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SwaRon SS- Unchained Hearts|chapter four-Page 16|

Legilimens. IF-Rockerz

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SwaRon SS- Unchained Hearts.

Off with my blabbering!

Hey guys! Remember me? 

I am someone who has
torture you with stories like Ishq wala love, incomplete love, partially
tortured with chalk and cheese and my one shots! 

torture you with another story named unchained hearts.

I am gonna update this jaldi jaldi! Pakka! :D
So here you go with
part one. At the end of which you have to make a decision about reading this
story further or not.

For PMs, add me to your buddy list. 

Here you go with chapter one!

"How dare you!" Sharon Rai Prakash
frowned at a 19 year old boy who by mistakenly hit her. 

"I did it by mistake, miss attitude
queen." The calm 19 year old boy answered. 

"Don't you dare call me that!" She
said, still frowning. "And don't you dare try to be over smart with me." 

"I'm not." He said calmly. "I'm just
stating the facts." 

"Guys stop it! For the last time both
of you are on a trip here and you are not supposed to argue here."

"Tell this jerk to stop!" Sharon said loudly.

"You started yelling at me for no
apparent reason! That's not my fault." 

"You bumped into me and hit me!" She

"It was by mistake!"

"Stop it guys!" Rey finally came
between them. "Are you two kids? Don't you know how to behave properly? We have
to wait here until some help comes. Okay? Now please be patient." 

They were on a college trip to
Manali. Four days into the trip, they were divided in teams and asked to collect
information about the place. Educational trip it was, after all. 

Sharon and her best friend Rey, and
her best enemy Swayam, the 19 year old guy who just a few seconds back had an
argument with her for no reason at all, were co incidentally in the same group.
And the group consisted of only three of them since no one else had volunteered
to venture into remote and inhabited parts of the city. 

It was night, precisely 9 pm and
three of them were very hungry. They didn't know the way back to their hotel
since the city was totally unknown to them. They were wandering for a long time
in search of something worthwhile but to no avail. 

"I'll go and get some help." Rey said after some time.

"That's what we are doing Rey. Trying
to search for help." 

"Wait.. I think we should divide

"How dare you say that Rey? I am a
girl and I shouldn't be the one roaming all alone at this hour in a totally
unknown city." Sharon said. 

"Okay if you don't want to roam
alone, I'll go alone and you two go in the opposite direction. If any one of us
gets help, we'll meet here again okay? We remember this place now right? You
see this tree?? 

"Rey this is a baddd idea." Swayam
said stressing on the word bad. "I am not gonna stay here with this girl."

"I have a name." Sharon said giving
him a stern look. 

"Whatever'. But the point is that I
don't want to spend time with her."

"No one is asking you to spend time
with her Swayam' Just be with her for some time! I'll go and check for help." 

"But Rey'" Sharon and Swayam said in

"No buts people. Please stay here
until I come back." 

Saying this Rey, covered his ears
with his hands leaving behind a very confused Swayam and an utterly disgusted
Sharon behind.

Although Rey knew his plan was lame,
he only wanted to do a good deed by leaving both of them together. So that they
could get to know each other. And stop hating each other. 

"I'm leaving." Swayam said after a 5
minute hiatus, breaking the silence.

"Where are you going?" Sharon asked.

"Somewhere' away from you." 

"Don't you have any kind of
respect??? Are you freaking kidding me? Do you actually want to leave a girl
behind alone at this hour of night?"

Swayam imitated her by moving his
lips monotonously. "I don't care. You can take care of yourself." He said, not
facing her.

"Right, you know me very well and
hence you are saying that I suppose?" 

"You don't look like a scared cat."
Swayam said, still not facing her.

"I'm not scared." She said, trying to
make him face her.

"Then I should leave!" Swayam
prepared to walk.

"Where are you going?" She asked him
and he stopped on hearing that. "You have nowhere to go to. Neither do you have
any relative here, nor do you know the way back to the hotel." She crossed her

Swayam faced her trying to put up a
"I'm still winning" face.. But she looked more stern than him.

"Okay' I know there are less
possibilities of this working out but we have to make a move together.
Otherwise both of us will be stuck with each other until Rey returns and we
certainly don't want that, do we?"

Sharon subtly shook her head in disappointment.

"Let's walk' In search of help okay?
This would be certainly better than spending the rest of our lives like this."

"Excuse me?" Sharon's brow
corrugated. "Spending the rest of our lives means what?? Would you care to

"No! Let's walk and search for help."

"You are irritating." She said.

"You'll have to tolerate me for more time though." Swayam gave her a smirk.

I completely understand the fact that chapter one had nothing much to give! But as you read further, your mind will answer all the questions about this story! I promise. Stay tuned. :D

P.S If you are genuinely interested in reading, then only add me to your buddy list.. Please remain a consistent reader until this story is finished.

Thank you!Big smile

Edited by Mihi4VruShan - 05 November 2013 at 11:05pm

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Legilimens. IF-Rockerz

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Chapter one- Page one. 

Chapter two-Page six.

Chapter three-Page eleven

Chapter four-Page sixteen

Edited by Mihi4VruShan - 05 November 2013 at 11:00pm

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-spongy- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 3:30am | IP Logged

me first
yipeee Party


the old SWARON EmbarrassedBlushing Wink

nice start


please do continue

and do pm me

would like to read further

thanks for the pm

Edited by -spongy- - 03 July 2013 at 3:59am

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..Aishaa.. IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 3:36am | IP Logged
zk456789 Goldie

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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 3:42am | IP Logged
Nice start
Do continue soon
Thanks for the pm

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sanjana_D3 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 3:44am | IP Logged
Love this SS.

Cant wait for the next part.

I love the way you have portrayed their emotions for each other.

Hopefully it changes soon :)

Please pm me when you update

I have sent you a request :)

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redefininglove Senior Member

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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 3:53am | IP Logged
plz continue soon
do pm me next time!

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SanskritiS IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 4:04am | IP Logged
Amazing start Smile
Swaron hate each other n Rey left them alone to search for help
Continue soon

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