When protector turns predator-VM-SS-Teaser - Page 3

Syed695

@Syed695

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Posted: 10 years ago

Very different Concept..Waiting for next.!

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897122

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Posted: 10 years ago

Its amazing
Different concept. ...waiting for next
Plz pm me when u update

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lina

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Posted: 10 years ago

Virat is so different in this story. I was shocked when I found that Virat was the one who forced himself on Manvi. Plzzz continue soon, your story is really interesting😊

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Bhabani90

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Posted: 10 years ago

The title drew me to read it at this hour. A revengeful beginning and is so diffrnt. Where is manvi's bro find hin n torture hin Virat and begin a sweet life with mannu. Update soon waitng for more.

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jinaku

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Posted: 10 years ago

Great update !!!! 👏👏👏

😲Mysterious Title😉

😡oH Virat is so dammn cruel 2 maanvi😲

so sad abt her😭... hope u end tis os with a happpy note😛

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jinaku

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Posted: 10 years ago

UpDaTe sOon

WaItIng 4 tHE NexT pArt😉😉😉

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669174

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Posted: 10 years ago

thnks guyz for comments and likes lol i was thinking to turn this os in to ff so i wanted to know ur thoughts but remember ff means more cruelty and os mean may be no happy ending lol ehehehe so choice is urs now time for teaser will update today but before tht teaser

Teaser

''congratulation mrs.vadhera u r pregnant'' said doctor she was numb don't know how to react she was lifeless mass but when she touched her tummy she felt her heart also beat she is human and their is life inside her this child may be change him it was ray hope for her...

(don't get ur hopes high people) 😛

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''viraat m pregnant with ur child'' her words broken her (nope i didn't made any mistake it is her only😃)

see u guyz in update thn 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago

manvi is pregnant.. i doubt if that will change their relationship.. cuz manvi's bro abandoned virat's sis wen she was pregnant... mayb he will torture her more... waiting for the update..

& wat os. means no happy ending..thn turn it into FF ... loving the story.. but want a happy ending.. afterall i can't see virman like this..

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