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Shaintini Goldie
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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 6:29am | IP Logged
Awesome story.liked it.
Thanks for the pm dear.

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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 6:30am | IP Logged
Awesome update.
Loved it.
Pls accept my buddy request.
Thanks for the pm.

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smilystar Senior Member
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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 6:36am | IP Logged
if arnav is gabbar 
then  who could b sambha
aman obviously
nice update

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arhi101 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 6:47am | IP Logged
Loved it
Too good
Thanx for the pm

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monasha IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 6:54am | IP Logged
Read this in one Go...
I really really loved it...

Prologue..

Seriously telling I really loved the prologue.. well written..

The two security guards were munching samosas and jalebies and the plate of jalebies was taken by a drunkard beauty in red and green lehenga looking as a bride with beer in hand...

Oh they fell for her at first site and recovered immediately after knowing that she's a bride... Poor Ramlal and Shamlal had to compromise on their jalibies... And she with an attitude went in to the building... And they didn't stop her then...

Chapter 1A

Poor Lavanya was crying as her model didn't show up at the mentioned time and was sobbing  as Arnav wouldn't spare her and she wasn't even married... Don't worry Lavanya Aman is there for you...

Oh even Aman and the other male employees were mesmerized by beauty and Lavanya was furious due to this...

where she totally ignored Lavanya and her words...

Omg she was saying the dialogues of Sholay movie... I really love the movie.. hehe... and she name the employees with the characters in it...

Basanti = Khushi Kumari Gupta
Dhanno = Lavanya (Poor girl)
Buddhi mausi = Aman (Oh Dear God, what must he be feeling??)
Gaun wale = the AR employees...

She even danced and sang and then sobbed not finding her Gabbar...

And there the most awaited person comes, Gabbar himself and save her from the fall...

Chapter 1B
Omg!! Arnav Mr. Perfectionist... Woke up at the time when he goes to office... what was he doing the whole night? Preparing for the meeting which got cancelled due to the clients son's tooth broke..??

Poor Fellow had to go through the real drama at his house and now in the office the singing and dancing beauty on the receptionists desk attracting the people working for him... And he thought that he has problem with his voice...

He must so furious but one look at her falling figure he couldn't stop himself from breaking her fall... And he too got mesmerized by her beauty and calling her beautiful...

I'm really looking forward for the next update and the update in which Khushi will be in her senses and with Arnav...

And In case of Sambha i guess it should be Akash.. Not so sure
Update soon


Edited by monasha - 06 July 2013 at 7:07am

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Rabiabegum Senior Member
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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 6:59am | IP Logged
Interesting story!!!! Please update soon!!!!

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nia07 Senior Member
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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 6:59am | IP Logged
Thanks for the PM 
That was really amazing  That "unpunctual" lion gosh hilarious now i guess mistress has come to tame this lion

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sanjana25 Goldie
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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 7:07am | IP Logged
Wow
Amazing

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