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Swaron poem:ADAM AND EVE

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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey guys...its me again๐Ÿ˜› this time with a poem on our beloved swaron...its my first ever attempt on writing a poem,its just a lame attempt and i posted it coz i wanted to know how lame it is๐Ÿ˜ณso here it goes...

            ADAM AND EVE...


                            Its been a very long wait..

                       For I had to fight with the fate.

                       It was  love at first sight to me,

                        U made the world bright to me.

                       When I saw u,I knew u were mineโ€ฆ

                        Since then I was on cloud nine.

                          I expressed my affection

       All I got was rejection , it only led me to depression.

                             I wished to be ur adam

     But I could express seldom that I didn't want ur tantrum,

   I  decided to return ur freedom, but then u opened the album

                       It was destiny's special kiss

                         Ur touch was a pure bliss

                          Ur love was my last wish

                 Now that I have u, its coz I deserve u..

    With all my rights I reserve u..and I promise to preserve u..

               Till the day I live, coz I love u my eve.

 

 

 

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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely poem
You are an awesome writer
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautifully penned ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 10 years ago
This is really a beautiful poem!!!
and you used the perfect metaphor for it!!
and the rhyming added to the beauty of the poem!!
Amazing JOB!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow this was such a beautiful poem. Can't believe it is your first attempt at writing one!
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Posted: 10 years ago

beautiful poem...luvd it ..

grt job...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ.

Edited by 123renudrlng - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing poem 
loved it ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ