HEER : AB KYA HAI JHOOLA LENE KA MAZA TABHI AATA HAI JAB HUMHARA KOI APNE HUMHE JHOOLA RHA HO

TO  PLZ  JHOOLA DO NA

PREM : OK MADAM AAPKA KAHA SARAKHO PAR

HEER : SO SWEET

PREM : A VIREN TUM JEEVIKA KO JHULA DO ...AB AKELA MEI YEH KARU  AWKWARD LAGTA HAI ...PLZ

FIRSTLY VIREN THOUGHT AND JEEVIKA SEE VIREN

VIREN SAID OK

PREM TO VIRAT : VIRAT TUM MANVI KO JHULA DO

VIRAT : MEI AUR USSE ...MEI NI DENE VALA ...APNE AAP JHUL LEGI ...BANDARIYA KI TARAH

MANVI : MUJHE NI JHULNA ISSE ...MEI AKLE JHUL LUGI

PREET : MUJHE KON JHULA DEGA

DABBU : ARE MEI KIS DIN KAM AAUGA ...AAO PREET BHAIYA MEI AAP KO JHULA DETA HU

ALL PAIRS ARE PUSHING JHULA TO THEM ...VIREN WAS FEELING AWSM AT THAT MOMENT ...HE DOESN'T WANT THAT MOMENT TO BE END ...SAME WISE WITH JEEVIKA

THERE BACKGROUND MUSIC GOES ON PLAYING ...ZINDAGI MEI AJ LAMHE ...

HERE OUR MANVI IS BEING STRUGGLE WITH HERSELF

VIRAT SAW THIS AND SAID IN WITHIN HIMSELF : YEH BANDARIYA KO BAS UCHALNA AATA HAI BAKI JAN PARAN TO HAI NI

MUJHE HI JANA HOGA

SUDDEN MANVI SEE HER SWING IS MOVING WITH SPEED

SHE SAW VIRAT WAS DOING THIS

KYA HUA KYA HUA ...SONG PLAY IN BACK

AS  THIS SCENE WAS ON PREM AND HEER SAW VIREN AND JEEVIKA ...HEER TO PREM : DEKHO KITNE ACHE LAGTE HAI DONO

PREM : HA SHI KHA TUMNE

HERE JEEVIKA WAS FEELING HAPPY FOR THIS MOMENT

BY MISTAKE VIREN HAND TOUCH JEEVIKA WAIST WHILE PUSHING THE SWING

JEEVIKA SUDDEN REACT BY THIS AND FALL FROM THE SWING ...

VIREN : JEEVIKA

JEEVIKA FELL ON GROUND AND CRIED IN PAIN DUE TO INJURY ON HER BACK

ALL LOOK TOWARDS THEM

MANVI SAID DI AND RUSH TO HER WHILE STOPPING HER SWING

VIREN : JEEVIKA  TUM THIK TO HO NA ...

JEEVIKA : VIREN JI AAA...WHILE PUTTING HER HAND TIGHT ON HIS COLLAR

BAHUT DARD HO RHA HAI ...WHILE SHE CRY

MANVI : DI AAPKO KYA HUA ...

WHILE JEEVIKA TRIES TO GET UP SHE CAN'T

JEEVIKA : MUJHSE NHI UTHA JA RHA ...

PREM : LAGTA HAI JEEVIKA KI BACK PAR INJURY HUI HAI

HUMHE ISE LEKE JANA CHAHIYE

HEER : HA TUM THIK KEH RHE HO PREM ...

PREM TO PREET : YEH CHABHI PAKAD AUR GHAADI LEKE AA ...HUM ENTRANCE TAK PAHUNCHTE HAI

PREET : THIK HAI BHAI

PREM : VIREN TUM JEEVIKA KO UTHAO AUR CHALO ENTRANCE TAK ...

VIREN AS HE WAS IN  PAIN DUE TO JEEVIKA'S STATE : HE QUICKLY GOT JEEVIKA IN HIS ARMS

WHILE THIS JEEVIKA CRIED AND  HOLD VIREN MORE DUE TO PAIN

VIREN : KUCH NI JEEVIKA TUM THIK HO JAOGI ...HUM GHR JALDI PAHUNCH JAYEGE

VIREN TO VIRAT ; VIRAT TUM DOCTOR KO PHONE KARO ...MANAN KO PHONE KR

VIRAT : JI BHAI MEI PHONE KRKE USE GHR PAHUNCHNE KO KEHTA HU

MANVI WAS TENSE ...VIRAT SAW THIS AND SAID MANVI KUCH NI HOGA JEEVIKA KO

MANVI  HUG VIRAT WHILE CRYING AND SAID YEH SAB MERI WAJAH SE HUA HAI

NA MEI SWING PAR JANE KO KEHTI AUR NA YEH SAB HOTA

VIRAT : MANVI ISME TUMHARI KOI GALTI NI HAI ...YEH TO EK ACCIDENT THA KISI KE SAATH BHI HO SKTA THA ...CHALO GHR CHALO JEEVIKA JI THIK HO JAYEGI

MANVI : HMM CHALO JALDI CHALTE HAI

IN CAR JEEVIKA WAS SITTING WITH VIREN AND HELD HIS SHIRT TIGHTLY AS SHE DOESN'T WANT TO LEAVE HIM IN THIS STATE...SHE WANT HIM ONLY AT THIS TIME

ALL REACHED HOME

VIEN CARRY JEEVIKA IN HIS ARMS TAKE HER TO THE ROOM  IN DOWNSTAIRS

MANVI : DI AAP THIK TO HAI NA

JEEVIKA : MANU TU PARESHAN MAT HO MEI THIK HU BAS PAIN BAHUT HO RHA HAI

VIRAT  SAID BHAI DOCTOR MANAN AA GAYE

AS SOON DR MANAN CAME  HE CHECKED JEEVIKA

TO GET RELEIF FROM PAIN DR MANAN GAVE JEEVIKA INJECTION ...

WITH THE PAIN SHE IMMEDIATELY HOLD VIREN ARM TIGHT AND MANVI IN FEAR OF INJECTION HOLD VIRAT ARM

VIRAT WAS SEEING MANVI AT THAT TIME

AND VIREN WAS SEEING JEVIKA WITH CONCERN IN HIS EYES

PREM WAS SEEING VIRIKA...AND SMILING FOR THE LOVE THEY HAVE FOR EACH OTHER

VIRAT TO MANVI : MANVI  TUMHARI DI KO KUCH NHI HUA HAI VO THIK HAI ...

MANVI : HMMM

VIRAT : MUJHE NI PTA THA KI TUMHE MERA HAATH PAKADNA ITNA ACHA LAGTA HAI

MANVI : KYA

VIRAT ROLL HIS EYES DOWN AND SHE SAW

SHE IMMEDIATELY  TAKE HER HANDS BACK ...AND SAID SORRY

VIRAT : ITS OK BANDARIYA

VAISE BHI BANDR HAR JAGAH UCHALTE HI REHTE HAI

MANVI : TUM ...TUMHE TO MEI BAAD MEI DEKH LUGI ABHI MERE LIYE MERI DI IMP HAI

AFTER MANAN LEFT VIREN GAVE JEEVIKA BLANKET AND SAID TAKE REST ...WHILE GONG IN SLOW MOTION THERE HANDS ARE APART AND MUSIC WAS ON

SOON AT HOME EVRYONE GOT TO KNOW ABOUT JEEVIKA INJURY ...

BEEJI SAID JEEVIKA TAKE REST TILL U GET ALL FINE

PREM : BEEJI MEINE TO KUCH NHI KIA JO KIA VIREN NE KIA ...VIREN NE TIME PAR JEEVIKA KO GHR LE AAYA VARNA INJURY AUR BARD SKTI THI ...

BEEJI : THNKU VIREN BETA

VIREN : NHI BEEJI ISME THANKU KI KOI BAT NHI

BEEJI : ACHA VIREN , VIRAT AUR PREET TUM TEENO AJ UPAR JEEVIKA KE ROOM MEI SO JAO ...JEEVIKA AJ DOWNSTAIRS ROOM MEI SO JAYEGI MANVI KE SAATH

VIREN : KOI BAAT NHI BEEJI HUM SO JAYEGE UPAR VALE ROOM MEI

ALL HEAD TOWARDS TO THEIR ROOM

VIREN : MEI EK BAR JEEVIKA KO DEKH KE AATA HU ...PHIR SONE JAUGA

VIREN : MANVI KYA MEI EK BAR JEEVIKA SE MIL SKTA HU

MANVI : JI ISME PUCHNE VALI KYA BAT HAI ...AAP MIL SKTE HAI

VIREN SAW JEEVIKA SLEEPING AND  SAID GOOD NIGHT AND MOVE TOWARDS HIS ROOM

WHEN VIREN REACH JEEVIKA ROOM BOTH BOYS HAD GONE TO SLEEP ...BUT VIREN  EYES ARE NOT SLEEPY SO HE STAND NEAR WINDOW

COOL BREEZE WAS COMING FROM OUTSIDE ...AND HE RECALL ALL THE TODAYS SWEET MOMENTS WID JEEVIKA

SUDDEN HIS EYES MOVE TOWARDS THE DIARY ON THE TABLE

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
loved the whole update
liked virika scene
amazing
superb
fantastic
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
okay so u updated after ages 
thank u for the update
or i should really start spamming hard
talking about the up[date 
this was fab!!!
i really love all the things
specially viren and jeevika's part
you know what i love his totally
thank u 
please keep continuing 
update super soon😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing update 
hope virika meet soon 
loved it 
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Posted: 9 years ago
fantastic update
so swt of prem n heer they r trying to unite virika
aww loved all the virika moments
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Posted: 9 years ago
aww thats soo cute!!!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aww so fabulous update
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Posted: 9 years ago

Part 8

Viren   eyes  move  towards  the diary  on the table .  He  pick up the diary and read the name its Jeevika diary .  Viren in his mind Jeevika diary bhi likhti hai mujhe kabhi btya bhi nhi .  Dekhe kya likha hai isme , mgr ese uski bina permission se diary panda achi bat ni hai ...mgr  ...hmmm chalo padlete hai ...bad mei use btaduga...sorry jeevika tumhari permission ke bagair diary pad rha hu ...

He start reading from the first page when she has met first time viren ...she wrote :  ganga maiya mujhe ni pta ki aj mujhse milne kon aa rha hai ...mei to yeh bhi ni janti ki vo ladka hai kon , dikhne mei kaisa hai , kya use mei pasand aaugi bhi ya ni ...hey ganga maiya mere liye job hi aaaye bas itni dua krna ki vo insane dil ka acha ho ...aur  mujhe smjhe.

Yeh manvi  bhi na pagal hai ...pta ni apni harkato se sab ko pareshan krti hai ...aj to us ladki ne beeji se dant padva hi deni thi agr hum thodi der aur late ho jate. Jab mei us ladke ke kadmo mei giri mujhe laga ab to mei gai ...syad vo ghar walo ko sab kuch bta dega...mgr jab usne mujhe uthaya aur humne ek dusre ko dekha  to esa lga ki vo pal vhi ruk jaye. Uskii aankhao mei itni masumiyat thi ki dil krta tha ki use dekhti  rahu ...jab upar terrace par use mili  to pta chala ki vo viren nhi virat hai ...par dil manne ko tyar ni tha ...jodiya to upar se bnke aati hai na to jis ke saath bnani hogi ban jayegi ...

Viren turn next page

Ganga maiya yeh kya meine jo socha vo ho gya vo ladka virat ni viren hai ...mgr use kaisa pta laga ki mei jeevika hu manvi nhi ...hmmm beeji ne btaya tha ki vo ek lawyer hai shyad usne hamara prank pakad liya...mgr unhone bhi to galat kiya na ...

Viren laugh at this line

While reading the pages he came to that page where both lifes took a turning point.

Jeevika wrote :  mummy papa kash aap aj yha hote ...to yeh sab kabhi ni hota...esa kyu hua kya galti thi isme hamari ... aap hamare saath ni ho mgr aapki kuch yaadein to hai ...kya unhe apne saath  rakhna gunnah  hai  kya ...swamini bua g yeh kyu nhi smj ri hai ki mera aapka vo haar pehna kyu zaruri hai ...aj tak aapki beti aapke pyaar se dur rahi ...aur jab lga ki aap us haar ke zariye mere saath rahegi vo bhi munkin ni hai kya...beeji ne swamini bua ko bahut manaya mgr uhne isme apni bezati lagi ...kyu mumma kyu ...mei  viren ji se dur nhi reh skti ...syad unse dur hokr aapki beti nhi jee payegi ...pyaar krte hai hum viren ji se ...bahut zayada ...aap hi to kehte the ki pyaar ek baar hota dubara nhi ...plz kuch to kariye na aap to bhagwan ji ke paas hai na uhne kahiye na koi chamtkar krne ko shyad bua g maan jaye. Viren ji ne meri zindagi mei aakr mujhe khushiya di hai ...plz mujhe unse dur mat kariye ...she wrote this while having tears in her eyes which flown down on paper and it kept remarks till now on that papr.

Viren  was hurt by all ths ...

Sad music was plying on back and the flashbacks r been seen ...of the separation moment d the cute moments spend by both of them .

After that jeevika left writing dairy ...next dairy is been written on when viren came to there home with prem

Hey ganga maiya , mumy papa yeh kon c pariksha le rhe ho aap meri ...meine abhi khud ko ache se smbhala bhi nhi tha ki aap ne phir se use mere samne lake khada kr dia

Ek bar to dil kia ki duard kr usko apni bahao mei bhr lu mgr jab piche mud ke dekha to sapna tutta hua nazar aaya...

Kyu bhagwan g aapne viren ko kyu mere samne le aaye...

Mujhe mazbut bnana hoga ...mei tut nhi skti ...

Vaise ek baat batau mummy papa viren g aj bhi vaise hi hai jaise phle the ...mgr pta nhi ki  in 6 mahino mei aage bad pai hai ya vhi hai jaha mei hu ...

Mei  apne aap ko sirf viren g ke saath hi dekh skti hu ...aur kisi ko unki jagah nhi de paugi ...aj bhi aapki  jeevika viren g se bahut pyaar krti hai ...mei janti hu maa yeh sirf ek sapna hi reh jayega ...yeh kabhi hakikat mei nhi ban skta ...

Viren can't read more he close the diary d put close to his heart ...and talk to himself ...m sorry jeevika mei bhi to tumhare bina nhi ji skta ...mei aj bhi tumse hi pyaar krta hu ...janti ho jab aj subah tumhare liye shaadi ka rishta aaya to mujhe lga ki mei tumhe kho dia hamesha ke liye...i had lost u ...mei janta hu tumhe pana mera khwab hai magr paa nhi skta ...agr esa nhi hota to kam se kam tum ek bahut acha ladka deserve krti ho ...jo tumhe bahut pyaar kare aur hamesha khush rakhe...love u jeevika...

Soon next day arrives...sun rays are flown on jeevika eyes d she got up ...while getting up she has some pain through which she can't stand properly ...while moving two steps she was about to fall sudden two hands hold her from falling down ...when she look up she saw viren .both look into each eyes for two minutes ..sudden jeevika came back d viren also ...viren properly stand her on her feet d asked about his injury ...jeevika said she is fine but little bit pain has been there.

Viren said ok now u take rest d i will see u latr ...

Jeevika : viren g

Viren : ha kya hua tumhe kuch chahiye

Jeevika : nhi vo darasal thanku for saving me

Viren : thanku ki koi baat nhi hai ..yeh jo kuch bhi hua jane anjanne meri wajah se hua ...na galti se mera haath tumhari waist par lgta aur na hi tum achank se ghabrakr unbalance hokr girti ...

Jeevika : isme aapki koi galti nhi hai viren g ...plz don't be sorry

Viren ; hmm chalo ab tum rest karo

Jeevika : hmmm

 

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Posted: 9 years ago
wow!
yipee!! me first!!
it was so perfect!
amazing! <3
the dairy !
awwiieee i was completely awestruck!
want to see virka together badly now!
they love eachother so much
pure love <3
awesome!
continue soon 
plzz
or i will spam really hard!!
Edited by sweet_aayushi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely update 
liked it 
nice 
hope they meet soon 
continue soon
waiting 
:)