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RANTARA ss part 6 pg 18 (Page 4)

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Posted: 30 June 2013 at 9:34am | IP Logged
amazing

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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 4:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kanishika

Loved it...I can imagine the scene where Raghu looked at her through the mirror...continue soon dear :)
 
i known it was fun even writing itWink

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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 4:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sreeammy

arey yaar, you can write some os regarding misssed call promo - antra watching dancing raghu and then raghu sees antra in the rearview mirror...

 
ya leme think over it .
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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 4:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by DAPS

amazing

 
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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 4:50am | IP Logged
part 2
 
She just walked inside the house and started picking Ishan's school bag and her side bag.
Chalo Ishan, do you wana get late for school , she said to Ishan.
Di Mei toh kabse ready Hu, Ishan came running.
Acha chalo ab jaldi they walked out of the room to find noor appa and mami ji waiting with Ishan's tiffin.
Bye mami , bye apa ab Mei school jaraa Hu, Ishan said .
Beta apna tiffin toh le jao, Noor apa handed him the tiffin.
She gave it to him and he kept it in his bag.
Mamiji Mei Ishan ko school drop kar ke ati Hu, Noor apa ap ma ka khayal rakhna.
Antara and Ishan went out and took an auto to Ishan's school.
She dropped Ishan to his school.
She came out of the school,and had to go for her singing auditions.
It had been a few months since she was in Mumbai, she took this chance to enhance her singing career, her family supported her with that.
"ab auditions ke liye toh abhi time hai, ek kaam karti Hu Jake maa Ki medicines leti Hu" she spoke to her self while walking.
She saw a man walking on the road and aproached him .
"suniye yaha pass Mei koi medical milega?"
"nahi iss road pe toh koi bhi shops nahi hai, dusri side Mei saree shops hai , par uskeliye app ko bhaut age chal ke u turn lena hoga" he explained her helpfully.
"koi bee h ka rasta nahi hai kya ?" she enquired.
"ek rasta hai ,par woh thk nai hai waha ke log thek nai" he told her.
Okay thankyou, she said before leaving.
She decided to take the short cut, itni Subha kaun hoga waha ...mei jaldi se nikal jaungi.
She walked inside the lane,and without looking hear and there walked straight.
She dint know she was making herself fall in trouble.
The area she had walked in was not good at all ,it was another local goons area.
She had a busy day ahead, she had to buy medicines, then go for auditions , after that she had to be back on time so as to pick Ishan from school and take him home.
She walked faster and she saw a few men sitting on a bench , they looked weird.
She dint look at them again, she remembered what that man had told her.
Was that man taking about these people, she thought to her self, the next moment she had the men following her as though they were waiting for her.
She got scared now and started walking fast, with every step she increased her pace of walking.
Even the men did the same, they were literary behind her.
She got hell scared now , she began to run but one of the men caught hold on her and pulled her.
She screamed on top of her voice and pushed him with her bag and ran for her life.
She was in tears by now and was hoping to get away from this palce.
The lane got over and she was now on the main road,but still kept running because those men were following her , the streets were active but no one dared to stop the men .
All of them were just watching Antara run with the goons behind her. She kept running and dint care she was on the wrong way .
She turned to see the goons still follow her, the next she heard a car honk, and she knew she was in front of a fast moving car , not caring about moving she just closed her eyes waiting for the dash.
But to her surprise the vehicle screeched to a halt.
She opened her eyes , and saw the jeep had halted just a few inches from where she stood, she so wished it had not stopped, that would hav saved her from those goons at least.
She turned to see those goons running and about to reach her, hell scared and tired she was in tears when she heard him call her... Antara... It was him yeah it was him it was Raghu.
She looked behind to see him getting down from the jeep and walking to her.
Her happiness knew no bond now , she was just very happy.
She ran to him and hugged him tight, and cried even more bitterly.
Raghu was confused at first but understood wat the situation was soon.
Machmach was also shocked to see Antara in such a state,he knew his Raghu bhai had a soft corner for this girl and that now he wont leave these men
The goons came and stopped when they saw Antara with Raghu.
Antara was so scared and exhausted that she fainted in his arms.
Raghu made her sit in the jeep. The goons knew Raghu and were scared to even move , one of them ran back .
Raghu was least interested in them all he cared was for Antara, she was unconscious.
"machmach pani laa jaldi "he ordered machmach.
Machmach quickly went to a shop and got a bottle of water.
Raghu was furious now, how dare they even think of troubling Antara, his Antara.
Machmach got water, yeh lo bhai he handed Raghu the bottle.
Raghu opened the bottle and sprinkled some water on Antara's face.
She opened her eyes and saw a concerned Raghu and machmach looking at her.
She sat up straight on the seat, Raghu was still starting at her when machmach interrupted him.
"bhai pani pila do"machmach suggested.
Raghu passed her the bottle and she drank the water. 
She again got scared when she saw the goons standing behind Raghu. Raghu followed her gaze and saw the men standing there they seemed scared , machmach came forward.
Ane tum logi ko apni jaan pyari hogi toh ladki se mafi mang lo ab jaldi.
Both the men joined their hands and said , humien maaf kardo humien nahi pata tha k app Raghu bhai ko jante ho.
The third man who had run away came and gave Antara's bag to machmach.
All thee of them ran away quickly ,
Raghu shouted 'ruko tum teeno'
All of them waited when they heard  Raghu.
Tum teeno b age se mere samne ane Ki galti Mat Karna, nahi toh tuhara woh haal karunga Ki ek dusre ko b nai pehchan paoge.
They ran away quickly .
Antara had relaxed by now. When Raghu came to her she got down from the jeep.
Woh Mei sirf medical jana tha , ma Ki medicines lene the, she tried to explain.
'Prescription ' Raghu said without looking at her.
Ha, she looked on confused.
Aree medicines ka prescription do , he said.
She took the bag and removed the prescription and handed it to him.
He walked to the medical and handed the man the prescription and waited, Antara walked to him and waited.
After every thing he dropped her home.

 
guys i hav made this a ss, it will have about 5-6 parts.


Edited by arshiforeve - 06 July 2013 at 4:53am

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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 5:01am | IP Logged
aww interesting niceee ..:D

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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 5:42am | IP Logged
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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 6:21am | IP Logged
liked it ya ...plz send me the index of tis ya...

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