Originally posted by: kar_bunny
Hey girl..!!!
You did it... You made me move my butt and creat an accout in this whatever forum it is, just so I will be able to thank you here.
That is incridibly cute, girl, neither because of your dedication note nor your way of expressing confused emotions, but it made me remember all those days where we (my Mamacita and I) tried to overcome all those obstacles... Reading this made me smile by the end, the way you woeved my story with your characters. I know you are a writer but now, I must give you a standing ovation... I promise, hereafter, to let you spend time in writing without disturbing.
Coming to the story, though it has Mamacita's emotions, I can feel her confused feelings and sufferings. It has been real, and... no words to express. The way you expressed her hatred, her love as a best friend, her pain when he is in pain, and the way she accepted him without second thoughts, leaving everything and everyone behind...
When you said you wanted to pen this down, I was scared that you will have it in the exact same way, but now, as I read it, this is what not I expected at the end. I was expecting the way she accepted him as her husband... more of the way she felt when he avoided her even after wedding, thinking that she still isn't ready to let go off her past... f**king shit that I am to avoid Mamacita... I am not going to repeat the thing ever again, I swear...
Over all, I have only few words to say and that is... I love you, girl...!!!
Now stop grinning, girl. And that dance too... and don't stay here for long... You don't know how your hubby is missing you all the day ;)
Good night, darling.
Your Bunny
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