VirMan os : welcoming of new baby. - Page 4

Awww wat a cute one...lovely...i did not know dat my Ashu writes also...keep writing... 👏

Ashhh partner this is beyond adorable!😃Loved it to the core! "tumhare mummy par sabse pehle hak mera hai aur baad mein tumhara"😆Hahaha! Wish we can get something like this in show too! AWESOME!❤️

Haiii... itna cute OS. This was so so so beautiful. I can't explain in words. I could imagine everything. Would love to read more of your work. I loved Virat's naughtiness and him saying "sabse pehla hakk mera hai" awww. So perfect. 

Lovely OS!! Beautiful ❤️❤️.. Very nicely written 👏👏.. Take care 😊

asssyyy ❤️
OMG that was sooo cute...saachi I was blushing while reading it...especially when my shake boy decided to come more closer 😳 😳
U know how I'm more attracted to besharama stuffs...you written that pretty well until the baby invaded in the romance...
This is truly amazing...u toh have become talented 😛 Now I know who to request... 😉
Keep writing more 😛

you are attracted to besharam stuffs ..yaaa..but u were BLUSHING !! i doubt that 😛🤣

Awesome os.

OMG ash this is amazing❤️ fingers crossed that virat gets over his fear and anxiety soon and starts caring for her in a patiish way😆 now that its confirmed that it is indeed surrogacy for virika, and Manvi wont be giving her baby away, i want a full fledged pregnancy track on these two, him taking care of her, dreaming about the future, shopping for the baby etc etc but i know we'll probably be let down like we always are so a teeny tiny request, continue this na😃😃 id love to read your take on her pregnancy, you'll pakka do more justice to them then our mahaan CVs😛😆 and eeekkk the kick part is adorable beyond words me wants this too, makes greedy eyes and glares at SM😳🤣🤣Edited by -MemoriesLast- - 10 years ago

Finally found it 😆 Next time make sure I'm in the PM list, twino! ❤️ My favorite dialogue: