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VirMan FF~Kuch Iss Tarah~Thread#3*Part 51* Pg 54 (Page 41)

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Posted: 11 January 2014 at 11:46pm | IP Logged
Hey every1 I am Astha...Arti's sister..and from here on I am going 2 give updates,,,,don't worry,,,everything is written by Arti only...i am just posting on her behalf, so from now its Astha...all compliments should come to me only...jkLOLTongue...story is same...Arti's story, her concept, her mind...i have nothing to do with it besides posting..so u guys can just thank me 4 post...rest,,,Arti deserves it...Anyways,,,i am going to update in few minutes...Regarding PMs...i am only sending pm's 2 those who r in her buddy list..so if i missed u then sorry, but please add her in ur buddy list 2 make my work easier...thank you.Smile

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Originally posted by Artii159

Hey every1 I am Astha...Arti's sister..and from here on I am going 2 give updates,,,,don't worry,,,everything is written by Arti only...i am just posting on her behalf, so from now its Astha...all compliments should come to me only...jkLOLTongue...story is same...Arti's story, her concept, her mind...i have nothing to do with it besides posting..so u guys can just thank me 4 post...rest,,,Arti deserves it...Anyways,,,i am going to update in few minutes...Regarding PMs...i am only sending pm's 2 those who r in her buddy list..so if i missed u then sorry, but please add her in ur buddy list 2 make my work easier...thank you.Smile



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Hey my lovely readers...missed me? I hope so,,,sorry sorry sorry, very very very late na,,,m sorry...i knw I've lost so many followers of my story...but...m sorry...anyway...m back wid a new update..i hope u'll lyk it...:)


VirMan FF...Kuch Iss Tarah...Part 48...


~Recap~


Viraat: Bolo Mannat, aapko kiske saath rehna hai? Papa ke saath ya Mama ke saath?

Mannat: Mujhe...Mele Papa Ke Chaath. (I want to be...With My Papa.)


Viraat smiled widely. Jeevika and Viren looked at Maanvi, who was standing there without any movements. A lone tear rolled down from Maanvi's eyes. Once again she has lost her Baby, once again she was left alone. She started walking backwards, lifelessly, and then turned around with a broken heart, fulfilling her promise that she made to Viraat.


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Mannat turned towards Maanvi, who was walking away. Jeevika hurriedly ran towards Maanvi.


Mannat: (frowns) Aul Mama ke chath lehna hai. (And with my Mama.)


Maanvi stopped in her tracks along with Jeevika. Both shocked, turned around towards Mannat. Viraat knelt down, in front of Mannat and turned her towards him.


Viraat: (cupping her face in his palms) Mannat yeh aap kya keh rahe ho Beta?

Mannat: (innocently) Mujhe aapke aul Mama ke chath lehna hai Papa. (I want to stay with you and Mama, Papa.)


Maanvi and Jeevika smiled at each other with teary eyes.


Viraat: Mannat, aap jante ho ki aisa nahi ho sakhta na.

Mannat: (teary eyes) Pal kyun Papa? Mujhe aap dono ke chath lehna hai. Mujhe aap dono chahiye. (But why Papa? I want to live with you both. I want you both beside me.)


Maanvi's smiled faded away, and with a very heavy heart she walked towards Mannat and Viraat.


Maanvi: (sits in front of her) Mannat, (wipes Mannat's tears) Beta, aapke Papa thik keh rahe hain, hum ek saath nahi rahe sakhte Baccha.

Mannat: (crying) Par mujhe lehna hai, hum chath kyun nahi lahe chakhte Mama? (But I want to. Why can't we stay together Mama?)

Maanvi: (pulls her in her arms/tears streaming down her face) Mannat...

Viren: (walking towards VirMan/Mannat) Sahi toh puch rahi hai, tum dono saath kyun nahi reh sakhte?

Viraat: (stands up) Bhai aap...?

Viren: (angrily) Main kya Viraat? Tum dono kya kar rahe ho apni apni zindagi ke saath yeh socha hai tum dono ne? Aise jeena acha lagta hai tum dono ko? Apne baare mein na sahi apni khud ki Beti ke baare mein toh socho, teen saal se apni Maa ke bina rahi hai woh, aur ab jab usse mili hai toh tum dono usse yeh puch rahe ho ki usse kiske saath rehna hai? Apne Papa ke saath jiski haath pakad kar woh chali, jisne usse bolna sikhaya, jisne usse Maa Baap dono ka pyaar diya? Yaa apni Maa ke saath, jisne usko janam diya, jiske liye woh raat din roti rahi, tadapti rahi, sab se puchti rahi ki kya aap meri Mama ko jante ho? (looking at Viraat) Kisse chunne woh Bacchi Viraat? (looking at Maanvi) Kaise chunnegi woh kisi ek ko Maanvi?


Jeevika walked towards them, she called Virika towards her and asked her to take Mannat to another room, and cheer her up. Virika took away her baby sister with her.


Jeevika: (looking at VirMan) Viraat, Maanvi, Kya tum dono apni Bacchi ke liye ek saath nahi reh sakhte? Main maanti hun, kahin na kahin in sab ki zimedaar main hi hun, par aaj main hi tum dono se keh rahi hun, kya Mannat ke liye tum dono ek saath nahi reh sakhte?

Maanvi: (tears filled in her eyes) Di...

Viraat: Bhabhi, agar hum saath reh bhi le, toh kya, humare beech jo abhi hai woh thik hoga?

Jeevika: Koshish karke dekho Viraat, shayad Mannat ki wajha se tum dono ke beech jo bhi takrar hai woh thik ho jaye.

Viraat: (looking at her) Thik hai Bhabhi, i'm ready, only if aap bhi Bhai ke saath wapas chandigarh chale.


Jeevika and Viren looked at each other.


Jeevika: (looking at Viraat) Main Chalungi.


Viren smiled widely, along with Maanvi.


Viraat: Toh main bhi Maanvi ke saath rehne ke liye taiyaar hun, sirf Mannat ke liye.

Maanvi: Main bhi Mannat ke liye, Chandigrah jaane ke liye taiyaar hun.

Viren: (happily) Toh main chandigrah ki tickets book karwata hun. Aur ghar par bhi call kar deta hun ki hum aa rahe hai.

Jeevika: Main Bacchon ko dekh kar aati hun.


Viren and Jeevika walked away, leaving VirMan alone. Maanvi was continuously looking down, while Viraat was standing there with his eyes closed.


Viraat: Main...


He stopped as he heard his phone beeping.


Viraat: Hello?

Mr. Kapoor: Hello (smiles) Mr. Viraat Vadhera, kaise hain aap?

Viraat: Hi Mr. Kapoor, I'm perfectly fine, aap bataiye.

Mr. Kapoor: main bhi perfectly fine hun. Waise kahan gyab hain aap? Aapko yaad toh hai na, kal aapki recording hai?

Viraat: Oh Haan...mere dimaag se nikal gaya tha, thanks for reminding Mr. Kapoor.

Mr. Kapoor: No problem. Kal toh nahi bhuloge na aap?

Viraat: No not at all Mr. Kapoor.

Mr. Kapoor: Very well then, main abhi bas Maanvi ko call kar dunga, kal usse bhi yahan hona hai.

Viraat: No worries Mr. Kapoor, main usse bata dunga.

Mr. Kapoor: You sure?

Viraat: Absolutely, aap fikar mat kijiye.

Mr. Kapoor: Alright then, kal milte hai, sharpe at 6:00pm.

Viraat: Ji bilkul.


Viraat hanged the phone and turned around to face Maanvi, who was about to leave.


Viraat: Um, Maanvi...


She turned around towards him.


Viraat: Kal hume SK music company ke liye nikalna hoga at 6:00 pm. Meri final recording hai.

Maanvi: Thik hai.


With that she turned around and left a guilty Viraat behind. Viren came towards Viraat and touched his shoulder as he found him lost in his own world.


Viren: Kya hua Viraat?

Viraat: Huh..uh..nahi kuch nahi Bhai.

Viren: Ok...Anyways maine tickets book kardi hai hai, kal ek baje ki flight hai, aur maine ghar walon ko bhi bata diya ki hum aa rahe hai (smiles widely) chaar chaar surprises le kar.

Viraat: (frowns) Ek Baje? Par Bhai meri 6:00 pm recording hai.

Viren: Recording, par flight, yeh ek hi flight hai jo iss pure hafte chandigrah jayegi.

Viraat: Main yeh recording nahi miss kar sakhta Bhai. Mujhe aur Maanvi ko wahan jaana hi hoga.

Viren: Toh ab hum yahan ek hafte.

Viraat: Nahi Bhai, aap, bhabhi, Virika aur Mannat ke saath chandigrah chale jaiye flight se, main aur Maanvi by car aa jayeinge.

Viren: Nahi Viraat, chalna hai toh saath chaleinge.

Viraat: Bhai, apne ghar mein sabko bata diya hai, woh sab intezaar kareinge , (smiles) bahut impatient bhi honge yeh jaanane ke liye ki surprise kya hai, unhe wait karwana acha nahi hoga, aur fir Bacche by car jaaye iss mein shayad woh comfortable na ho.

Viren: (frowns) Tu sahi hai par tum dono...

Viraat: (hand on his shoulder) Bhai, main sab sambhal lunga, aap chinta mat karo.

Viren: Pakka sab sambhallega?

Viraat: Pakka. Jaise hi recording khatam hum Chandigrah ke liye nikal jayeine.

Viren: Thik hai.


~Next Morning~


Maanvi and Jeevika were in the kitchen, preparing the breakfast for everyone. While Viraat, Viren, Mannat, and Virika were fast asleep.


Maanvi: Di, aapka saman pack ho gaya?

Jeevika: Haan Mannu, aur tera?

Maanvi: Haan Di ho gaya.

Jeevika: Acha chal yeh table par rakh kar, sab ko uthane chalte hai.

Maanvi: (smiles) Haan.


Maanvi and Jeevika walked towards the table, placed the breakfast, and headed towards Virika and Mannat's room.


Maanvi: (big wide smile) Good Morning mere dono Angels.

Jeevika: Yeh dekho, dono toh abhi tak so rahi hain.

Maanvi: Kal der se jo soye the dono...

Jeevika: Wahi toh, packing ka bhoot jo sawar tha.

Maanvi: (sitting on the bed along with Jeevika) Waise kitni pyaari lag rahi hai na dono.

Jeevika: Haan bahut pyaari.

Maanvi: (smiles) Pata hai Di, in dono ko jab bhi saath dekhti hun toh mujhe humare woh purane din yaad aate hai...kaise hum aise hi masti karte the, ek dusre ke saath rehte the.

Jeevika: (smiles back) Haan, aur woh ganga ghat,,,aur agar dono mein se kisi ko bhi kuch ho jaye toh dusra puri duniya apne sarpar utha leta.

Maanvi: (cutely) Aap indirectly mujhe bol rahe ho na?

Jeevika: Um...Nahi toh...(laughs along with Maanvi) acha ab dono ko uthaye?

Maanvi: Haan.


Jeevika kisses Mannat on her cheeks, while Maanvi kissed on Virika's.


Jeevika/Maanvi: Good morning Humari Angels'...chalo utho subha ho gayi.

Mannat: (sleepy tone/eyes still closed) Mujhe aul chona hai. (I wanna sleep more.)

Maanvi: (pulling Mannat's cheeks cutely) Aww mela baccha..aul chona hai.

Virika: (covering her ears and Mannat's ears with a pillow) Haan aul sona hai.


Maanvi and Jeevika smiled at Virika's act. A protective sister indeed.


Jeevika: Hmm...(smirks) chal Mannu, hum inhe sone dete hai, aur fir hume nikalna bhi toh hai na, ghar jaana hai.

Mannat/Virika: (sits up on the bed with wide open eyes) Ghal? (HOUSE)

Maanvi: (pretending to be shocked) Arey aap dono uth kaise gaye? Aap dono ko toh aur sona tha na. (covering them with the duvet) Chalo chalo so jao.

Jeevika: (suppressing her laughter) Haan so jao.

Mannat/Virika: (shouting out loud) Nahiii...


Both got up from there bed and ran towards the bathroom. Maanvi and Jeevika hi-5'ed with wide grin on their face.


Maanvi: That was easy.

Jeevika: Yup it was. Chalo ab tum Viraat ko uthane jao main Viren Ji ko uthati hun.


Maanvi looked down. Jeevika understood what Maanvi was thinking, but she couldn't do much. From now on, for their kids, they have to stay together as a couple, and for that, they have to forget everything and move on, with each other.


Jeevika: (hand on her shoulder) Mannu?

Maanvi: Uh...(looks up at Jeevika) ha...haan di...

Jeevika: Hume yeh karna hoga. Mannat aur Viri ke liye.


Maanvi nodded positively and gave her a small smile. Both sisters walked away, with nervousness fully seen on their face.


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~Viren's Room~


Jeevika knocked on the door, but she didn't get any reply. She took a deep breath and opened the door. She peeked in and saw Viren still fast asleep. She walked towards his bed, her heart was beating at the highest rate. She gulped and raised her hand to shake Viren.


Jeevika: Viren..JI...


Viren just turned with his eyes closed, unaware of who is waking him up. This time Jeevika shook him a little harder then before.


Jeevika: Viren JI...uthiye.

Viren: (cuddling onto a pillow) Hmm...sone do na Maa,

Jeevika: (shocked) Maa? (looking at him with deadly glare) Teen saal mein Biwi ko bhul gaya.


This time she shook him harder then before, out of anger.


Jeevika: Viren Ji uthiye, nasta thand ho raha hai, aur hume aaj nikalna bhi hai.

Viren: (sits up with a jerk) Maa...

Jeevika: (hands on her hips) Maa nahi Biwi hun aapki, uthiye.


She picked up a pillow and hits him on his shoulder. He looks up at her with a shocking expression.


Viren: Jeevika?

Jeevika: Chalo yaad toh aaya. Ab uthiye.


She left the room, a bit angrily, which made Viren grin at her antics.


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~Viraat's  Room~


Maanvi reached at the door of Viraat's room. She raised her hand to open the door, but pulled her hand back.


Maanvi: Yeh tu kya kar rahi hai Mannu? Kaise maaf kar sakhti hai usse, jisne tujhse teri bacchi ko dur rakha. Kaise? (turns her back towards the door) Nahi, Main nahi maaf kar sakhti usse, nahi. Main...Par Mannat, ussne toh tum dono ko chhuna hai na Mannu, toh kya uske liye tu usse maaf nahi kar sakhti?


Maanvi was in dilemma, her heart was telling her to forgive Viraat, but her mind was totally against her heart.


Maanvi: Main...Mannat ke liye...sab bhulne ko taiyaar hun, (turns bacl towards the door) sab kuch bhulne ko taiyaar hun. Tumhe maaf karne ke liye bhi Viraat. Main taiyaar hun. EK AUR BAAR WAHI LIFE JEENE KE LIYE TAIYAAR HUN. Tumhare saath.


She took a deep breath and opened the door. Walking inside, looking at the bed, where her Husband was sleeping peacefully. Once she reached near the bed, she was admiring him sleeping like a baby. He always looks like a baby, whenever he is in his deep sleep. A smile crept over her lips, she sat on the side of the bed and placed her palm on his cheek. Viraat turns completely, lying straight, as he felt her cold soft hand on his face. His eyes were still closed, his hand moved up and held Maanvi's hand which was on his face. This made Maanvi come back to her sense. She tried pulling her hand from his grip, which irritated him and he made his grip even tighter.


Maanvi: Vi...Vir, Viraat...


Maanvi's heartbeat was increasing by every second, she gulped hard and closed her eyes. Once she relaxed a bit, she raised her other hand to shake him.


Maanvi: Viraat...

Viraat: (whining like a baby/sleepy tone) Mmmhm...Sone do Maanvi.


Maanvi's heart skipped a beat. How did he know that it was her, as he was still sleeping.


Viraat: (smiles cutely/eyes closed) Maanvi...


Her eyes widened as she heard her name, again. She tried pulling her hand away once again, but this only made him tightened his grip on her hand and pulled her on top of him. Still deep in sleep. Maanvi's heart was beating at an uncontrollable rate. She tried getting off of him before he opens his eyes, but was unsuccessful. Viraat wrapped his hands around her waist and rolled on top of her, which freaked Maanvi even more. Her breath hitched at his touch, as if its burning her skin. Maanvi closed her eyes as she felt something wet on the crook of her neck. Viraat's face was hidden in her hair, and his warm lips were softly touvhing Maanvi's neck with kisses,,,,but still in his sleep. Maanvi was lost..lost in her Husbands arms, in his touch, she wasn't able to think straight. She was scared that if he opens his eyes and see them in this position than what crises might rise. But right now she didn't care. The only thing she cared for right now is her being in the arms of the person whom she loves more than anything. Viraat was busy exploring her neck, jaw line, cheeks with his soft wet kisses. He didn't know what he was doing, he was awake, but his eyes were still closed. He was enjoying their closeness, her sweet scent, her hot breath which was lingering on his earlobe. Its was impossible for them to control their emotions which was hidden somewhere in their hearts for past three years. Being in each others arms was the one place they missed the most. They tried to ignore that feeling until today, where they are lost in each other's warmth. They came out of their sweet moment as they heard their little Princess coming in the room.


Mannat: (hopping towards the door of the room) Mama..Papa...Mama...Papa...Mam...


Mannat was staring at her Mom and Dad confusedly, while Maanvi was fixing her dupatta around her neck, and Viraat fixing his hair out of embarrassment.


Mannat: (cutely) Mama Papa, aap dono chaat mein shoye the? (Mama Papa, did you guys slept together?)


Maanvi's face turned fully red due to embarrassment.


Mannat: Bolo na Mama.

Maanvi: (changing the topic) Um...Mannat aapko bhook lagi hogi na baccha, chalo hum nasta karte hai.

Mannat: (cutely/innocently) Main pehle Papa ko good molning bol dun Mama? (Before that can I wish Papa Good Morning?)

Maanvi: (smiles at her cuteness) Haan.


Mannat ran into her Dad's arms as Maanvi got off of the bed.


Mannat: (giving him a tight hug) Good molning Papa. (Good Morning Papa.)

Viraat: (kisses on her cheek) Good Morning meri Princess.

Mannat: Mela hug kahan hai Papa? (Where's my hug Papa?)

Viraat: Arey Haan meri Princess ka hug. (spreads his hands out for her to hug) Aajao.

Mannat: Nahi.

Viraat: (confused) Nahi? Kyun?

Mannat: (smiles sweetly at botth of them) Mujhe aap dono che hug chahiye. (I want a hug from both of you.)


Viraat and Maanvi looked at each other.


Viraat: Mannu...

Mannat: (pouts cutely/looking at Maanvi) Mama, mujhe dono che hug chahiye, plij. (Mama, I want a hug from both of you. Please.)

Maanvi: (smiling at her cuteness) Bilkul meri Nautanki Princess.


Maanvi sat on the bed and gave Mannat a big hug. Mannat pulled her hand out for Viraat to join in the hug. Viraat at first hesitated, but later he wrapped one hand around Mannat and hugged her. Maanvi smiled at Mannat who was happily hugging her parents. After a little while, Viraat wrapped his other hand around Maanvi, she looked up at him, and saw him pulling Mannat's cheek cutely. Her lips curved into a big smile. After three long years, she was back with her family, her happiness was back, her smile was back, her life was back, in form of MANNAT. Her Daughter, her Princess, her Angel, Her MANNAT.



That's it guys,,,I hope u lykd it...plz leave ur comments n hit lyk 4 me if u lykd it...Thnk u,,once again sorry 4 da delay...Love Artii...

Edited by Artii159 - 12 January 2014 at 1:05am

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thank u so much.. bht wt ki updt k lye... thnks agn Big smile

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nice update finally both are decide to stay
with each other for there daughter sake
update soon

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Update after a longgg Tym :D
It was such an awesomeee one...
I loved it!!!!
Plz try to update fast :)

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suprbbb updtt...
lovd it...
nxt updt jldi plzzz...

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yipeee finallly
i waswaiting for soo long
thank u ashta for posting it..
tell ur sis i am really angry  on her..
finally virman ek saaath awww mannat how adorablee!!!!!!1Embarrassed
do continue soon
 

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