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VirMan OS: Our Baby, our Destination... (Page 2)

vamps1996 Senior Member
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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 2:59am | IP Logged
pari i myself dont know what to say or how to praise what uve written...this is exactly how we want the track to progress keeping the fun thing aside it is one of the most important and difficult phase of any couple's life and u have written it in a perfect way it should have been
the part i loved of instead of his decision when manvi let him be with her in the last month was beautiful and i feel it was so as she always needed him by her side and when the time came she couldnt help but let him be there and that was awsome thank you for writing it Heart


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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 3:00am | IP Logged
nice story

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 5:47am | IP Logged
This is really a beautiful os pari !!! i really loved it Heart virat restlessness,his uneasiness everything was portrayed awesomely Thumbs Up it really touched my heart :D the way it was presented superb :D manvi leeting virat feel everything even after the virat behavior awwn i juz loved it :D the journey of virat fear then to later accpet it !! wow pari this is really written so well !!! ending brought a big smile on my face :D


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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 6:21am | IP Logged
This was such a beautiful os!! Loved it!!
Virat's love for Maanvi and him accepting the baby were aweasome parts!!Smile
Truely amazing os!!

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 7:28am | IP Logged
Usually I give a long feedback but tOday I'm speechless! It was beautifully written.. Visioned every single line... Cvs ke saath kaam kar jake.. At least will get something to rejoice lol!! This was perfect... Finally the unwanted gift became wanted!!! Loved how u potrayed the journey.. With no dragging or excessive stuff. It was calm n composed chota packet bara dhamake types! Loved it <3 and towel hahahahha wasn't surprise at all lololol :p

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 7:54am | IP Logged
oh my god pari what an osClap
am totally speechless yaar, the way you described each n every emotion in it was beyond words. virat's reaction when he came to know that he is going to be father was very unique. afterall unique papa ke unique actions ROFL ROFL
in the middle of the story i thought he would understand but no he was still adamant on his decesion that he don't want baby. then he got slap from manvi that was unexpected (i hope present track mein bhi kuch aisa dekhne ko mil jayeEmbarrassed)
and in the end finally usko akal ayi and he shifted her things in their room back..and they received a beautiful gift of god as a daughter no actually angel of their life
        HAPPY ENDING

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 8:08am | IP Logged
awesome os

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 8:18am | IP Logged
nice os at last he came with them 

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