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RANTARA ss part 6 pg 18 (Page 18)

Onlyrantra Senior Member

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Posted: 26 July 2013 at 9:44pm | IP Logged
Love theire convo..superb..well written..update next part soon..cant wait..

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Posted: 08 August 2013 at 6:59am | IP Logged
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Posted: 08 August 2013 at 7:38am | IP Logged
hayyy... lovely convooo...Day Dreaming
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Posted: 09 August 2013 at 6:51am | IP Logged
Wink part 6
i know I'm late,really is the new part ...enjoy
"kya , koi tumhari bhi taang kichai Karta hai" Antara asked him,quite shocked.
"aree ha dekh na , mujhe bhi nahi chodte" Raghu told her.
"par kaun Tha woh"Antara asked.
"aree ab mere bhai Ki shadi hai na, uske liye hum sub Pune mei the, toh wahi sub mere piche pade the " Raghu told her.
"kya kaha sub ne"Antara was curious.
"shadi kar lo " Raghu looked at Antara for a reaction.
"kya " Antara burst out into laughter.
"tum bhi mat shuru ho ad, yeh sub ajji Ki wajah se hai" he told her annoyed.
"oh , par kitna funny sound Karta hai yeh sub" she said walking around .
"acha chalo koi baat nai ab mei jati Hu ghar, kafi late Hua hai , good night" she said and turned to leave.
She had just managed to turn and walk hardly a step when she felt him hold her hand .
It sent shivers in her body, 'oh my god why did he hold my hand, why did he stop me'.
She turned to see him still sitting on the bed and held her hand with one hand and to her surprise he wasn't looking at her instead he was operating his cell phone.
She got annoyed at this and asked him,' kya hai ab ,mera hath chodo na' she spoke looking at him.
'oh ha ' he left her hand ,' teko toh ice cream khani Thi na toh chal na ab' he said finally looking at her.
'ab kitna late Hua hai , ab nai chalenge' Antara spoke.
'tujhe ice cream kahni hai Ki nai' he asked her determined.
'ha khani to hai' she made by sad face.
'toh problem kya hai chalo na' he said getting up from the bed.
'acha chalo chalte hai' she said following him.
Raghu and Antara walked on the empty streets .
'aye miss cal, sun na ' Raghu said hesitant.
'ha kaho , kya hua' Antara nudged him to speak.
'woh agar teko thk nai lagta , late Hua hai toh nai chalte' he completed.
'aree tum ho na mere sath toh koi problem nai ' she said smiling at him.
'matlab mujhse koi problem nai na tujhe' he made hum self clear.
'nahi baba tumse kya problem hoga mujhe ' she said.
Now enjoying their ice creams.
'thanks Raghu, aj bina ice cream khaye mujhe neend h nai ati,ab Mei chain se soo paungi' she spoke happily.
'aree miscal tere bahane meine b kha li na ice cream ' Raghu spoke while enjoying his .
' acha toh ajji kaha hai' she asked finally.
'aji Pune mei hai , shadi attend karne gayi hai, mei bhi aj hi aya ,kal phir se Jana hai 'he told her.
'oh toh tum wapis kab ane wale ho , aur ajji kab ayegi' she was curious.
'aree aji toh aram se ayegi, mei do teen din baad aunga' he informed her.
'teen din ' antara said shocked.
'ha , kyun koi problem hai kya ' he asked.
'nai bas aise hi' she said.
'acha chalo jaldi chalte hai , lagta hai barish ayegi' Raghu said.
'toh kya , kabhi kabhi barish mei bheegna acha hota hai' she said following him.
Suddenly Raghu's phone rang, he received it quickly.
'chintu , kyun Gaya Tu ...ruk nahi sakta Tha kya 2 din' ajji yelled at him.
'aree ajji apne jo kiya woh bhi to galat tha na' he tried to defend himself.
'acha thik ab sub k samne zyada natak nai karungi,khana kya tune" she asked him.
'ha ajji woh Antara ne Kashmiri pulav laya ' he told her.
'woh hai abhi?' ajji inquired .
'hmm' was all he said.
'baat kara meri , Abhi ' ajji demanded.
Aye miss cal, ajji tere se baat karna chahti hai , yeh le he said handling her the phone.
'ajji kaise ho app,...' she inquiried about ajji's health.
While Antara spoke to ajji , ajji invited her over to Pune so as to attend her eldest grand son's wedding ceremony.
Antara couldn't say no to ajji and she had a perfect set to spend time with Raghu.
Par tum q nai le ja rahe mujhe, mujhe ana hai , ajji ne bulaya hai mujhe. She pleaded to Raghu as he wasn't ready to take her with him to Pune.
Please, mujhe ana hai ... She kept trying.
They  had already reached the Basti.
Raghu was not wanting to take her along because he thought she might not like it there and then it would be a problem.
So better not take her along.
But after so much of pleading from her part,he could not be so rude.
'acha thik hai , kal Subha ready rehna' he had hardly completed the sentence.
When Antara came running into him and hugged him with much force.
Thank you thankyou thankyou thankyou much, she said still holding him tight.
Raghu was not at all expecting such a reaction from her, totally shocked he wasn't able to balance him self and slid his hand along Antara's waist.
As soon as his hands slid along her waist, she felt shivers run down her spine.
Raghu indirectly had completed the hug, and now both of them realized with passing of a few minutes what they were doing.
Antara found his embrace more comfortable than any thing else in this world, she felt perfect.
Raghu on the other hand also liked her touch, she felt really soft and irresistible, she perfectly fit in his arms as though they were made for her.
After standing like that for nearly a few minutes, Antara realized what had she done...she opened her eyes in shock.
Raghu also loosened his hold on her, even she slowly left him and moved back.
Their faces were inches apart, it had started raining now, the drops of rain were falling on them, they didn't move .
It was quite a silent moment, Raghu and Antara just found it ackward and as a reaction they just managed to look every were but at each other.
She moved back and so did he, but including them even fate and everything wanted them to be close together, so when Antara moved back her chain was stuck in one of Raghu's shirt buttons.
When she moved back swiftly as a result she came crashing in his arms once again.
This time Raghu held her shoulders so as to balance her and they again stood like that for a moment.
'ab ruk do min , mujhe yeh thik karne de' Raghu said to Antara before she moved.
Antara simply nodded her head and waited .
Raghu carefully removed the chain from his shirt buttons and all the time Antara just started at him.
'hogaya ' he said before looking up to find Antara starting at him.
She quickly looked away and turned.
They walked rest of the distance without much interaction.

Edited by arshiforeve - 09 August 2013 at 7:00am

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BabyHimavari IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 09 August 2013 at 7:19am | IP Logged
wow such a cute and dreamy update.
ice cream,rain.perfect rantara romance.

Edited by ifians - 09 August 2013 at 9:18am
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Posted: 09 August 2013 at 8:30am | IP Logged
awesome update Smile
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Posted: 09 August 2013 at 9:10am | IP Logged
wow antara to pune
chain getting stuck so romantic

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Shimolina Senior Member

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Posted: 09 August 2013 at 11:08am | IP Logged
Wow...rantara...dat.2 in pune...ab toh aaji chintu aur uski dulhan dono.ko chidai gi...lolzz...
Awsm update truly Njoyd it...n plz plz update soon...

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