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VirMan FF~Kuch Iss Tarah~Thread#3*Part 51* Pg 54 (Page 35)

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Hello my lovely readers...m bck, I really hope u'll lyk dis...thnks a lot 4 ur lovely comments...n lyks...EnJoY..SORRY SORRY SORRY 4 THE LATE UPDATE...



VirMan...Kuch Iss Tarah...Part 47...

~Recap~


~Present~

Maanvi: Sab ek jhatke mein khatam ho gaya tha...sab...kya kal bhi,,,aisa hi hoga...???


She closed her eyes, holding the second meaning of her life, in her arms, letting the tears of fear flowing down from her eyes.

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~Next Morning~


Maanvi opened her eyes and saw the most adorable thing on earth, sleeping beside her. A huge smile crept over her lips, looking at her Mannat, sleeping peacefully, with a cute smile on her face.

Maanvi: Teen saal, teen saal main iss din ke liye kitna tadpi hun. (smiles through her tears) Aaj yeh pal mere saath hai. Mere paas hai. Yeh pyaara sa pal mujhse koi dur na karde, (tears rolling down her face) main jee nahi paungi. Nahi jee paungi.


Tears continuously rolled down her cheeks, she leaned towards Mannat and placed a soft, cute kiss on her forehead.

Maanvi: I Love You Baccha. (stroking her hair) Mamma se ab kabhi dur mat jaana Baby, Mamma jee nahi payeingi. Dur mat jaana.


She kissed on her forehead once again and then got out of the bed, towards the bathroom.

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~Viraat & Viren~


Viraat was in Viren's room, trying to wake him up.

Viraat: (shaking Viren) Bhai please utho na.

Viren: (sleepy tone)  Viraat sone de na yaar.
Viraat: Bhai utho na, time ho gaya hai.

Viren: (looks up at him with half opened eyes) Kaisa time? (closes his eyes) Hume kahin nahi jaana, aa tu bhi thodi der so jaa.
Viraat: Bhai...

Viren: So jaa...
Viraat: (frowns) Mujhe nahi sona, aap utho abhi.

Viren: (looks up at him) Arey par...wajha batayega kyun utha raha hai itni subha subha? (puts his head back on the pillow)
Viraat: Aap bhul gaye? Bhai hume Mannat ko lene jaana hai.


Viren looked up at Viraat and then at the clock.

Viren: (looking at him disbelievingly) Mannat ko lene?

Viraat: (smiles) Haan Bhai.
Viren: Abhi?

Viraat: Haan toh aur kya?
Viren: (annoyedly/sits up) Viraat tera dimaag kharab hai? Subha ke chaar baje hain abhi. Itni subha toh koi pagal bhi na uthe.

Viraat: Haan toh Bhai, hume subha hi jaana tha na, (smiles widely) dekho subha ho gayi hai.
Viren: (shaking his head disbelievingly) Viraat subha matlab nau(9) ya das(10) baje ke aas paas. Chaar baje koi kisi ke ghar jaata hai kya? Aur humari Princess toh abhi tak uthi hi nahi hogi.
Viraat: Haan par (smiles) Princess ki Mamma uth gyi hogi. Uski adat hai Bhai subha chaar baje uth jaana. Jab woh pragnant thi tab se har subha char baje uth jaati thi, abhi bhi uski adat nahi badli hogi. Utho na please Bhai.
Viren: Tu sunega nahi na meri baat. Kaha na jaa kar so jao. Itni subha hum nahi jayeinge. Aur agar isse aage zidh ki toh subha nau ya das baje nahi raat ke nau das baje pahochaunga tujhe wahan. Aur na tujhe khud se jaane dunga, samjha tu? Chal ab so jaa.

Viraat: (frowns) Bhai...?

Viren: (lying back on the bed) So jaa.

Viraat pouts cutely and lied beside Viren unwillingly.

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~Chaudhary's House, Delhi~


Maanvi was standing in the Mandir, hands folded and eyes closed in front of Goddess Durga's idol.

Maanvi: Devi Maa, aap bhi toh ek Maa hain na, mere dil par kya guzri hai, yeh aap se bahetar aur koi nahi samjh sakhta. Ek Maa ke liye unke bacche kya hai yeh unke ilava aur koi nahi samjh sakhta. Mata Rani, (teary eyes) aaj meri Mannat mere paas, mere saath hai. (tears streaming down her face) Teen saal ke baad, jiske liye main har din aansun bahati thi, aaj mere aankhon ke samne hai. Devi Maa, please mujhse meri Mannat ko alag mat karna, mat karna Devi Maa, iss baar main sach mein seh nahi paungi, jee nahi paungi. Mat karna Mata Rani, please mat karna.


Jeevika, who was standing behind a wall, turned around with tears in her eyes.

Jeevika: (looking up) Mata Rani, meri galti ki saza ab aur meri Bahen ko mat sehne dena. Meri Mannu ko uski Mannat se dur mat karna Mata Rani. Itne saal baad in dono ko milaya hai aapne, please dur mat karna. Teen saal baad apni Bahen ko khush dekha hai maine. (hands folded/tears rolling down) Please uski khushi mat chhinana. Please Mata Rani.


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~Hotel Room..7:15am~


Viraat jumped on the bed where Viren was sleeping peacefully.

Viraat: Bhai chalo chalo get up.

Viren: (frowns/sleepy tone) Yaar...tu fir aa gaya.
Viraat: (smiles) Haan, main fir aa gaya. Ab chalo utho warna late ho jayeinge.

Viren: Class nahi hai teri, na koi office ka kaam, ya koi concert jo hum late ho jayeinge. (covers his face with a pillow) Sone de mujhe.
Viraat: (pulls the pillow away) Bhai, aap jante ho na, Mannat Vadhera, kisi class, kisi office, ya kisi concert se kam nahi hai, late huye, toh jo punishments wahan milti hai, usko double karke degi humari Princess.
Viren: Haan.
Viraat: Bhai utho na (pouts) kitni der ho gayi Mannat ko dekhe huye.

Viren: (looking up at him) Kal hi dekha tha.
Viraat: Kal, Bhai kaaalll...

Viren: (laughs at him) Bas kar nautanki.
Viraat: (smiles) Chalo abhi utho aap.

Viren: Time kya hua hai?
Viraat: Time, abhi...7:25 ho gaya.

Viren: Yaar, itna time bacha hai, kaunsi train chhut rahi hai teri. (closes his eyes) Sone de.
Viraat: Bhai dekho apne kaha tha nau baje, aapke taiyaar hote hote nau baj jayeinge. (pulling him up) Chaliye uthiye.
Viren: (sits up) Maine Nau-Das baje ke aas paas bola tha, tujhe sirf nau sunai diya?

Viraat: (smiles) Haan. Woh sab chodo Bhai, (stands up) come'on get up.
Viren: (frowns) Hadh hai Yaar Viraat.
Viraat: (pulling him off of the bed) Utho.

Viren got out of the bed unwillingly and walked away towards the bathroom.

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~Chaudhary House...Delhi, 8:30 am~


Maanvi entered her room and saw Mannat stretching her tiny little arms up in the air. She smiled looking at her angel Daughter.

Maanvi: (walking towards the bed) Good Morning Meri Princess. Kaisa hai mela Baccha?


Mannat smiled at Maanvi.

Mannat: Good molning Mama. Main thik hun, aap kaiche ho? (Good morning Mom, I'm fine, how are you doing?)

Maanvi: (sits beside her and hugs her tightly) Main bhi bilkul thik hun Princess. Chalo, get up, hum pehle nasta karte hain, aur fir Masti..(wild smile)

Mannat: (huge smile) Yay...
Maanvi: Mama aapko ready karde?

Mannat: (smiles) Haan Mama..

Maanvi smiled and carried Mannat in her arms towards the bathroom.

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Jeevika: (looking at Mannat) Viri kya kar rahi ho, maine kaha na apna breakfast karo.

Virika: Pal Mama, abhi Mannat nahi aayi hai na. (But Mom, Mannat isn't here yet.)


Virika was waiting for Mannat, while Jeevika was preparing breakfast for Maanvi and Mannat.

Maanvi: (walking towards the dinning table with Mannat) Yeh rahi humari Mannat.

Virika: (wide smile) Mannat tum aa gayi, aao mele paas baitho. (Mannat you are here, come sit beside me.)

Maanvi made Mannat sit beside Virika and walked towards Jeevika to help her.

Maanvi: (smiles) Good morning Di.

Jeevika looked at Maanvi and smiled with teary eyes.

Jeevika: Good..morning Mannu.

Virika: (frowns) Mannu Maasi, aaj aap mujhe bhul gaye.

Maanvi: Haww..aisa kaise ho sakhta hai...(walking towards Virika) Sholly mela Baccha...(kisses on her cheek) Good morning my Angel.

Virika: (hugs her) Good molning Mannu Maasi. (Good morning Mannu Maasi.)

Mannat: (smiles at Jeevika) Maachi Maa, Good molning. (Maasi Maa, good morning.)

Jeevika: (smiles at her) Good Morning Mannat, kaisi hai humari Princess?

Mannat: Main thik hun Maachi Maa. (I'm fine Maasi Maa,)  
Jeevika: Acha, very good. Toh batao aaj humari Princess kya khayegi?

Mannat: (smiles, cutely) Blead. (Bread.)

Jeevika: (laughs at her cuteness) Blead khayegi. Chalo main abhi deti hun aapko blead.

Jeevika walked towards Mannat with a plate of bread.

Jeevika: (putting the plate in front of Mannat) Yeh rahi aapki bread.

Mannat: (looking up at Jeevika)  Maachi Maa, jaiche Mama ne Vilika di ko kicch kiya, waiche aapne mujhe kyun nahi kiya? (Maasi Maa, the way Mom kissed Virika Di, why didn't you kissed me the same way?)

Maanvi and Jeevika looked at each other and smiled.

Jeevika: (hands on her cheeks) Haye mela Baccha. Toh abhi kar deti hun na.

Jeevika kissed Mannat on both of her cheeks, which made her giggle.


Maanvi: Chalo Di hum bhi karte hain nasta.

Jeevika: (smiles) Haan.

Maanvi and Jeevika were about to sit, but the door bell went on, repeatedly.


Maanvi: Kaun pagal hai jo aise bell baja raha hai.

Jeevika: (getting up) Main dekhti hun.
Maanvi: Nahi Di aap baitho (getting up) main dekhti hun uss pagal ko.

Maanvi walked towards the door and opened it angrily.

Maanvi: (shouting at that mad person, angrily) Pagal ho kya? Aise koi...

Maanvi stopped as she saw the person in infront of her.


Maanvi: (eyes widdened) Tum.


It was none other then Viraat, with his brother Viren.


Viren: (smiles) Good morning Saali Saibha.

Maanvi moved her eyes from Viraat to Viren and gave him a small smile.


Maanvi:
(smiles) Good morning Jiju.
Viren: Kya hum andar aa sakhte hai?

Maanvi: Uh..Haan, ji, aaiye na.


Maanvi moved aside, allowing Viren and Viraat to enter.

Viren: (looking around) Wow, yeh ghar toh bahut khubsurat hai.

Maanvi: (smiles) Thanks Jiju.

Viren: (looking at Maanvi) Baaki sab kahan hai?

Maanvi: Woh breakfast.
Viren: Oh, hum sahi time par aaye hai. Humne bhi kuch nahi khaya, (looking at Viraat, smiling sarcastically) thanks to Viraat. (smiles at Maanvi) Can we join?

Maanvi: (smiles) Of course Jiju. Aaiye na.
Viren: Chal Viraat.

Viren and Viraat followed Maanvi to the dinning room.

Maanvi: Aaiye.

Jeevika, Virika, and Mannat looked up as they heard Maanvi's voice. Virika and Mannat smiled widely.

Virika & Mannat: (smiling widely) PAPA...


Maanvi looked at Viraat, while Jeevika looked up at Viren. Viraat happily ran towards Mannat and carried her in his arms. Viren went towards Virika and hugged her tightly.

Viraat: (hugging her) Mannu, kaisi hai meri Princess? (pulls away) Pata hai Papa ne apni Princess ko kinna miss kiya.

Mannat: (smiles) I micched u too Papa. (I Missed You Too Papa.)

Viraat kissed Mannat all over her face, with tears in his eyes. Maanvi, who also had tears in her eyes, was looking at the Father-Daughter duo.

Viren: (smiles) Meri Viri kaisi hai?

Virika: (smiles cutely) Main toh thik hun Papa.

Viren: (kisses on her cheeks) Very Good. (turn towards Mannat) Aur meri Mannat kaisi hai?

Mannat: (arms extanded out for Viren) Bale Papa...
Viren: (takes her in his arms) Hi mela Baby, kaisa hai?

Mannat: (smiles) Main thik hun Bale Papa.

Viren: Acha? Waise, Mannat ne Bade Papa ko miss kiya?

Mannat: (cutely) Mannat ne toh Bale Papa ko bahut challa micch kiya. (Mannat missed her Bade Papa a lots.)

Viren: Arey wah, aapko Pata hai, Bade Papa ne bhi na, Mannat ko bahut bahut bahut miss kiya. (kisses on her cheek)

Mannat: Chhachi? (Really?)

Viren: Muchi. (kisses on her other cheek)

Mannat kissed back Viren on his cheeks. Jeevika and Maanvi smiled looking at Mannat and Viren's sweet moments. Viraat walked towards Virika and sat beside her.

Viraat: (hits his shoulder with her tiny ones.) Oye, meri Choti Bhabhi, (smiles) kaisi hai?

Virika: (confused) Choti Bhabhi? Pal Chachu, main toh aapki Bhabhi nahi hun. (Choti Bhabhi? But Chachu i'm not your Bhabhi.)
Viraat: (pretending to be shocked) Acha? Par aap toh bilkul meri Bhabhi jaisi dikhti ho.

Virika: (cutely) Sachi muchi?
Viraat: Haan bilkul.
Virika: Aapki Bhabhi kaun hai Chachu?

Viraat: Meri Bhabhi, (smiles) aapki Mama hai.

Virika: (smiles) Oh, meli Mama. (Oh, my Mom.)

Viraat: Haan.

Virika: (happily) Main Mama jaisi dikhti hun?

Viraat: Bilkul.
Virika: (looking at Jeevika) Mama main aapke jaisi dikhti hun?

Jeevika: (smiles) Haan Viri.
Mannat: (looking at everyone/cute & innocently) Aul main kichke jaiche dikhti hun? (Whom do I look alike?)

Viren: Aap na...

Viraat: (looking at Mannat) Aap bhi bilkul apni Mama jaisi dikhti ho. (smiles widely) Bahut Pyaari.

Viraat raised his gaze up towards Maanvi, who was already looking at him,  as he realized what he just said. Jeevika and Viren smiled, looking at Viraat and Maanvi.

Mannat: (looking at Maanvi) Mama, mujhe khilao na.

All four of them turned their gaze towards Mannat.

Maanvi: (smiles at Mannat) Haan...


Maanvi walked towards Mannat and sat beside her. Everyone else sat down and started their breakfast.

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Virika were standing besides the sofa, with Virika in Viren's arms, while Maanvi and Viraat were standing in the middle of the hall, with Mannat in between them. Viraat knelt down in fornt of Mannat, and placed his palm on her face.

Viraat: Mannat, (palm on her cheeks) Baby kal aap pure din Mama ke saath thi, unke saath kheli, unke saath masti ki. Par Beta, yeh roz nahi ho sakhta na, toh aaj aapko Mama aur Papa mein se kisi ek ko chhuna hoga,. Aap kiske saath rehna chahte ho? Mama ke ya Papa ke?


Maanvi's eyes filled with tears along with Jeevika's. She grabbed the end of her dupatta in a tight fist. Mannat looked at Viraat and then at Maanvi, without any expression.

Viraat: Bolo Mannat, aapko kiske saath rehna hai? Papa ke saath ya Mama ke saath?

Mannat: Mujhe...Mele Papa Ke Chaath. (I want to be...With My Papa.)


Viraat smiled widely. Jeevika and Viren looked at Maanvi, who was standing there without any movements. A lone tear rolled down from Maanvi's eyes. Once again she has lost her Baby, once again she was left alone. She started walking backwards, lifelessly, and then turned around with a broken heart, fulfilling her promise that she made to Viraat.



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Guyz...m sorry due 2 my studies, i mite not b able 2 update on week day, unless i hve tym...but i'll try 2 update evry weekends if possible. nw da update mite b boring but...wat can i say...plz leave ur comments 4 me n hit lyk if u lykd it...Thnk u...Tc, Luv Aartii... (PM'S WILL B SEND OUT LATER)


Edited by Artii159 - 22 September 2013 at 3:44am

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Posted: 22 September 2013 at 3:06am | IP Logged
Lovely updt...loved mannat n virika so much as allways...hahahaha viren is so funny...but i think the last convo is just half part...waiting fr the next updt...cont asap...its hard to wait anymore
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Posted: 22 September 2013 at 3:07am | IP Logged
wowww... its amznggg
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awsmmm updt.. but glt time p stp kr dia... updt k lye itne jtda wt mt krwao plzzz.. cont soon.. Clap
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Posted: 22 September 2013 at 3:22am | IP Logged
nice update virika and mannant both are cute
waiting what will happen next update
and update soon
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Posted: 22 September 2013 at 4:11am | IP Logged
amazing update
vv bros part was funny
loved the way viraat was irritating viren by asking him to wake up
mannat was so cute as always
feeling bad for maanvi
she has got her daughter for just one day & now again she has to get separated
cant wait for the next part
please continue soon
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Posted: 22 September 2013 at 4:47am | IP Logged
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Thank u for d update first of all...!!! The update was fab aarti...
Virat was craving for mannat... Wish he could understand manvi's condition n pain...
N as expected mannat chose virat... She has been living wid virat n there is no way she would manvi i one single day... Though i know dere is a twist coming up, that would unite virman n they will live together for mannat's hapiness... N the scenes of the super 6 were too cute n lovable...
Looking forward for more...
Smile Smile Smile

Edited by naina927 - 22 September 2013 at 6:03am
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Posted: 22 September 2013 at 5:03am | IP Logged
awesome update
loved it
viren and virat's part was superb
mannat and virika are so cute
felt bad for maanvi
plz cont soon
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Posted: 22 September 2013 at 5:03am | IP Logged
this was surprising arti thanx alott for the update loved it even though chota tha ...
the vvbros part was fun seeing virat's excitment and also him remembering manvi's timing ...
mannat virika and jeeman parts were too cute also emotional and how jeeman admired their daughters convo and bonding with the vvbros Big smile
i feel still mannat didnt complete her sentence coz she will never leave her mom so easily ...
manvi's emotions and pain very well written as alwayz loved my mannat Big smile
waiting for the next one

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