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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 3:12am | IP Logged
why are you making me cry ?Cry
you killed him ?Broken Heart
WHY?????????????






Edited by -waitingforyou- - 27 June 2013 at 3:14am

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 3:14am | IP Logged
 still i can't ignore your beautiful writing .
it was sad yet beautifullCry

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 3:39am | IP Logged
As usual impeccably beautiful!!! thanks!!!

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 3:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Devanshi-

Res

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I see that mbbs has messed with you your brain. BadlyLOL
But because medicine is not the strongest forte of Indian soaps, I am going to believe that Asad lives on because you have not bothered to clear up anything. Lets just say it was a 'miracle'LOL

Now to the OS!! Please don't go away ever again!! I have not read such a beautiful OS in ages!
Asad flirting= OMG! And he managed to carry it off!! Till date I have not been able to imagine him flirt because...well...the idea just seems SO impossible! But reading your OS made it look so simple and made me smile from ear to ear.Big smile

The Highwayman reference- I totally love you for it!! Hug It is one of favorite poems along with Lochinvar, Horatius At The Bridge, and so many more!! You won my heart with it(figuratively ofcourse)!

The logic and Asad manning up-I could actually cry for this one(out of happiness)!! He felt the pain and didn't just fall unconscious but actually fought like...like...well, like a MAN should!! He even stopped her from injecting that drug in him!! The essence of logic is what stood out for me in the whole OS

Tanveer the new white witch- you know how to make a perfectly good villain! Big smile And thank you for making Asad fight her!! Jammy pushing Tanu is something that I have yearned for!

The heart wrenching end-I can't hate you even if I want to for it because it was so well written! I loved how he says goodbye to everyone and narrates those lines to Zoya again. It was just...beautiful! No other words can I find right now to describe it! Embarrassed 


Welcome back Pallo! Embarrassed


I love Lochinvar, The charge of the Light Brigade, Ode to the west wind and another poem which I can't remember right now. LOL
And yes, you can have you're miracle. I didn't use to word "death" for the very same reason. Depends on how you want it to end. Embarrassed I
I tried to make it as logical as I could.
How do u drop flat on your face as soon as you get hit on the head? Like, couldn't he have turned around and seen Razia? Apparently not. LOL
Glad you liked this.
I actually teared up while writing the last bit. Such a emo fool I am. Pinch

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 3:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ta33iiE

Nooo. I want a happy ending - please continue!


Originally posted by Arnavarmaan

Did u just kill him off
Plz dont do that
That wud let tanveer win
:(
:(


Originally posted by CutielovesChocs

I can't believe you did that. 

I really can't. 

*sigh*
-Raina


Originally posted by -waitingforyou-

why are you making me cry ?Cry
you killed him ?Broken Heart
WHY?????????????




HugHugHug
I tried not to. I really did. But in my head I couldn't help making it that way.
Let's say he fainted away due to the blood loss. That'll be more fitting.



Edited by Lhethal.Me - 27 June 2013 at 3:46am

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 3:46am | IP Logged
nice os

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 3:47am | IP Logged
Asad just DIED? 
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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 3:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by KulfiBai

Good Lord, so sad and beautiful, started off like a fairy tale, ended in reality Cry

Really, really wonderful!


Originally posted by -waitingforyou-

 still i can't ignore your beautiful writing .
it was sad yet beautifullCry


Originally posted by summaiyasayed

nice os


Thanks dearies Hug

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