Dhoka, An Illusion of Eye

 

Dear Readers,

 

Thanks for all your love and support for my previous works.

 

As my previous FF "The Wilted Rose learnt to Smile" came to an end, I have thought of starting a new story named "Dhoka, An Illusion of Eye". Just like my previous two FFs this one also has a strong message associated and might not be for people who like to read simple romantic or happy go lucky sort of stories.

 

Shiv for me might not be an extremely good looking hunk with good height and 6 peck abs like Shidharth Shukla or Ranveer Kapoor or Hritik Roshan. I have come across with many such men in life with no inner charm. My Shiv is "The Man" with a golden heart. A man who is honest, sincere, dutiful, loving and could go to any extent to make his Anandi happy. An ideal man whom every female cherishes as a life partner.

 

Similarly my Jagdish is no Shashank Vyas. He is just an evil character with no name.

 

Unfortunately in real life we can't judge a Shiv and a Jagdish from day one. Unlike the story where we ink these two characters as black and white with their NAMES in real life we won't have a way to forecast "Who is Who". And we should not be judgmental on their looks.

 

My current work is an attempt to warn young females to take their decisions wisely in life. This precious life is a gift of God not to be wasted by crying over the past and the wrong decisions that we made. Courage, honesty, strong determination and intellect could always lead us to a better future. I wish all gals find a true Shiv in their lives.

 

Unlike the characters in BV, my Anandi is a super feminist. She does not forget or forgive as she believes that the character of a human being never ever changes. Just as history, it keeps on repeating itself. True love can not be judged by only passionate encounters at nights. It's much more than that. In my view, soul mate is the one who is with you in your difficult times and never leaves your hands even for a second. And for that I won't mind to choose a guy named as Jagya with the heart of a Shiv over someone named and looks of Shiv with a rotten mind.

 

My characters of Shiv and Anandi are people that I can relate to my own self. My Jagdish would be evil, representing evil in some form or the other. They are simply black and white as characters!!

 

Just like my other FFs, the current one is also based on some real world stories. Thanks to the India Forum members who have PMed me some of their saddest experiences in life. I can not share their names here, but express my whole hearted gratitude for trusting me this much; and also wish others to learn from their mistakes.

 

P.S. Also unlike my other FFs I am going to change the looks of Shiv, Anandi & Jagdish as per the demand of the story. I won't be using any pictures of Shidharth Shukla, Pratyusha or Shashank Vyas for the same.

I had thought of sending this new topic next weekend, however I did it now as I got many PMs for starting a new one pretty soon. This one might be a good news for them.

Please allow me few days till I collect material and send the first chapter.

 

Characters

 

1. Debashree Ghosh / Debbie - 26 yo Software Professional working in London, narrator of the story

2. Anandi Singh -  Delivery head for all European projects for the biggest IT MNC of India

More characters to be introduced later

3. Shivraj Shekhar - Anandi's Husband

4. Jagdish Singh - Anandi's Reporting manager at work

5. Gauri Singh - Jagdish's late wife

 

Index

Ch 1 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3647765&TPN=4&#86928530 

Ch 2 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3647765&TPN=6&#87053625

Ch 3 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3647765&PID=87198346&#87198346

Ch 4 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3647765&TPN=13&#87246043

Ch 5 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3647765&TPN=17&#87299097

Ch 6 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3647765&TPN=21&#87336359

Ch 7 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3647765&TPN=22&#87346547

Ch 8 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3647765&TPN=25&#87382979

Ch 9 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3647765&TPN=28&#87418126

Ch 10 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3647765&PID=87437495&#87437495

Ch 11 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3647765&PID=87462988&#87462988

Ch 12 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3647765&TPN=36&#87500549 

Ch 13 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3647765&TPN=40&#87543064

Ch 14 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3647765&TPN=43&#87580363

Ch 15 (Suspense Unfolds) - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3647765&TPN=47&#87622735 

Ch 16 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3647765&TPN=50&#87659197

Ch 17 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3647765&TPN=54&#87727950

Ch 18 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3647765&TPN=56&#87743125

Ch 19 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3647765&TPN=59&#87776312

Ch 20 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3647765&TPN=61&#87811130

Ch 21 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3647765&TPN=67&#87845107

Ch 22 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3647765&PID=87882772&#87882772

Ch 23 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3647765&TPN=74&#87946844

Ch 24 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3647765&TPN=78&#87967219

Ch 25 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3647765&TPN=83&#88033688

Ch 26 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3647765&TPN=87&#88113710

Ch 27 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3647765&TPN=92&#88153756

Ch 28 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3647765&TPN=97&#88190575

Ch 29 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3647765&TPN=101&#88253241

Ch 30 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3647765&PID=88260391&#88260391

Epilogue - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3647765&TPN=102&#88260453

Edited by Debbiee - 07 August 2013 at 10:50am

Loved the concept Debbie.

All the best, debbie

Thank you dear Debbie to  Pm!

Edited by Bikica - 30 June 2013 at 7:12am

Thanks for PM!!!! 

As always looking forward to hear a story from you.

Ohhh... Dobbie.. I m so so happy.. I always love ur stories.. Nd so happy to hear u that u come up with a new one... .. I love this concept too... Ya no prsn is in the world born with perfection.. Nd with all good qualities... Nd change in one day... Nd the great quality of ur wrting is that ur stories r always base on reality so its touched me lot... Thanx for this nd PM.. I m egaerly waiting for this...

Edited by Manshi - 30 June 2013 at 7:37am