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Arhi OS : "His Mamacita" NOTE PG 10 (Page 7)

saavan_lover Goldie
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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 10:32am | IP Logged
A brilliant OS! Loved, loved, loved it <3 You showed so many different emotions in one single OS! A great job :) I loved your Arnav <3 He was just too sweet and his Mamacita was just too good :)
 
You should write more :) You are a great writer :)

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 10:40am | IP Logged
That is such a  stunning story !!! I loved this Arnav who does love his Mamacita a lot to the point of sacrificing his own love for her just to see her happy !!! 

Seriously wonderful :) 

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 10:50am | IP Logged
ohhh my God!!!
this is an absolute masterpiece!!!
from the beginning till the end it was just flawless...
you couldnt have done justice to this story more than this dear...
the journey of this khushi--the way it was shown--just perfect...
the write up, the emotions, the dialogues-- marvelous...
and oh my God!!! this ungentleman Arnav!!! damn!!!
why he was that good!! why oh why?? now how can i ever get over him!!! :')

"Hello women," he wished them all but turned her to face him, one arm around her waist and other set her hair, bringing few locks over her shoulder. Leaning in, he whispered, "no one here needs to know what we were up to last night, Mamacita… dressing the way I like and having sindhoor on your parting in my name isn't sufficient… hide these symbols of our love making…" He kissed her forehead and whispered at last,"I think I need to break this 30 seconds of undressing record today… don't change."  and this is just... Day Dreaming

all of his doings and actions throughout the story was not enough that you had to kill us with this!!!

i just loved this story and to know that it actually this epicness actually happened with two ppl just added the extra charm to this story..
kudos to you for pen it down so well...
this was awesome, awesome and more awesome!!!

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 10:52am | IP Logged
That was a breathtakingly beautiful OS!
Lovely, lovely!!

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 10:59am | IP Logged
loved it

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 10:59am | IP Logged
This was soo beautiful!!!! They really did exist? Aww... My heart goes out to them<3 And no, I did not hate Dhruv. He was a nice guy...

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 11:00am | IP Logged
super awesome and beautiful!! long one!!
I just loved it!

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 11:08am | IP Logged
beautiful os

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