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TaaRey OS Chitti Na Koi Sandesh (Dare)

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 2:20am | IP Logged
Okay … I'm here with my 2nd Dare OS … I was dared by Yashi Dii (taareylove) … Well I can't deny this wasn't difficult because this was the first time I heard this song … Dii I Hope That This was Up To Mark … I'm Sorry if it turned out bad

Concept:
TaaRey are married, One Day Rey got into an accident and was critical and soon later, he died … Taani had just got the news of Rey's accident and just reached the hospital where SwaRon were … So this is her reaction after all this …

"Kya?! … Nahi Bhai, aisa nahi ho sakta … Aap Mazak kar rahe hai na … Mujhe pata hai, Rey mujhse naraz hai … But please aisa mat bolna …. Mera Rey mar nahi sakta" Taani said not believing what she heard …

"Taani get a grip on yourself … Rey IS DEAD!" Swayam shouted getting frustrated on his sister's words

Music
Taani stood shock … Swayam's words were lingering around her head … Her Rey was no more

Chithi Na Koi Sandesh
Taani started walking out towards the door but she was behaving like a lifeless body … SwaRon reached her and brought her back home …

Hoo, Chithi Na Koi Sandesh
Jaane Woh Kaun Sa Desh
Jahan Tum Chale Gaye
Taani reached her home filled of Her's and Rey's memories … As soon as she stepped in the house, She remembered all her times with Rey and tears started falling down her cheeks …

Chithi Na Koi Sandesh
Jaane Woh Kaun Sa Desh
Jahan Tum Chale Gaye
Taani goes inside her room wanting to be alone … She sits on her bed reminiscing all the beautiful moments with Rey when suddenly she sees Rey infront of her … He comes towards her and wipes her tears away

Chithi Na Koi Sandesh
Jaane Woh Kaun Sa Desh
She is shocked to see him infront of her … She is about to hug him when she vanishes … She realises that she was dreaming

Jahan Tum Chale Gaye
Jahan Tum Chale Gaye
Taani breaks Down shouting Rey's name, Which scares SwaRon and They immediately run towards Taani's room

Is Dil Pe Lagaa Ke Thes
Jaane Woh Kaun Sa Desh
Jahan Tum Chale Gaye…
"Aap Kyu Mujhe Chodkar Chale Gaye Rey … Kyu?" Taani said wishing she had gone with him … Swayam couldn't control himself and started crying seeing Taani's condition

Ek Aah Bharee Hogi
Humne Na Sunee Hogi
Taani takes Rey's pictures and caresses it knowing that she cannot do the same with him anymore

Jaate Jaate Tumne
Aawaz To Di Hogi
"Aap kyun gaye Rey! Aap se pehle toh mujhe jaana chahiye tha phir Kyun !"

Har Waqt Yehi Hai Gham
Us Waqt Kahan The Hum
"Nahi chahiye kuch bhi, Yeh churiya, Yeh bada ghar … Mujhe Sirf aap chahiye, sirf mera Rey!" Taani says this while breaking everything around her

Kahan Tum Chale Gaye
Unable to control himself, Swayam immediately runs towards Taani and hugs her, trying to release all the pain in her heart. Sharon also comes and joins the hug hopin that Taani will be alright and will share her pain

Chithi Na Koi Sandesh
Jaane Woh Kaun Sa Desh
Taani cries her heart out while hugging SwaRon. Her life has become lifeless without Rey

Jahan Tum Chale Gaye
Jahan Tum Chale Gaye
She breaks the hug and looks up at the sky, Only praying to her Krishnaji hoping that He could lessen her pain

Is Dil Pe Lagaa Ke Thes
Jaane Woh Kaun Sa Desh
Jahan Tum Chale Gaye...
A few days pass, SwaRon are staying with Taani until she becomes fully alright. Taani is trying to be happy for her Bhai and Bhabhi.

Har Cheez Pe Ashkoon Se
Likha Hai Tumhara Naam
Taani, Swayam and Sharon are eating dinner
"Sharon, What did the flower say to its girl-friend?" Swayam asked trying to lighten up the mood
"What?" Sharon asked still thinking about Swayam's weird question
"Why do phools fall in love?"
Taani who was drinking water spat it all out hearing her Bhai's bekwas joke and looked at Swayam in shock

Ye Raste Ghar Galiyaan
Tumhe Kar Na Sakee Salaam
Swayam thought his plan of cheering up Taani was working but with Swayam, Taani also remembered how Rey always used to crack corny jokes to make her mood better. A teardrop falls from her eyes and before anyone could see anything, she runs into her room

Hai Dil Mein Reh Gayee Baat
Jaldi Se Chuda Kar Haath
Kahan Tum Chale Gaye
"Rey aapki bekaar jokes, aapka naughtiness mujhe bahut saatati hai …"
"Hey Jaaneman! Aise thodi rote !"
 Taani head shoots up as she hears this but she finds no one around

Chithi Na Koi Sandesh
Jaane Woh Kaun Sa Desh
Jahan Tum Chale Gaye
Jahan Tum Chale Gaye
She realises that she was imagining Rey again, And soon later she sees him in front of her

Is Dil Pe Lagaa Ke Thes
Jaane Woh Kaun Sa Desh
Jahan Tum Chale Gaye...
"Taani I don't get tum ro kyun rahi ho?" Taani's imaginary Rey said while caressing her cheeks " Toh kya hua ki main tumhare saamne nahi hun, I will always be in your heart"

Abh Yaadon Ke Kaante
Is Dil Mein Chubhte Hain
He said that and left. Taani was left confused for a while but soon realization struck her

Na Dard Thaherta Hai
Na Aansoon Rukte Hain
She knew that the pain would never be less but by showing it she was hurting the people who are around her

Tumhe Dhoondh Raha Hai Pyaar
Hum Kaise Karein Iqraar

Ke Haan Tum Chale Gaye
She wiped her tears away, Changed from her white suit into a coloured one

Chithi Na Koi Sandesh
Jaane Woh Kaun Sa Desh
Jahan Tum Chale Gaye
Jahan Tum Chale Gaye
She went outside, ready to face the world. As soon as Swayam and Sharon saw her they were shocked. Swayam went up to Taani and asked
"Taani tum teek toh ho na? … I mean tum aise?"

Is Dil Pe Lagaa Ke Thes
Jaane Woh Kaun Sa Desh
Jahan Tum Chale Gaye...
Taani smirked at her Bhai's concern for her
"Bhai main samajh gayi ki Rey kabhi vaapas nahi aa sakta but I also know ki voh humesha mere dil mein rahega"
Saying that Taani hugged her Bhai assuring to him that she was fine now and he need not worry

O Kahan Tum Chale Gaye
O Kahan Tum Chale Gaye
O Kahan Tum Chale Gaye...
From then on Taani lived her life, knowing her life was in a safe and happy place. Though her life ended on that day but she moved forward for her family who cared for her

I know sab chappals ke saath ready honge ... And BTW voh joke mera nahi hai kisi ne mujhe bataya so Ouch

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 2:32am | IP Logged
Omg, I'm crying reading this, actually this song also always makes me cry, from what I know jagjit Singh made this song for his son, who died

Edited by miss_neha - 27 June 2013 at 2:33am
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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 2:36am | IP Logged
res/unres-


me wanted to become first one but neha took over me CryCry

lets coming to os -

it was so emotional and awesome loved it dear so much TongueTongue

you perfectly put  my imagination in  your beautiful words Big smileBig smile

i am so glad that i gave that dare to you because i thought no one can write so beautiful as you can ClapClap

really loved taanis decision in last yeah rey always live in her heartBig smileBig smile

and swaron was also awesome the way they supported taani was superb EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

in short i loved it to the coreTongueTongue

and no jutte chapal only tight hug for you Hug


Edited by --taareylove--- - 27 June 2013 at 2:46am
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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 2:36am | IP Logged
RES..

UNRES...

Why is everyone making me cry with their brilliant emotional pieces of work...
This was so so emotional...
My heart beats stopped after knowing that Rey is no more...
And then Taani..
Gosh!! It was so painful to see her like that..
She was a lifeless body..
She was in such a vulnerable condition..
I cannot imagine either Rey or Taani without each other..
You have written this so amazingly...
Really loved how at last she decided to live her life though she knows that she can't be happy without her love..
Very beautifully written, sweetie..


Edited by Ayesha_Hasan - 27 June 2013 at 3:03am
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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 2:37am | IP Logged
OMG it's so heart touching Cry
I was literally crying after reading it Cry
but I loved it Smile
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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 2:37am | IP Logged
nice os...
it ws really emotional...
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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 2:38am | IP Logged
i was crying like hell after reading it...
it was really hard touching...
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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 2:47am | IP Logged
Very emotional Cry

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