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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 4:41am | IP Logged
And thanks people for the kind comments. Hug
Glad you found it heartbreaking. Approve

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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 5:04am | IP Logged
started like dream, ended like nightmare. It was beautifully written! Though am keeping it at that Asad fainted at the end.

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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 10:12am | IP Logged
Nice piece.
So was it really a one shot or asad will one day wakemup from his slumber party?
Luvd the way u wrote psychotic tanveer scene. It creeped me out.

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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 10:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by basicquestion1

Nice piece.
So was it really a one shot or asad will one day wakemup from his slumber party?
Luvd the way u wrote psychotic tanveer scene. It creeped me out.


OS sweetheart.
I wish I could write a continuation or something...but I got my exams on.
Am writing OSs outta sheer boredom. U know, outlet and all.
LOL

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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 10:48am | IP Logged
how can you do this to us?
huh,,...
how can you write such beautiful , but sad stories , which makes me confused whether to cry or be amased by your writing .
you are an awesome writer. i love you and your works.

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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
You didn't kill him
You are very good and lovable person who don't like sad ending
And I know he is just fainted and will wake up right Angry

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Posted: 05 July 2013 at 3:41pm | IP Logged
Yes! He fainted! Im assuming dis to myself dat i didnt read wat u wrote before dat! Blah blah blah..."he fainted away"! Dats it! :-D:-D

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Posted: 08 July 2013 at 2:58am | IP Logged
I loved it, even though the ending was heartbreaking </3




Edited by Anzie - 08 July 2013 at 3:03am

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