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RANTARA ss part 6 pg 18 (Page 15)

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Posted: 16 July 2013 at 12:30pm | IP Logged
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Originally posted by jasleen14

Beautifully written ... Just loved this part... eagerly waiting for another part... keep writing dear
thanks a lot

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Posted: 16 July 2013 at 12:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Rose_Tandon

Lovely update... I can imagine the concern Raghu :)
Amazing Writing!! Loved it!! :)
thankyou so much
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Posted: 16 July 2013 at 12:32pm | IP Logged
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Originally posted by VirmanArhi4ever

amazing update 
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Posted: 16 July 2013 at 12:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by arul01

wonderful! loved it a lot! antara singing and raghu listening to it! then antara about to tell her feelings to raghu! just can't wait to read abt that! excited! please update soon! =) totally excited! 
stay tuned for more Wink
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Posted: 16 July 2013 at 12:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by dmegha_PM

Superbb...i loved it.

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Posted: 21 July 2013 at 7:55am | IP Logged
Part 5
Antara was visiting home on weekends only.
She had not met Raghu for a week now. She missed him like hell.
'Aj toh Raghu se mila do Ganesh ji,' she prayed .
She got down from the taxi, and went inside the Basti, everyone was happy to see her and congratulated her.
Once she reached her house and met everyone. She spent the day with talking to Noor appa mami and her mom , she also spent time with her mother.
She played with Ishan for a while, in the evening she went to meet ajji, Raghu's ajji.
She went but one of the servants told her no one was at home so,she got back.
She checked with machmach for Raghu, he told her that Raghu and family had gone to Pune to attend a wedding.
'Kaha jayega , ayega toh ghar h na,' she thought to herself.
After having dinner everyone went to sleep but Antara dint, she waited for Raghu to come .
It was 11:39 and she was very sleepy , she decided to wait outside the house.
She went out and waited for Raghu while listening to music.
Finally after 10 mins she saw Raghu come. Immediately a smile came on her face.
On the other hand Raghu was shocked to see her.
"aree misscal Tu yaha kya kar rahi hai, inta late Hua hai , aub thik toh hai , aunty Ki tabiyat thik na"he asked her worried.
"sub thik hai , mom b thik hai andar soo rahi hai" she answered him quickly.
" toh Tu yaha kya lar rahi hai" he asked her.
"mei tumhara wait kar rahi Thi" she told him.
"kitna late atee ho tum, yeh koi time hai ghar ane ka" she scolded him.
"aree par tujhe kuch kaam Tha kya? He asked her.
" nai waise toh kuch kaam nai Tha , par ab mujhe ice cream khani hai" she made her demand.
"kya Abhi ice cream, dimag toh kharab nai Hua Tera ,mujhe bhook lagi hai" he made a cute face.
"acha toh ek kaam karte hai , kuch khaa lo phir mujhe ice cream khilao" she suggested.
"mujhe pullav khana hai , Abhi " he demanded.
"sachi , Kashmiri pullav khaoge" she said getting exited.
"ha mast hota hai n teri mami ne Diya Tha pichli baat" he told her.
" aj Maine banaya hai " she told him all the more exited.
" aree phir toh risk hai, kahi zeher toh nai milaya tune usmei mere liye" he joked.
"huh?"she faked an angry expression.
"aree mazak,kar raha Hu , tere hath se toh mei zeher bhi kha lu" he joked.
"acha ab zyada natak mat karo aur jaoo, Jake fresh ho jao mei tumhre liye khana lati Hu" she told him before going.
Raghu went home and changed , by the time Antara went and packed food for Raghu and carefully went out without making any noise.
 Raghu had left the door open for Antara to come. She went to the kitchen and served it in a plate and placed it on the dining table .
She waited for him to come, after waiting for 10 mins she decided to go up and check on him.
She went up Gupta his room and knocked the door, but no response.
The door was open so she pushed it slightly to peep in , what she saw got a smile on her face, Raghu was sleeping on the bed .
He was sleeping on his tummy, like a kid .
"he seems to be really very tired, but he was hungry also, its better he has something before sleeping"she spoke to herself.
She went down, heated the pullav in the oven and took it to Raghu's room.
Placing the tray on the table she went to wake up Raghu.
"Raghu, Raghu utho" she tried.
But he didn't respond.
"Raghu utho , pullav kahna hai na tumhe"she tried again.
Now she had no option, she awkwardly shook his hand and tried to wake him.
"aree miscall sonne de na , bahut need ari hai , hum kal ice cream khayenge, Tu ghar Jake soo "he spoke sleepily.
"aree tum khana kaho pehle phir soo jao, utho ab" she spoke quickly.
He got up and sat on the bed , "nahi khana mujhe soone de" he spoke sleepy and irritated.
"tum to Ishan jaise bat kar rahe ho, woh bhi aise h nakhre Karta hai , phir use kilana padta hai" she told him.
"acha toh mujhe bhi khilao , nai toh mei nai khaunga" he was awake now .
" acha mei kila deti Hu " she said.
" toh khila  " he demanded
Antara got the plate and sat next to Raghu , she took the spoon and fed Raghu one bite.
He had it sleepily.
"acha hai , tune h banaaya hai Ki mami ne" he teased her.
"meine h banaya hai , aur zeher bhi milaya hai specifically tumhare liye" she mocked anger feeding him more
"tere hath se toh mei zeher bhi kah lu " he winked at her.
Antara was a big embarrassed at that.
"acha ab yeh lo tum khud h kha lo, neend gayi nai " she said giving him the plate.
"hmm " he said taking it from her and getting back to eating.
Antara started observing his room, it was very simple yet elegant.
She saw his balcony and went there and stood watching the whole Basti could be seen from there even her balcony.
"sachi mei tune bnaya hai kya " he asked her while eating.
"ha , tumhe kya lagta hai Ki mujhe kuch ata nahi" she asked him.
"nai aisi baat nai , acha bana hai iss liye lag raha Tha Ki tumne nai banaya" he said again laughing.
"aj Subha se koi Mila nai kya taang kichne , Ki meri h kich rahe ho" she said annoyed.
"aree kya bolu subhe se,meri tang kichai ho rahi hai " he told her.
"kya , kaun kar raha Tha?" she asked curiously.

I know even you guys are curious, but you have to wait till the next update

Edited by arshiforeve - 21 July 2013 at 7:57am

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Posted: 21 July 2013 at 8:02am | IP Logged
oww their convo was too cute..Embarrassed
lovely update..

Edited by ifians - 21 July 2013 at 8:08am
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Posted: 21 July 2013 at 8:10am | IP Logged
wonderful os 
really loved it
continue soon
do pm me plz

Edited by SONAL30 - 21 July 2013 at 8:15am

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