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meri zindagi ho tum taarey os part 10 page 13 (Page 5)

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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 10:51am | IP Logged
awesome update
mind-blowing, loved the cute Taarey scene
precap is fantastic, intense Taarey romance love it
please update soon

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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 1:00pm | IP Logged
Wow awsm n luvly prt
Spl rey kissing Taani haaye
N per cape taarey romance
Wah I hope kriya don't create
Problem for taarey n do PM me plzz
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Posted: 05 July 2013 at 4:09am | IP Logged
Hello Friends I am back again with new chapter
part 5:
(Kria ke ghar me sab enjoy kar rahe hote hai itne me Kria ki mom bahar aati hai)
Kria M: Hello Kids How r u all?
All: han Aunty hum thik hai
Kria M: aur Rey  ya chabilal kya kahoon tumhe ? hmm
Rey:( darke idhar udhar dekhne lagta hai) han Aunty?
Kria M: are daro mat main asiehi majak kar rahi hoon ab muze tumse koi complaint nahi hai?
Rey(smile karke ): Thanks Aunty (in his mind) lekin use to bahot sari complaint hai jisase main pyar karta hoon ( aur taani ki taraf dekhta hai aur taani nazar chaurati hai)
 
Kria M: are Kria chal beta snacks leke aate hai aaja
 
Kria: ya mom
 
( inside the kitchen Kria's mom)
 
Kria M: Kria ,Rey bahot alag lagne laga hai na bahot matured ,responsible ye Rey vo hai hi nahi jise maine us waqt dekha tha
 
Kria: mumma ye vohi hai kuch nahi badla thik hai?
 
Kria M: are u sure beta ?
 
Kria : han mumma chalo abhi snacks leke jayen
 
Kria M: han jao ( Kria ki mom man me  sochti hai) pata nahi kyun jo kasak jo pyar me Rey ki ankhon me Kria ke liye us waqt dekha tha aaj vo nahi dikh raha hai pata nahi kyun he bhagvan please meri bachi ka khayal rakhna ab uska dil nahi tutna chahiye please bhagvan
 
( in the living room sab log snacks khate rehte hai  taani ke hat me plate hai aur vo kha rahi hoti hai aur shocked ho jati hai )
 
Sharon: kya hua babes tum itni kaanp kyu rahi ho hmm kuch hua hai kya ?
 
Taani: nahi kuch bhi nahi I am fine
 
Rey: han han taani batao na kya ho raha hai tumhe ?(he smiled)
( Taani kaise sabko bataye ki pichese Rey ne uski waist pakad li hai )
 
Kria: ye kya Rey sab log kha rahe hai aap ne kuch kyun nahi liya ?
 
Rey: nahi I don't want bhook nahi hai
 
Kria:kyun you are fine na kuch aur laoon?
 
Rey: no no now I am absolutely fine aur jo muze chahiye hoga vo main khud le leta hoon u know me na?( aisa bolke vo Taani ko dekhta hai aur Kria use,kria ko lagta hai ki vo un dono ke bare me bat kar raha tha)
 
Taani:Aashi muze tumse bat karni thi main vahan aaon ?
 
Aashi : han han aa jaiye
 
( aur Taani uthke Aashi ke pas jati hai aur vahanse Rey ko angrily dekhti hai aur Rey use aankh marke hasta hai)
 
Sharon: dude kya ho raha hai? kyun sata rahe hai use kya kiya tune jo vo vahan chali gayi?
 
Rey : kuch nahi
 
Sharon: dekho Rey mein tumhe achese janti hoon ok so don't behave like sant baba
( Rey smile karta hai aur puri sham uski taani ko stare aur embarrassed karne me jati hai aur Kria ki Rey ko dekhne me)
 
Next day in college :
 
Taani corridor me chal rahi  hoti hai  bahot ghusse me aur tension me use laga tha jo bhi us din canteen me hua usase Rey disturbed honge lekin Rey ne to U turn le liya, itne me use apne hat me ek strong grip feel hoti hai lekin vo kuch samjh paye itne me koi use fire exit me khich leta hai  aur vo aur kaun hoga yes Taani ka Rey
 
Taani: ye kya kar rahe ho aap ?
 
Rey: kyun nahi kar sakta ?
 
Taani : nahi kyunki hamara breakup ho chuka hai so please muzse door rahiye
 
Rey: kab  hua hamara breakup tum galat samjh rahi ho aisa kuch bhi nahi hua hai?
 
Taani: hua hai please muze jane dijiye
 
( vo jane lagti hai ye hat pakadke use apni taraf khinchta hai aur dono hat se use pakdta hai like Taani and Rey dance sequence in RH)
 
Rey: nahi Taani ab nahi ab nahi chod sakta aur ab kya kabhibhi nahi chodunga maine kabhi bataya nahi dikhya nahi par tumhare bina main nahi ji paaonga Taani aur main janta hoon ki tum aaj ghusse me ho par ji to tum bhi nahi paogi mere bina
( aisa kehke vo use neck pe chumne lagta hai with a wet kiss)
agar tum muzse pyar nahi karti na to mere pas atehi tumhari dhadkane yun  badh nahi jati ,tumhara yun jor jor se sas lena ,meri taraf na dekhna ye dikhata hai ki main kaun hoon tumahra(ye kehke vo Taani ka face apni taraf karta hai aur use forehead pe fir cheek pe  aur fir passionately neck pe kiss karne lagta hai )
 
Taani(  fully melted): jane dijiye Rey please chodiye na please please Rey mat kijiye aisa ( aur ye kehta hue vo uske shairt ko pichese jor se pakdti hai aur fir uske balo me hat ghumake uske neck pe jati hai)
 
Rey: nahi Taani ab chodne ki bat mat karo ab hume koi door nahi kar sakta koi nahi
( Taani Rey ko kiss karne lagti hai aur vo doni is tarah un dono ke lovable moments me khone lagte hai  ki Rey ka phone bajta hai )
 
Taani: aapka phone Rey ( aur ekdamse hosh me aake)  aapka phone hai
 
Rey: han han ( dono sharma jate hai aur ek dusreki taraf dekh bhi nahi pate )
 
Rey: ya dude?
 
Swayam: tu kahan hai hum log tera wait kar rahe hai canteen me
 
Rey: han yaar aa raha hoon ( Rey bat kara raha hai ye dekhke Taani vahanse bhag jati hai ,Rey piche dekhta hai aur Taani vahan nahi hoti ) chal thik hai Swayam main aata hoon
 
Swayam: han jaldi aa vo Kria ko kuch important announcement karni hai
 
Rey:kya announcement?
 
Swayam: don't know yaar dekhte hai
 
(Rey phone rakhta hai aur canteen ki taraf jane lagta hai yahan Taani bhagke girls locker room aake apne bal aur aapne emotions ko thik kar rahi hoti hai ek taraf blush kar rahi hoti hai aur dusri taraf confuse ki agar vo move on hona chahti hai to kyun nahi rok payi vo Rey ko apne pas aane se)
 
Taani: (in her mind) kya ho jata hai tuze Taani  jab bhi Rey samne aate hai tab, tu to bahot badi  badi bat kar rahi thi ki past ko bhula doongi aage badhungi fir ab kya hua ? tu bhi na Taani pagal hai are  past ko bhul sakti hai par kya  sans lena bhul sakti hai ,sapne dekhna bhul sakti hai ,pyar karna bhul sakti hai ? nahi are jo insan tera past nahi teri sanse ban chukka hai use chodke kaise aage badhegi aur agar badh gayi to kya zinda reh payegi nahi to kyun jhooth bol rahi hai apne aapse aur Rey se bhi Mana unse galti hui par kya unki galti itni badi hai ki uski saja unhe zaindagi bhar milni chahiye aur kya unhe saja deke tu khush hai nahi na ja Taani apne Rey ke pas aur unke sath milke aage badh tohi tu puri ho sakti hai varna sab kuch pake bhi adhuri rahegi kyunki tum dono ki zindagi tum dono puri kar sakte ho( vo apne aapse smile karti hai aur mirror me dekhke khud ko thodasa sawarke kehti hai) Rey aa rahi hoon aapke pas hamesha ke liye ab na aapko door jane doongi na khud jaaongi ab ye taarey pyar ke asman me hamesha chamkenge ( aur voSharon ko messege karti hai ki aap sab kahan ho aur Sharon relpy karti hai canteen me)
 
Taani: chal beta Taani ho ja tayar
 
( canteen me sab log Kria ke wait kate rehte hai)
 
Neha : anyone know kya what kria want to kehna?
 
Swayam: nahi Neha kisiko nahi pata ?
 
Sharon: Patience rakho yar pata chal jayega
 
(Rey entered)
 
Rey: wassup guys?
 
Vicky: ek minute idhar dekh ye kya be tera chehra itna tamatar ke jaisa kyun lal ho raha hai
 
Neha: stupid u r ise lal hona nahi blush hona kehte hai kyun rey han?
 
Rey: kuch bhi koi mila nahi kya subah se ( sab tease karne lagte hai  itne me Kria entry leti hai )
 
Kria: hi Guys how ru?
 
All: Hi
 
Kria: hi Rey ( with blushing)
 
Rey: Hi( he is also blushing par Taani aur uske bich jo hua vo sochke so vo hi bhi Kria ki taraf bina dekhe kehta hai)
 
Kria : ok ok guys maine tum logonko keha tha ki muze kuch announce karana hai so r u ready?
 
Swayam: han han ready hai bolo
 
Kria: Rey yahan aayenge ye bat aap yahan aayenge to hi ho sakti hai
 
Rey: its ok Kria main yahin hoon bolo na tum
 
Kria: pls Rey aaiye na ( Rey Sharon aur Swayam ko dekhta hai aur vo ishare me kehte hai ki go)
 
Rey: ya I am here now now tell us
 
Kria: guys main jab yahanse gayi to bahot sari adhuri bate chodke gayi par ab vo sari bate mein puri karungi aapko yad hai Rey prevalentine day pe aap mere gahr aaye the aur maine kitna bura kiya tha aapke sath maine kaha tha ki aapse acha Swayam hai ,aapse dosti ka maine natak kiya the ,aapke pas aake aapse jyada famous hona chahti thi main
 
Rey: jane do Kria ab bahot purani bate hai main to bhul bhi chukka hoon sabke samne kyun bata rahi ho( with upset tone )
 
Kria: kyunki bhale hi vo bate maine aapse kahi thi aapko  dukh dene ke liye par vo kehte waqt main lakhon bar marti gayi Rey aur aaj sabke samne kahna chahti hoon ki vo sab jhooth tha ,aapse acha to koi ho hi nahi sakta Rey ,aur mere liye aap aur sirf aap hi ho. ye dekhiye us din jo jo aap mere liye laye the vo ab tak main apne pas rakha hai ( vo har gift dikhati hai jo Rey us din uske liye laya tha) aur guys aaj me confess karna chahti hoon ki sirf aaj nahi na jane kabse main sirf aapke bare me sochti hoon maine aapse kaha tha ki aap mere ache dost se kuch jyada ho gaye ho par ab nahi Rey ab aap mere dost nahi balki mera Pyar ho( Rey shocked hoke use dekhta hai) han REy sahi suna aapne "I LOVE U REY" ( jorse Kria pure canteen me chillati hai aur bas kehiti rehti I  love u rey I love u )
 
All: what ?Kria?
 
Kria: han Guys sahi suna  ( aur ye kehke vo Rey ko hug karti hai aur Rey stuned hoke dekhta hai tab use door pe Taani dikhti hai jo fully shatterd hoti hai )
 
( sab ek dusre ke taraf dekhte hai ki ab kya hoga )
 
 
Precap: Rey confront Kria ,Kria sad and Taani said Rey to go back to Kria
 
 
 
 

 

 

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Posted: 05 July 2013 at 4:22am | IP Logged
Beautiful update
Can't edit for next update
Plz update soon
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wow chp Cry
tr ka patchup krwado Embarrassed plz
aur updt soon Big smile
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Posted: 05 July 2013 at 5:32am | IP Logged
wow bit hot 
taarey movement 
but oh no now taani will move back nahi 
anyways thanks for PM 
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Posted: 05 July 2013 at 6:11am | IP Logged
awesome update...
taarey moments were super hot...
finally kriya confessed...
so i m eagrly waiting fr nxt update...
update soon

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