MG:OS HOme $weet hOme! [completed] pg 10

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Concept:Geet & Maan are happy married couple. Maan loves to travel & want 2 see the whole world whereas Geet don't love to travel much but can't say no to maan.geet always try to avoid expanses of going out but after every 6 months maan takes her to somenor the other place. Maan is an engineer in top one of the most company while geet use to work b4 bt left job as she preferred to be a house wife. they are settled in Delhi & stay alone away 4m family.

It ws morning geet was on phone. Maan was doing out 4 jogging. Geet was talking to daadi.
Geet:morning daadi kase ho aap.
Daadi:thik hu beta aap batao aap aur maan kasey ho.
Geet:hum bhi thik hai daadi.aapka knee pain thoda kaam hua kya wo medicine se jo last week meeney di thi aapko.
Daadi:thoda kaam hai beta par itz f9.
Geet:hmm...aapne breakfast kar liya.
Daadi:haan beta kar liya tumari saas ne aaj aacha breakfast banaya tha.
Geet:oh...hehehe...daadi aap bhi na...wo hamesha aacha khana banati hai aap hi hamesha usmey kuch na kuch fault nikalti hai...
Daadi:haan beta aab ye budi lady kya karey...sugar nahi khana jada salt nahi khana...little food khao aur pata nahi kya kya...
Geet:daadi kuch hi dino ki tua baat hai aap aachi hi jao fir mey aur maa milkar aapki saari favorite dishes aapko banakar khilayegey...
Daadi:haan beta...jaroor.
Geet:daadi maa mey phone rakhati hu shayad maan aa gaye unke liye breakfast bana hai.
Daadi:babaji tum dono ko sada sukhi rakhey beta god bless u.
Geet:aur aapko bhi babaji jaldi se thik kar dey...
Daadi:heheh... jaroor beta...chalo jaldi merey potey key liye breakfast banao nahi tua wo bhuka chala jayega.
Geet:ohk daadi bye love u...
Geet cuts the call & maan comes from behind & hugs her.
Maan:kisko love u bol rahi thi...kahi kuch tumara chakar nahi chal raha na kissi aur key sath..
Geet turns & put her hand around his neck.
Geet:ji chal raha hai kya kar logey...
Geet smirk & smiles.
Maan:aacha kya kar logey abhi bata hu kya kar luga.
Maan start tickling her & she starts running maan try to catch her but every time she got escaped frm his hand.
Atlast geet got tried & falls on bed, maan comes behind her & lands .
Maan:geet I won't leave u...
Maan captures her & takes her lips in his.they had a passionate moment & geet pushd him.
Geet:Maan mujhe breakfast bana hai aapki office nahi jana kya...
Maan:na...
Geet:par kyu...
Maan:kyu ki hum aaj shopping ja rahey hai aur um kaal manali jane waley hai...
Geet:kya...manali...but maan hum 6months pheley hi London jakar aaye hai tua itne jaldi wapas kyu...
Aur kitna kharch hoga nahi hum nahi ja rahey hai...
Maan:par geet...
Geet:nahi maan...
She was abut 2 go wen maan held her..
Maan:geet listen 2 me...see I hv a vry gud salary whch can take our expanses & u don't hv 2 worry abut dem baba I m der with u tua y are u thinking dis things...just leave dem..
Geet:maan aap samaj nahi rahey ho nw we can enjoy bt 1ce baby comes wht will u do...now we are 2 but aftr few yrz we would be 3 tua expanses badega aur agar abhi saving nahi ki tua baad mey kya karegey batayiye..
Maan:mini come on...I do saving also every month I put 10000   as saving I give u 20000 4 households & other expanses count another 30000 & baki bachi salary goes 2 my account whch I store coz I love 2 travel & I hv passion 4 it...& if u don't want 2 cum then tell me I will go 4m next time alone only bt I can't leave my passion.
Geet:maan y r u shouting. ...u could talk properly also.
Maan:ye hamesha ka hai...arey y r u so much worried 4 money yaar jab I earn 1lkh per month still u say dat saving karni hai saving karni hai...kitni saving karogi yaar...tum save karti ho mey kartha hu bt still daam u think dat we do lot of expanses. ..
Geet got tears in her eyes
Geet:maan I m a lady u won't understand. ...
Just by saying dis she went to kitchen.
Maan without eating breakfast went 2 office. Geet felt very bad.she felt guilty dat coz of hr her husband went out without having breakfast.


It ws late night wen maan came home he ws very tiered lot of work & den morning fight with geet.
He rang d door bell but no one open the door.he again rang the bell & maid open the door.
Maid: sorry sahab wo gas phey khana pakarahi thi tua door bell sunai nahi di.
Maan:hmmm...wo Geet kaha hai
Maid:sahab madam yua abhi thak ghar wapas nahi aayi hai...
Maan: ghar wapas naji aaui matlab.
Maid:dhopahar ko hi gaadi lekar bhar gayi hai.
Maan:wht...ohk tum jao...
Maan look at his watch it ws 11:30pm itz not safe so late in delhi. He took his cell out & was abut 2 call wen car was horned.
Maan immediately went out...
Maan saw geet she was with lot of bags in her hand..
Geet:maan yesey kya dekh rahey ho bags uthao...
Maan:haan haan uthata hu...
He came over der & took few bags 4m her hand...he ws very confused where Geet went & y so many bags & all...
They came inside...maid got water 4 geet...geet was vry tiered.
Geet:haan kitni shopping karni padi mujhe aakeley...tumney aapna phone kyu switch off kara tha...
Geet saw maan with angry eyes.
Maan:wo wo...mujhe kaam tha...
Geet:oh kaam tha...aur kal jo jana hai uska kaam koa kareyga...
Maan:kya...
Geet:mene half packing kari hai abhi thodi baki hai aur waha bhoat thand hogi tua thodey warm clothes bhi pack karney hai...chalo jaldi packing karni hao...wasey flight kaab ki hai...
Maan:kya...
Geet:flight kaam ki hai...
Maan:wo...mene cancel kar di...
Geet:kya...wo no par kyu...
Maan:wo tumne mana kiya isliye...
Geet:abhi mey kharahi hu jao wapas book karo...
Maan:nahi ho sakti...
Geet:kyu...
Maan:wo last tickets thi...
Geet:maan I will kill u...
Maan:arey aab meney kya kiya...
Geet:uff...ok w8...
Geet call sum1 & den comes. .
Geet:ohk we are going...
Maan:wht but how...
Geet:by train...
Maan:wht no wayz...
Geet:maan...
Maan:geet r u out of ur mind I mean train...plze hum next time chaley jayegey...4get it...
Geet:maan now u are coming otherwise I m going alone...
Maann:bt geet...
Geet:ohk I m going alone kal subhey ki train hai 8'o clock.
Maan:hmm...no w8 even I m cuming...
Geet:datz better chalo...aab pack karna hai..
Maan:hmm...
Maan was still a bit upset but den he can't say more & upset geet more...so he thought 2 go with d flow.
Geet:maan aapne dinner kar liya kya...
Maan:nahi geet wo mey bhi aabhi aya...
Geet:ohk aap jake fresh ho jayiye mey khana lagati hu...
Maan :hmmm...
Maan went to room to take bath even geet arranged the food & got fresh.
Maan came out.he saw geet   was wiping her face & hv changed her clothes.
Maan just gave geet a smile & went near
wardrobe 2 take clothes.
Geet smiles back & cums near him & hugs him.
Geet: aabhi taak naraz ho kya...
Maan ws silent. Geet turns maan to face her.he was looking down. Geet cupped his face.
Geet:maan look at me..
Geet:maan meney subhey jo bhi bola wo sab issliye bola kyuki I care 4 u...I care 4 r future I care abut us...aftr few yrz we would be planning 4 responsibility wht if we couldn't take it properly. ..
Maan immediately nodes as no..
Geet:maan I m nt saying dat we won't b able...but we shuld take control 2 r expanses although u earn a gud annual amount bt dis is not a end na dia is our start & at r start itself we r spoiling r habits.
Maan I m nt even against ur travel wala passion but I just wanted dat last time we went to so many places & it ws just 6 months bck...we did spend a lot...tua I told...hv I ever said dat we shuld nt go I m alwayz with u bt dis time I went against coz it was the need of time it was time to make u understand.
Maan u wanted to cum 2 Delhi 4 ur dream job & I supported u.we came her we settled our family...maan maa papa don't expect a lot 4m u coz dev bhai is wiith dem & he is elder 2 u bt maan we do hv responsibility 2wards them..daadi is nt well I now a day's tua we should support dem...
Dev bhai takes all responsibility bt u r also a member maan we hv 2 show responsibility.
Geetz eyes got moist.
Maan nodes as don't cry...he peck her forehead.
Maan:geet I m sorry...wo my ego came between us...I thought dat u think dat I m not even capable 2 take ur responsibility...I thought u r upset coz of me...I love u bas u no na I take time 2 understand & u alwayz do it so...plze I m really sorry.
Maaf kar do geet...I m really sorry.
Geet nodes as don't say lke dat...
Geet:maan aaj jo hua 4get it we are strength of each other it cannot break.
Geet hugz Maan & maan hugs geet. .
Maan:ohk chalo khana khate hai I m vey hungry.
Geet:maan u ate sumthng In office or not.
Maan:hmm...
Geet:chalo fir dinner karte hai...
Maan:geet u ate or nt...
Geet:hmmm..
Maan:aaj kya banaya hai...
Geet:aamm...ur favorite paneer makhai...aur roti with thoda sa jeera.
Maan nodes & smiles.
Geet & maan ate der dinner & also packed there bags & all set to go & explore manali..
Next morning geet getz up early & make sum sandwich 4 both & takes sum juice with dem...
Geet wear a small knee length printed midi with a Jean jacket on it while maan wares a cargo with a plain t-shirt & a checks shirt on it.
Both just look like a college going couple.
Train came & maan kept der baggage in there compartment.
Maan:geet I would be travelling in train 4 2nd time..
Geet:really aapne pheley train mey travel nahi kiya..
Maan:kiya tha 1ce with frnds in college we went 2 Gujarat dat time...it ws beautiful. ..
Geet:hmm...geet smiles.
Coz as maan recollect his experience der was a glow on his face...
In there compartment there were few more pple...ornu can say college student...
They were 2 girls & 2boyz..
1 gal came der & sat beside maan.
Girl:hey this is aditi...aditi sehgal...
Maan:hmm...maan maan Khurana. .
Aditi:nce name...wasey nce body 2...gym jate ho...so u r in college r8...
Maan:amm...hahaha...nt college amm...bt I do job in Delhi.
Aditi:wht really...I mean u don't look lke...wowo...amazing. .
Maan:thank u...
& on d other hand geet was jealous.
Maan smirk & smiles.
Maan:meet her she is geet my...my wife...
Geet smiles. ..
Aditi:wht u r married. ...wowo dude itz a huge shock. ..nor u look married.
Geet:bt we are r8 maan...
Aditi smiles on dis..
Till den a boy comes. .
He takes geets hand
Boy:hey beautiful. ...ur name..
Geet:geet...geet Khurana.
Boy:wow...cute name just music. ...wasey hi kabir...kabir thapar...
Kabir:hv I seen u sumwhere b4...amm...kunals wedding. ..r8..
Geet:no..
Kabir...hmm...k
Geet:kabir wo ur seat...
B4 geet could speak.
Kabir:yes I no tumarey pass hai...
He comes close to geet & sitz.
Maan getz up ...seeing maan getting up even geet getz up.
Maan:hmm...ur seat is here datz mine seat near my wife..
Kabir looks at geet den notice dat she had sindoor on hr forehead. .
Kabir: Aditi naina aur arjun kaha par hai...
Aditi:kabir wo naina ko help kar raha hai baggage ke liye...
Kabir:ohk I will come...

Then there journey starts to manali. ..



At night,
Geet maan were sitting on 1seat rahul sitting on the floor & aditi naina & kabir on other seat.
Kabir:chalo truth & dare khaltey hai.

Rahul:I m in...
Aditi:even I m...
Geet:even me...
Maan:hmm...
Naina:no...
Maan:yes no...
Kabir & geet together.
Geet:maan...
Kabir:naina...
Geet & Kabir give high five 2 each other.
Maan:ohk...
Kabir:gud bro...
Geet:naina...
Naina:ohk...

They start playing.
1st trun cumz to kabir & naina...were kabir choose dare..
Naina:tua kabir...amm...hmm...u will...
Kabir:I wil...
Naina:u will kiss a girls cheek in next 5mins...
Kabir:hm...nt bad naughty naina...
Naina:ur time start nw...
Kabir ws looking here & der bt der was no gal cuming...
Naina:kabir ur count start...nw...10...9...8...7...6...5...
Kabir ws confused he saw geet sitting near him & maan was nt looking at dem so he kissed her cheek.
Geet did a o face...
& just den maan punch kabir. ..
Geet:maan...no
Maan:how dare u...
Kabir: dude sorry yaar wo dare tha bro chill...
Maan: chill meri biwi ko kabse dekh raha hu tu chance maar raha hai...aur chill. .bull shit. .

Part 2:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/88446555 Edited by nimi216 - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice start ...

Waiting for mre part
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Posted: 10 years ago
great start😊
thanks for the pm
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very nice start...

Maan has habit of spending too much on travel...it is his passion but Geet is worried for future...waise achchi couple aise hi hote hain tabhi balance bana rehta hai...agar dono kharcheele honge tou paise nahin bachenge and agar dono kanjoos honge to life ko enjoy nahin kar sakte...

they are travelling by train and met some collage going boys and girls...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome
loved it
maan habit of travelling
geet not that much happy
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey waitng for next update
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nice 
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
that was so sweet start..
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amazing start
luvd it
toh maan ko travelling ka bahut passion hai aur woh unme bahut paise bhi spend karta hai par humaari geet ko hai ki unhe itte expenses nahi kharchane chahiye thode si saving bhi karni chahiye nd maan get get angry with geet...toh baad mein geet ne maan ko samjhaya aur wo samajh bhi gya aur last mein maan ne kya punch mara hai kabir ko too gud
thanks for the pm 
update soon