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MG-OneShot ~Tumse.. Aae Humsafar..~ Updated.. on pg-60/ Jan2. (Page 35)

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Hi!
Here is the update as promised. And this update is dedicated to @sheetalvasa &
@divya22
thanks for ur lovely comments. Hope this update will be upto ur expectations!
Thank u all..for ur pericious response.
Luv..
-Shona. Smile

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He had been trying her number from past 1 hour... But she was not answering her calls! He was getting so restless..thinking about the possible reason for her not answering it! He checked his watch.. "she must be in collage right now..but atleast message toh kar sakti hai..right..?" ..he thought to himself!
He tried few times more...then tried to do some of his work..but his heart was desperatly waiting for his phone to ring.
Actually, whenever he would call her she would recive it instantly or if couldnt..she would do message, letting him know the reason.. She never took this long in replying..so it was making him all the more restless now.

1 more hour passed and he decided to ring on the landline as he couldnt wait any more. He picked up his cell... but then stoped, unsure.. "wo toh ghar pe hogi nahi.. Fir?" he was busy deciding.. Should he call or not? ..when his phone rang..
It was an unknown number..he ignored at first.. But it rang again. He took it irritated..
"hello..?" he said, irritation was clear in his tone.
"main hoon..." came the reply from other side. An instant feeling of relief washed over him..hearing her voice finally. But next second it was taken over by his concern for her..which came out in the form of anger...
"kahan thi tum..? & why weren't u answering my calls..?han..?" ..he almost shouted on her. Only he knew how he had felt in past few hours...when she wasnt answering his calls.
She knew she had got him worried unnecessarily. And she was really feeling bad about it. But she didnt do it intentionlly.
He didnt get any answer from her, so asked again..but in a clamer tone then earlier..
"tum thik toh hona..? Kahan thi tum..?"
she smiled hearing that question..he cared for her so much..
"gussa ho..?" ..she asked slowly
"han..!" ..he tried to clamed himself.
"sachi me..?" ..she asked again..in a cute voice.
"sachi me.." he almost smiled saying that.
"bahut gussa ho..?" ..she asked knowing well that his anger has cooled down..already.. She could feel it!
" bahut se bhi..bahut jyada.." he replied, faking to be still angery.
"ohh..achha toh thik hai..aap pehle apna gussa thanda kar lo..main baad me call karti hoon..thik hai..?" ..she teased him.
"nahii..main ab gussa nahi hoon! Tum batao...kahan thi tum? ..aur phone kyun nahi uthaya..?" ...he said instantly before she could cut the call.
She smiled hearing his questions and the way he said everything in one breath.
She, then told him, that how she forgot her phone at home today, as she was in a hurry. And just 5 minutes back she got a call from naina on her friends cell.. saying that she had so many missed calls from him..
" ab kahan se bol rahi ho..?" he asked
"collage ke paas wale p.c.o. se.." ..she replied.
"hmm..thik..but be careful next time.. Aaj toh phone bhul gai thi..pata chala kal mujhe hi bhul gai toh..main kya karunga..?" ..now it was he teasing her.
"it was unintentional! Aur agar by chance.. main bhul bhi gai..toh aap ho na..aap yaad dila dena na..." she teased back.
"dont even think of it..samjhi..?" he warned.
She smiled at his warning.. And they continued their talks..


Its really amezing that how two complete stranger's come so close..and become an important & essential part of each other's life. Just by wearing a ring of someone's name's..u feel a sense of belonging. How does it happen..?? Its magical..isnt it..??
Just a few days back..they were hesitating to even call eachother..and look at them now! They have come so close..they understand eachother well..they care for eachother so much..and most importantly..both have accepted the other as their's and they feel & show their right on eachother!



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Originally posted by daredevilisback

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updated..:)

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