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RANTARA ss part 6 pg 18 (Page 12)

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Posted: 11 July 2013 at 12:56am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by --Shukti--

Have read all d 3 parts back to back..
Itz such an awesome SS.. Part-3 was so cute.. Raghu laughed his heart out! Really?
Want him to do d same in DDEJ too! I so luv his smile.. :)
continue soon..
Sending u buddy request, pls accept n do pm me when U'll update further
 
thanks a lot

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Posted: 11 July 2013 at 12:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ifians

wow it was awsome...loved rantara's convo...it was so sweet and adorable..
 
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Posted: 11 July 2013 at 12:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tinsel

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Posted: 11 July 2013 at 12:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anshuls

 so sweet!!! continue soon Thumbs Up
 
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,will continue soon Big smile
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Posted: 11 July 2013 at 1:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by larimel22

Beautiful! :)
 
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Posted: 11 July 2013 at 1:34am | IP Logged
Awww so cute update...Please I started reading today..could you always PM whenever you update..Loved it!!

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Posted: 11 July 2013 at 1:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Rose_Tandon

Awww so cute update...Please I started reading today..could you always PM whenever you update..Loved it!!
thankyou, n ya stay tuned for more Wink
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Posted: 11 July 2013 at 6:58am | IP Logged
Part 4
 
The next morning Antara was ready to leave, she had to be there on time , could not afford to be late.
"hey bhagwan ab Mei kya karo, jaldi se mujhe waha Jana hoga nai toh problem hogi" Antara was tended and spoke to herself.
She was really worried now and kept taking to herself.
Just then came a jeep, afcourse it had to be Raghu to Antara's rescue.
Kya Hua teko yaha q ruki hai bags leke, ghar se nikal Diya kya teko , Raghu joked.
Aree mujhe Jana hai , show hai na ... She reminded him.
Oh toh yaha kyun ruki hai, he asked her.
Woh mujhe taxi nai mili, she told him.
Ruk Mei Abhi taxi lata Hu , said battery who was along with Raghu.
Battery was about to get down and go but Raghu stopped him.
Battery ruk isko taxi se late hoga , Mei isko drop karta hoon.
Antara readily agreed to this and battery helped her put her stuff up and she got in and then they left .
Raghu dropped her there and left for some work assigned to him.
Antara dint talk much during the drive ,she was much tensed about her performance.
The day would pass with rehearsals and then they will shoot at night ,she got involved in the rehearsals and stopped her brain from,thinking about Raghu.
She dint know what was happening to her  but she liked spending time with him and now she was actually missing him.
She came out of her thoughts when the coordinator came and informed her that she had to be read within an hour and they would start soon .
She decided to get ready , she was going to sing the song Khabar nahi for her first performance.
It actually described how she was feeling now , not only about the show but also her life also about her feelings.
The first contestant was a girl she was singing the song which was one of Antara's favorites so she was singing along.
Tu hi ye mujhko bata de
 Chahun main ya naa
 Apne tu dil ka pata de
 Chahun main ya naa ...
.
.
..
...
..
Just then she saw him, yeah it was Raghu.
No how could he be here, why will he come here , she was probably dreaming she thought and continued singing.
She kept looking at him and sung.
Mere chhote chhote khwaab hain
 Khwabon mein geet hain
 Geeton mein zindagi hai
 Chaahat hai, preet hai
 Abhi main na dekhoon khwaab woo
 Jin mein na tu mile
 Le khole honth maine
 Ab tak the jo sile.

 Mujhko na jitna mujh pe
 Utna iss dil ko tujh pe
 Hone laga aitbaar
 Tanha lamhon mein apne
 Bunti hoon tere sapne
 Tujhse hua mujhko pyaar o o..
 Poochungi tujhko kabhi naa
 Chaahun main ya naa
 Tere khaabon mein ab jeena
 Chaahun main kyun naa!
She kept humming the tone when a guy next to her , karan spoke to her.
Antara tu mat kya rahi hai ?
Kya mat rahi hai matlab gana ga ri Hu , she answered him.
Aree woh nahi , woh waha khada ek ladka kab se tumhe bula raha hai aur tu bas yaha baithe use dekh rahi hai.
He sounded annoyed.
Kya ,kaun khada hai kaha ?
She panicked and then realizing that she wasn't dreaming she went to Raghu who was indeed there.
Raghu, tum yaha ? Yaha kya mat rahe ho.
Aree yeh tera phone tu jeep Mei bhul gayi Thi. He gave her the phone.
Oh thanks.
He was leaving when she stopped him and asked him.
Aree ab aa Hi gate ho toh mera performance h dekh  ke jaao na , she pleaded.
Aree nai mujhe kuch kaam hai, he said and was leaving but looking at her sad face he decided to wait.
Next mera h hai , zyada tum b nai lagega.
Antara went .
She seemed quite confident,and began her song.
Mere maula maula Mere maula
 Man matwala kyun hua hua re
 Man maula maula Mere maula
 Mere maula.
She couldn't see Raghu anywhere, but she knew he would come.
 Kis Taraf hai aaasmaan
 Kis taraf zaameen
 Khabar nahi Khabar nahi
 O O
 Jab se aaya hai sanam
 Mujhko khud ki bhi khabar nahi
 Khabar nahi
There he was, she saw him come and sit in the audience ,she smiled at him and he smiled back.
 oo oo
 Hosh gul sapno ki mein bandhu pull
 Aankh kab khuli
 Khabar nahi khabar nahi
 Hoo hoo
 Kis Taraf hai aaasmaan
 Kis taraf zaameen
 Khabar nahi Khabar nahi
 O O
 Mere maula maula Mere maula
 Man matwala kyun hua hua re
 Man maula maula Mere maula
 Mere maula
 Jaane kab kahan kaise
 Tere ho gaye Kaise
 Hum to sochte hi reh gaye
 Aur pyaar ho gaya
 Mere khawaab dil saaansein
 Mil ke kho gaye aise
 Tujko dekh ke aisa to kai baar ho gaya
 Tu kahe dil yeh tera hi rahe
 Aur kya kahun
 Khabar nahi khabar nahi
 O O
 Kis Taraf hai aaasmaan
 Kis taraf zaameen
 Khabar nahi Khabar nahi
 O O
 Mere maula maula Mere maula
 Man matwala kyun hua hua re
 Man maula maula Mere maula
 Mere maula
 Aayega woh is intezaar mein
 Ud chala dil wahan
 Sapne jahan mein janu
 Lagta hai woh mere kareeb hai
 Lyricsmasti.com
 Aisa kyun hai magar
 Dhunde nazar beqabu
 Hosh gul sapno ki mein bandhu pull
 Aankh kab khuli
 Khabar nahi khabar nahi
 o Ho
 Kis Taraf hai aaasmaan
 Kis taraf zaameen
 Khabar nahi Khabar nahi
 Jab se aaya hai sanam
 Mujhko khud ki bhi khabar nahi
 Lyricsmasti.com
 Khabar nahi

 Hosh gul sapno ki mein bandhu pull
 Aankh kab khuli
 Khabar nahi khabar nahi
 O ho
 Kis Taraf hai aaasmaan
 Kis taraf zaameen
 Khabar nahi Khabar nahi
 O O
 Mere maula maula Mere maula
 Man matwala kyun hua hua re
 Man maula maula Mere maula
 Mere maula
As soon as she finished the song there was a huge applause.
The judges and the audience loved her performance and enjoyed it
At back stage every one congratulated her and even Raghu came.
Mast Gaya tune ekdm , pata nai Tha Tu itna acha gati hai , he spoke as they walked out.
Thankyou, she beamed at him.
Acha mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai, she wanted to tell him how shhe felt.
Ha bol na , he spoke but suddenly his cell started ringing.
He instantly received the call.
Ha bol Raju...
Acha...
Paka news hai na...
Acha thik hai Mei jata Hu.
He cut the call.
Antara mujhe Jana hai , kuch kaam hai mujhe .
He got into his jeep and left . Antara walked inside, she wanted to talk but the fact that he had given her some of her precious time was enough to make her smile for today.
 
This story will get over with Antara's confession in a couple of parts more.
guys please leave me your feedback and let me know how are you finding the updates.


Edited by arshiforeve - 11 July 2013 at 7:07am

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