Pehle toh, can we just take a minute to appreciate how you're probably the Antichrist? You're probably sitting in your little den of sin and temptation and cackling right now. Damn it! I'm laughing so hard at how you left a LITERAL cliff hanger that I can't even be frustrated with where you ended!
I'm sorry. I'm just LOL-ing so much right now, I can't.
Coming to the update, .
Whatte fast-paced and fabulous update, J! No really. That was BRILLIANT.
The lovely juxtaposition of Arnav and Khushi's comfort zones. All this while, Khushi has had the upper hand in the political and diplomatic circles that Arnav had suddenly been forced into. He had to acclimatize himself and learn from his mistakes on the go.
And now the tables have turned. Arnav is in his element and Khushi is floundering and struggling.
Whether they admit it or not, they do complement each other perfectly.
I refuse to believe that Arnav's left Khushi behind because he hates her that much. As I've said before, he may have hated her once, but no longer does. It's not hate when you have to remind yourself that you hate someone. He may be very very angry, still. But he will not endanger her LIFE for that.
He's right of course. Not that it'll give Khushi any consolation (or me)! Khushi did do it just to prove a point. And I can't REALLY fault her. Arnav CAN be incredibly infuriating. But do I blame Arnav either? Nope. A long festering hurt can manifest itself in rather juvenile ways.
So it all comes down what went wrong in the past. And I'm as clueless as ever. After my little teletubby outburst, m tink m will wait, ya? And just enjoy the nafrat-wala-intense-attraction-wala ride.
You've confirmed everything I've been confident about. But uske baad, ram jaane. Rather Juhi jaane.
But your writing is fluid, thrilling, and gives a SERIOUS hit of adrenaline. And it makes ME-- the laziest bum on the planet want to get off my ass and do all sorts of (s)exciting things. Spelunking you say? I'm in. (and let's forget about my fairly serious claustrophobia ya?)
M tink Arnav has noticed something rather important and will be back. Like the Terminator.
Sheetal. Pfft. I honestly feel a little sorry for her. It's very easy to fall for a man like ASR and nurse an unrequited crush. And somehow, amidst all this hate and hidden attraction, there really isn't any place for her. And if my hunch is correct, ASR will also use her a little unfairly in the future.
I wonder what Payal's role is though. You really DON'T write anything without reason.
That's it. I can't handle the excitement anymore.
M suggest u post the next chapter soon-ish ya? B4 m go crazy on dis thread?
Edited by Semanti - 03 July 2013 at 8:48am