Fan Fictions

India-Forums

   
Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions

meri zindagi ho tum taarey os part 10 page 13 (Page 11)

-GoluGudiya- IF-Rockerz
-GoluGudiya-
-GoluGudiya-

Joined: 28 October 2012
Posts: 6158

Posted: 12 July 2013 at 3:45am | IP Logged
OMG ! Amazing Work ! All Parts were Fantastic ! Looking forward for the next part ...

-sanjy- Senior Member
-sanjy-
-sanjy-

Joined: 15 March 2013
Posts: 628

Posted: 12 July 2013 at 4:58am | IP Logged
yeh taani ko kya hua hai? Samaj Seva and kriya ka name jaapti rehti hai!
Amazing Update! 
Soumya.D. Senior Member
Soumya.D.
Soumya.D.

Joined: 03 February 2013
Posts: 559

Posted: 12 July 2013 at 5:36am | IP Logged
Lovely updt ...
Interesting precap ...
plss updt soon ...
dh19 IF-Rockerz
dh19
dh19

Joined: 21 September 2012
Posts: 6061

Posted: 12 July 2013 at 6:28am | IP Logged
awesome and emotional
try to cont. soon.
Goonies4Ever IF-Dazzler
Goonies4Ever
Goonies4Ever

Joined: 12 December 2008
Posts: 2664

Posted: 12 July 2013 at 8:09am | IP Logged
awsum update
anagharaj Senior Member
anagharaj
anagharaj

Joined: 11 June 2013
Posts: 412

Posted: 12 July 2013 at 11:06pm | IP Logged
update soon. waiting for next part.
parudTRsandhir Senior Member
parudTRsandhir
parudTRsandhir

Joined: 08 January 2013
Posts: 955

Posted: 13 July 2013 at 3:54am | IP Logged
nice story...
plzzz update soon...SmileSmile
tarey_love Newbie
tarey_love
tarey_love

Joined: 27 June 2013
Posts: 40

Posted: 13 July 2013 at 6:34am | IP Logged
here is next part
 
 
part 9:
 
( after some time sab RH me aate hai ,Rey vahi rehta hai ,Sharon dekhti hai KI Rey lost hai  vo uske pas aati hai  )
 
Sharon: Rey r u ok?
 
Rey: han Sharon I am ok
 
Sharon: lag to nahi rahe ho
 
Rey: leave  it Sharon
 
( Kria entry leti hai aur Rey ki taraf dekhke blush karti hai )
 
Rey: Sharon ,muze aaj Kria se bat karnihi hogi isase pehle ki bat bahot aage badh jaye
 
Sharon: han lekin bat kya aur kaise karoge ?
 
Rey: vo to pata nahi par han jo bhi dil ki bat hai vo keh doonga kehna to padega
 
Simmi: kya bat hai guys kisase kya kehna hai ?
 
Sharon: kuch nahi babes  nothing
 
Simmi: any tension ?
 
Rey: no nahi tum log apni rehersal start karo main aata hoon
 
( Rey Kria ke pas jata hai )
 
Rey: Kria I want to talk to u
 
Kria: han bolo na Rey kya bat hai ?
 
Rey: yahan nahi kahin aur  ,fire exit ok
 
Kria: ok thik hai
 
Rey: chalo chalet hai ,guys hum log aate hai abhi
 
Gang: han ok
( Rey aur Kria jate hai aur unhe Swayam milta hai ,Swayam confusingly Rey ko dekhta hai )
 
Swyam: kahan ja rahe ho guys?
 
Kria: Rey ko muzse kuch bat karni hai hamare relationship ka pehla din hai na to itna to freedom doge na hume
 
Swayam:( confusingly Rey ko dekhta hai) ya sure lekin..
 
Rey: han Swayam tu andar ja na hum log aate hai abhi ok (isharese use andar jake Sharonse bat karneko kehta hai )
 
Swayam: ok bye see u
 
( Rey aur kria jate hai )
 
in RH:
 
Nil: ye kya ho raha hai guys hamare Rey ki life me ? kitana disturb hai vo aaj kal
 
Amar: ha le tat me Le to dekhte duth hota hai
 
(gang ko samjh nahi ata to vo bharat ko dekhti hai)
 
Bharat : abe bol raha hai ki sach me Rey ko dekhke dukh hota hai kya itna bhi nahi samjhte
 
Simmi: han Sharon tum bat karo na Taani aur Rey se
 
Sharon: no guys main ya koi aur bat karke kuch nahi hoga kyunki hum sath de sakte hai lekin problems face to unhe khudhi karni hai aur ye dil ka mamala hai guys yaha kisi aur ke dimag ki ya dil ki zaroorat nahi hoti kyunki hamara dil kabhibhi galat faisla nahi lene deta
 
Gang: kay bat hai Sharon puri dil ki doctor ban gayi ho ( Sharon blush karti hai)
 
Swyam: han guys sangat ka kuch to asar hoga na
 
( sab confusingly ek dusreko dekhte hai)
 
in fire exit:
 
(Rey aur Kria  Fire Exit ke vahan jate hai aur door kholte hai to vahan Taani baithi hui hoti hai aur ro rahi hai)
 
Kria: are Taani tum ,kya hua ro kyun rahi ho?
 
Taani:( ekdamse khadi ho jati hai aur Rey aur Kria ko dekhke sad ho jati hai) nahi bas aisehi kuch personal hai aap batao aap ko kuch kam tha kya jo yaha muze dhoodhte hue aaye
 
Kria: nahi Taani hum aapko nahi  actually ye meri aur Rey ki favourite spot hai milne ka aur aaj ye muzse kuch khas kehna chahte hai to yahan aa gaye hume nahi pata tha ki ye aapki bhi favourite pleace hai
 
Taani: nahi aisa kuch nahi ab ye meri favourite place nahi rahi u both carry on main chalti hoon
( Taani step chadte hue jane lagti hai ki uske hat ka bracelate Rey ke watch me atakta hai ,Kria ye dekhti hai )
 
Kria: are atak gaya lagta hai ye jagah bhi aapko nahi chodna chati hai kyun Taani?
 
Taani(smile karke): nahi Kria jagah ko hume nahi hume jagah ko chodna chahiye
 
Kria(confused): ji pata hai Taani aap kabhi kabhi bahot confusing bate karti ho(itne me uska phone bajta hai) Rey important call hai bat karke aaon
 
Rey: sure (vo fire exit se bahar jati hai) jagah tumhe chode ya tum jagah ko lekin main kya meri koi cheez tak tumhe muze door nahi jane degi
 
Taani: aisa kuch nahi hai( aur vo bracelate chudaneka try karne lagti hai)
 
Rey: aaramse muze koi jaldi nahi hai (smile karke)
 
Taani :lekin muze hai( bahot try karti hai par nahi nikalta to ghusse me bracelate tod deti hai)
 
Rey: are mera ghussa bechare Bracelate pe kyun nikal rahi ho main janta hoon aaj mere sath Kria ko dekhke bahot taklif ho rahi hai na ? bolo
 
Taani: nahi bilkul nahi (itne me Kria aa jati hai )
 
Kria: kya hua? are bracelate tut gaya kaise?
 
Taani: jab cheez asanise aapko na chode to use todhi dena chahiye( aisa kehke vo vahanse chali jati hai)
 
Kria: bapre universji kitne bhari word use karti hai ?
 
(Rey Kria ko dekhke smile karta hai ki vo aaj bhi utni hi innocent hai jitni tab thi)
 
Rey: ab hum bat kare
 
Kria: han boliye na Rey aapki bat sunane hi to aayi hoon
 
Rey: Kria main jo bhi kahunga please use aaramse sunana aur samjhneki koshish karna ok
 
Kria: boliye na Rey  kya bat hai?
 
Rey: main janta hoon Kria ki tum mere liye kya feel karti ho aur ye bhi janata hoon ki jo bhi karti vo sacche dil se karti ho par Kria ..
 
Kria: han boliye main sun rahi hoon( tensed hoke)
 
Rey: jab us waqt tumne mera dil toda tha tab tumpe bahot ghussa aaya tha ,bahot hate karne laga tha koi ladki aisa kaise kar sakti hai aisa bhi laga tha lekin aaj muze pata hai ki vo sab ek natak tha aur ye sunke acha bhi laga lekin ye sab jankar bhi aaj mere dil me vo feeling aa hi nahi rahi hai jo us waqt thi aur kabhi aayegi bhi nahi,kyunki Kria jo tumne kiya vo bhalehi natak tha lekin mera dil tutna,mera khudka tutna vo sach tha aaj agar tum kahogi ki vo drama tha tobhi us waqt ka dard kam nahi hoga hai na
 
Kria: main sun rahi hoon Rey boliye
 
Rey: to yahi Kria ki han tum meri dost ho aur hamesha rahogi par meri dost se jyada ab tum kabhi kuch nahi  ban sakti hum stah nahi ho skate Kria main vo feeling nahi la sakte tumhare liye please try to understand
 
Kria: lekin hum koshish to kar sakte hai na last time
 
Rey: pyar koshish se nahi dil se hota  hai Kria aur ab vo nahi hoga
 
Kria:lekin Rey..
 
Rey: nahi Kria nahi hoga muzse please
(Rey vahanse chala jata hai ,Kria roti rehti hai)
 
precap: Taani aur REy fanste hai Rain me aur kar baithte hai vo jo jise log kehte hai bhool lekin hum kehte hai pyar next part me pakka abhi thoda thak gayi hoon
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

The following 25 member(s) liked the above post:

vrimar41taareyKgirlLuvsD3Suhanitaareypritii_20lovelytaareyCharMarfan4everSoumya.D.-sanjy-doll_dimplesamiha_taarey--BabyBean--chinudollyforeverlazytaarey_vrimarNidaJavidTaaReyshamanbkGoonies4Ever-Fam_TaaReY-dh19raddhiMissu_TRAnysia--taareylove---chand91Viji.Chandran

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
"TILL THE SKY FALLS DOWN"::LOVE TAAREY:A TAAREY OS

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 50 51

Author: ...Jannat...   Replies: 404   Views: 85327

...Jannat... 404 85327 12 April 2014 at 12:04am by anonymous.me
Taarey FF-Taarey Blind Love

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 18 19

Author: stuti_29   Replies: 148   Views: 55203

stuti_29 148 55203 25 January 2014 at 8:13pm by shubhi_taarey
TaaRey FF "Married Life Of TaaRey" Thread 1

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 99 100

Author: -Fam_TaaReY-   Replies: 797   Views: 153172

-Fam_TaaReY- 797 153172 01 October 2013 at 6:18am by pd786
TeRi ZiNdAgI MeRI ZiNdAgI HaI#MaAnEeT#2#part 54 page 23

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 25 26

Author: SimplyAparajita   Replies: 200   Views: 42025

SimplyAparajita 200 42025 09 December 2012 at 1:00am by mansi.tripathi
#TeRI ZiNdAgI MeRi ZiNdAgI HaI#maaneet#thread 1

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 150 151

Author: SimplyAparajita   Replies: 1202   Views: 167521

SimplyAparajita 1202 167521 07 August 2011 at 2:03pm by prathyusmiling

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index