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jinaku Senior Member
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Posted: 07 July 2013 at 4:10am | IP Logged
Great update !!!! ClapClapClap
ShockedMysterious TitleWink

AngryoH Virat is so dammn cruel 2 maanviShocked

so sad abt herCry... hope u end tis os with a happpy noteTongue


Edited by jinaku - 07 July 2013 at 4:10am
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UpDaTe sOon Day Dreaming

WaItIng 4 tHE NexT pArtWinkWinkWink
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Posted: 07 July 2013 at 5:22am | IP Logged
thnks guyz for comments and likes lol i was thinking to turn this os in to ff so i wanted to know ur thoughts but remember ff means more cruelty and os mean may be no happy ending lol ehehehe so choice is urs now time for teaser will update today but before tht teaser
 

Teaser

''congratulation mrs.vadhera u r pregnant'' said doctor she was numb don't know how to react she was lifeless mass but when she touched her tummy she felt her heart also beat she is human and their is life inside her this child may be change him it was ray hope for her...
(don't get ur hopes high people)
 Tongue

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''viraat m pregnant with ur child'' her words broken her (nope i didn't made any mistake it is her onlyBig smile)
 
see u guyz in update thn 
LOL


Edited by copypaste - 07 July 2013 at 5:27am

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Posted: 07 July 2013 at 5:45am | IP Logged
manvi is pregnant.. i doubt if that will change their relationship.. cuz manvi's bro abandoned virat's sis wen she was pregnant... mayb he will torture her more... waiting for the update..

& wat os. means no happy ending..thn  turn it into FF  ... loving the story.. but want a happy ending.. afterall i can't see virman like this..

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HalkatJawaani Senior Member
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Posted: 07 July 2013 at 5:46am | IP Logged
Wow!

Another Os Uzma

Nice Update!

But Y Does Maanvi Have To suffer...
Plz Make Sure It Has A Happy Ending!!

Cont Soon N Pm Me.. X

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Posted: 07 July 2013 at 5:52am | IP Logged
And U Have To Make It Into A Ff No Matter What!

Oh God Maanvi Pregnant Now Virat Is Definatly Going To Torture Her!!

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Posted: 07 July 2013 at 6:09am | IP Logged
Hwww superb twist chhe...i wud suggest to make its ss...think abt it uzi...i loved this concept...so cont soon

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Posted: 07 July 2013 at 6:17am | IP Logged
Wow!nice teaser...waiting to knw virats reaction

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