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RANTARA ss part 6 pg 18

arshiforeve Goldie

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 7:36am | IP Logged
Hey i am here with another one shot.
i am posting one part now and will post the next part tomorrow Wink
Part 1 - below
Part 2 - pg4
part 3- pg9
 Part 4-pg12
part 5-pg15
part 6-pg18
Another day was here, it had been months now since they shifted to Mumbai, months since she lost her dad, months since her life had taken a drastic turn and months since she met him for the first time.
Him, ya again she had ended up thinking about him only.
Stop it Antara, mei uske bare mei kyun sooch rahi hu...kaun ha woh mera...???
Again she had no answer to this, so now she decided to do some work or else she would end up thinking about him only.
"isshu...kaha hai tu??" she called him.
"di mei yaha hu balcony mei" he answered Antara.
She went to him and saw him standing there.
"isshu ,chalo appa tumhe bula rahi hai " she said to him holding his hand pulling him in.
'nahi di ruko na yaha , dekho ab rain ke baad sun aya hai toh rainbow ayega na' he pleaded ti stay.
'ishan tum ek kam karo, tum jake jaldi se dudh khatam karo tab tak Mei yaha rukti hu, jaoo jaldi' she told him to go.
With that Ishan ran inside and Antara was waiting in the balcony, she dint know she being seen by two eyes.
It was Raghu standing in his balcony  drinking his tea and staring at her.
As soon as she saw him she felt nervous.
Oh gosh the way he looks at me i can feel butterflies in my stomach, she thought to her self.
She tore her gaze from him and looked else where, she could still feel his gaze on her.
When she stole a few glances at him ,she saw him stare at her shamelessly.
Wat's wrong with him, why is starting at me, intact wat's wrong with me, why should i care let hum do whatever he wants.
She simply walked inside the house saying,koi rainbow nai ane wala Ishan.
The moment she turned she saw him leave.
What is problem, why does he do this to me.
Aur Mei Kyu itna alag feel karti Hu, i hate him na, nafrat h karti Hu na Mei usse.
She was more than confused.
Kya ho gaya hai mujhe, kya Mei usse pasand karti Hu, kyun hamesha uske khayal hai mere dil Mei , hamesha wahi , har jagah wahi, kahi mujhe usse pyar toh nai hogaya.
Nahi aisa kuch nai hoga.
Her thoughts broke when Ishan entered the room.
Di app andar kyun ayi , dekho aagaya rainbow.
Both of them went out and saw the rainbow.
They were standing outside when she heard a bike go, it had to  be him, she quickly looked down to see him, and to her surprise,he looked at her through the mirror and smiled.
She knew she was caught looking at him, but couldn't help it.

Edited by arshiforeve - 09 August 2013 at 7:01am

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BabyHimavari IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 8:00am | IP Logged
lovely yaar...raghu stares at antara and antara feeling good...pata nahi show meein kab dekhne milega...Day Dreaming
akhir ishu ko apna rainbow dikh gaya...Big smile...aur raghu ko bh...Embarrassed

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Devilicious IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 8:37am | IP Logged
wow...this was awesome dear...
Love it !

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neha.angel IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 9:08am | IP Logged
Awww.. it was sooo beautiful
. Even m was geting butterflies
 While reading this.. n even visualized it.. arsh plz do keep writing. ...


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--Royal-- IF-Addictz

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 9:15am | IP Logged
Again u r write a amazing os Day Dreaming superb yr Star

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arul01 Goldie

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 10:12am | IP Logged
wow! superb OS! really cute! loved it a lot! 

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angelic shaz IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 4:12pm | IP Logged
wowww beautifulll 

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Shimolina Senior Member

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 10:12pm | IP Logged
Wow wow it ws supa dupa awsum...
Hope aisa real stry me ho Day Dreaming
Me toh pagal hojaungi...hehe...
But plz cont soon...

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