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Jab We Met- Part18 pg57 : 17/8/2014 (Page 7)

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Posted: 05 July 2013 at 1:34am | IP Logged
i loved ur poems at start they r so amazin  i love poetries n stories !

n lovely start 

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Posted: 05 July 2013 at 4:36am | IP Logged

Wow... thanx for updating so soon... its amazing...Big smile

Rofl... bus stand pe... ye toh gyi kaam se... LOL

Moti is so cute ... poor fellow... nobody cares for his sleep..Tongue

They're definitely going to same place... I hope,, they'll be neighbours there...Wink

I'm loving the flow of story...Cool

This guy.. although asked his sis & she contradicted .. wat he experienced... but he's still in her trance... so ... its more than infatuation.. Day Dreaming

Fix their meeting soon na... I just loved their convo... waiting for another one...Smile

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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 5:58am | IP Logged
woowww updateee sooo sooon...
laga nhi thaaa itni jaldi... bt i was amzinnn diii <
love ur stories..

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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 7:15am | IP Logged
di wonderful update...

loved it all...

waiting for next..

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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 11:06pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by asmaju

Reserved !!!!!


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nams dear did you write this...You got your style back..Those novel wala style ...
I was actually confused about who is this guys and those names gosh you are seriously funny..
I loved all the nick names...
And this seemed like something real..
A bliss of enjoying the place around and that pet..Seemed like a known face around...
The convo between the guy and the sis  I loved it..
Ladka pagal banne wala hai for sure..
ha ha opposites are part of life...Blisss


Thank u soo much jaan Hug

i got my style back ??? Shocked really Embarrassed

nick-names to build confusion in further story Wink

yup real imagination u seee Tongue pet.. ? meri Moti-darling hai wo.. i have known him for 6 years since his birth now! i would know all his tactics and all.. and i would love to write about him!!! Hug hum sab ka jaan hai.. and u obv know that LOL

i wish i too had a brother.. Unhappy

haha bannewala hai? already ban gaya hai.. aage aage dekho hota hai kya ! LOL

love uuu Embarrassed

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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 11:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by luv_arsha

awesome update nams...loved it very much

thank u so much cherry Embarrassed
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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 11:12pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jas112

my god narmada di

wat an amzing update
amzing
truky
luvd it
my god di
undoubtably u r one of the best writers of IF
just luvd this update
di being a girl sumwhere or the other we all r able to connect to it
amzing work di
kudos to u for it
just awesome
keep it up di
do update next part soon
luking foirward to it

aww jas thank u soo much hun! Hug

thats all i wanted.. each and every one of u should connect with the protagonists.. and not just this whole fiction is just to prove Fairy-Tales dosnt actually happen in real life. and when it happens it takes a lot from u and gives the best to u.. thats my point throughout this fiction.. Embarrassed

please do keep ur reviews and likes in this fiction.. i would be really glad Embarrassed

and hope ur doing fine. take care dear Smile
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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 11:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by pradeep_maurya

Awesome

Loved it

Thank u Smile

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