Shades of Love #4: Arnav in Wonderland - Page 4

Originally posted by: ayeshafarhabs

res

wil unres tomoro...xam hai!! :)

unressing!!

 

Woah!! when u started schiozephrenia..i was scared!! i felt so so bad dat in the end it will all be an illusion!!

 

But this is shikha who is writing!!👏 aise kaise ho sakta hai?? so Sanaya is the illusion and Khushi is the reality!! *sigh of relief*

 

And naming her Sanaya was a good idea so we cud imagine khushi n sanny as the same person!! 😉

 

Awesome tale again Shikha!! 😃

 

I love you dammit!!

Originally posted by: 25imrankhan

such a beautiful update    👏

 

touched my heart

 

feel sad for Arnav as a schizophrenia patient

 

but loved the end

 

waiting for more fairytales to come

 

update soon

Originally posted by: LeenaRocks

I am speechless! 

I felt so constricted through out the read psychologically!

This was quite a risky context! I knew i was not gonna get a happily ever after here.. i was prepared for it! but the way it ended ... was beautiful! It could not have had a better one at that !:)

Thanks a lot for the update Shikha! :)

Originally posted by: IPKlover

Shikha, you are a master story-teller...you weave magic with your words. That brought a lump to our throats! Lovely update!!! ❤️

Originally posted by: amri123

hey

Shikha that was just ...wow

you sure do have a way with words

that certainly was a unique twist to a magical fairy tale

great job

thanks for the email😊

Originally posted by: whitehommie

Omg i was waitin since ages for ur next fifty shades of love..
And wat a story it was??
And wat a coincidence it is tday aftrnun i was studyin abt schizophrenia n now i studied a beautiful story regarding the same..
So sanaya was a shadow of khushi that was imprinted in his mind...
And arnav is lucky that he found his love...
He cudnt hav got nicer nanny than her...
Anjali and neal were very supportive and loving..and arnav was such a hero..
I was worried whether dis story wil have khushi as jus his imaginatn or wil she b in real??
And it was real...
Such a cute tale...
Cant wait to read the next one..
Lovely lovely arshified tale

Originally posted by: mastermagician

u have so beautifully brought out each phase of the situation!
amazing! it was so damm brilliant! i was engrossed till the end of the story! everything about it was awesome!

Originally posted by: Arshix144

First of all I have to tell you that what you have just done deserves a standing ovation and a round of applause! So here I go:

Now on to the story, Shikha you have totally blown me away with this one. Who would be brave enough to bring the story of a schizophrenic patient into the fairy tale land and at the same time do full justice to the story and the characters. You did with such ease describing every single emotion he was going through, his paranoia, his pain, his family's concern for him, his own realization of his condition hence not wanting to get close to Khushi thinking she deserved better, just everything was handled brilliantly. Bravo ma'am for taking on such a challenging topic and turning Alice in the wonderland into something totally real yet sticking to what we all love that is a happy ending! 

Through this story we got to see a vulnerable Arnav that is usually very rare, a loving and caring sister, his imaginary friend Sanaya and Khushi. Love how you selected the name Sanaya so we couldn't help but picture Sanaya as Sanaya! That was very clever, heck everything about this story was so cleverly thought out and constructed. I am so damn impressed and proud of you again for this GEM! I won't ramble on and will simply tell you again that: