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Kashmakash S2 Th 4 Chap 10 Pg 101 July 01 (Page 67)

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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 5:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Suvika.

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Yes, Sujatha Aunty, had my tea. Wo beech main net down tha.
 
Yeh Nikki ko kisine chiddha diya school main: sookhi lakdi and she is crying. Main itni patli houn kya? Ab aunty if she can weigh only 20 Kgs with her school bag, ptali nahi to aur kya kahenge? Uske school main bola, if Kareena Kapoor was size 0, then she is -2...

Oh someone teased her, is it?? boy or girl?? 

tell her to stop eating sprouts and raw veggies and start of extra cheese burgers and pizzas..or better yet, make her eat our all time favourite vada pav and pav bhaji with extra butter. 

and tell her not to worry. mera bada beta bhi waisa hi hain. the younger one keeps saying i can lift you with my little finger. LOL
 
Pappa also told her the same thing (earlier also Dr uncle had asked her to increase her weight) Thoda cheese, Almonds etc...par yeh nahi khayegi. You know yesterday what she ate for snack? took one bread slice, put boiled peas in it, put some tomato sauce on it and another slice on it...

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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 5:29am | IP Logged
Wow..Nikki is my carbon copy

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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 5:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sshirley

Hi Suja, socha ke chalo abhi detailed review de doon. Mood banne ke liye wait karoongi toh ho chukka..
 LOL good girl Shirley..Wink

Do I need to say this chapter swept me off my feet. Simply fantabulous - such a beautifully charged up roller coaster ride of emotions. just loved it.
 
i knew you would...aapke shtyle mein jo tha..all subtle gestures with flowers and sms Big smile

Loved the opening scene - Dr. Khanna's brief but heartfelt welcome and that bit about going bald. hehe.
  Ouchyou are the only one who noticed that part of the humour buddy...thank you..Hug
Then the scene in Ashu's cabin. his self thought seeing the flowers and his cabin in order. Ranga volunteering info. Well written buddy. Clap
Ashu's dilemma and impatience, both in the morning and at lunch in canteen very well brought out.
 thank you smiley
I am liking this Dr. Kothari,  also liked her in KSMK 1. She comes straight to the point, no beating about the bush. I think though she accuses him for nidhi's state, somewhere she also understood why he did what he did.   
 yeah..she was the one who took Nidhi under her wing and pulled her up...nagged her to eat and help out in any way that she could...she has a role in future too na..Big smile

Liked the hallucination part - pahle toh even I was confused. Also superliked Nidhi's reaction when Dr. Sanjay tells her abt ashu's return - just perfectly written Suja Clap
 
arre aap apni baat kar rahe ho...i myself was confused..i had to make Ashu see her..she should see and think that she is imagining..i should tell the readers that she is imagining...then write Ashu's feelings when she walks off..i was like exhausted emoticonLOL

Loved, actually more than loved this scene:
 
Ashu looks at the man standing before him: I will talk to Dr Nehru. Aap fikr mat keejiye. Aap ke bhai..(His sentence gets cuts off as the door bursts open and Nidhi almost stumbles inside before coming to a sudden halt. Her panting breath suggests that she has run all the way to his cabin. Her stunned eyes meet his own as they drink in each other's presence.

Aap sach mein yahaa hain? Ya phir se mein koi sapna dekhrahi hoon? You..you have gone down. What happened? Were you not well? Why did you leave? Why did you come back?

Nidhi..see..I have come back! Come back for you. Aankhe taras gayi Nidhi tumhe dekhne ko. Buss..ab jeebharke tumhe dekhna chaahta hoon..mehsoos karna chaahta hoon. You have changed. You look more mature..thinner..you have gone down. Did you miss me so much that you have stopped taking care of yourself?

Both of them come back to this world at the sound of someone calling "Sir?" Ashu blinks and turns back towards the man: Haan..mein..I will talk to Dr Nehru. Aap ka bhai ek kaabil surgeon ke haathon mein hain. Please don't worry. Aap jaake unhe admit karvaayiye. (The man thanks, collects the reports and leaves.)

Ashu turns once again to look at Nidhi and she probably hasn't even blinked after barging into the cabin never mind looking away. He gives her a small smile: Hello Dr Nidhi.

Her eyes just continue to devour him: I..(she swallows) I..thought..I was..seeing..imagining..hallucinating..(Her hand gestures to the corridor vaguely trying to explain her earlier reaction of smiling at him and walking away without any acknowledgement.)

Ashu: Kaisi ho?

Nidhi: Teek hoon..aap..aap kaise hain?

Ashu: Ab teek hoon. (Too many questions and too many confessions battle with each other to be heard over the silence reigning in the cabin.) Your college ends at what..4?

Nidhi: Ji.

@Bold - this sentence gave a unique (for want of a better word) touch to the whole scene.
 
Liked your description of the place. the 45 minutes of silence must have been so... (don't have a word to describe)
 simmering and smouldering...thudding hearts and fidgeting hands..

Loved these lines to the core:
 
Ashu looks at her: You are the reason I came back Nidhi.
Something snaps in him at that and he catches her shoulders and shakes her: Pyaar nahi karta? MEIN tumse pyaar nahi karta? Tumhaari ek jhalak dekhne keliye tarasta hoon. Tumhaari  muskaan se mere din ki shuruvaad hoti hain..tumhaari hasi ki awaaz mujhe chain ki neend sulaati hain. Yeh 8 maheene kaise guzaare hain yeh sirf mein jaanta hoon. I couldn't breathe without thinking about you..I couldn't walk without thinking about the way you skip and bound in that paediatric ward..I couldn't talk without thinking about your musical voice..I couldn't eat..Nidhi ne khaana khaaya hoga na..She would have had her lunch, right? Its 2. She would get hungry and cranky otherwise. I couldn't drink that stupid tea..Nidhi ko elaichi wala chai pasand hain. Gaana sunne ki koshish karta hoon toh tumhaari awaaz goonjti hain kaanon mein..choogayi jism mera..kiske daaman ki hawaa..yahi gaaya tha na tumne uss din? Do you know how I felt after that? What I went through? How much I just wanted to come to you and..
 
and nidhi's reaction totally moved me completely. Even after the hug, its as if she needs to say it aloud to make herself believe it:
 
true..that uncertainity killed her and the sudden relief made her almost hysterical with joy..
 
Loved the brief but meaningful yet simple Anji-Nidhi convo.

Ouch again you are the only one to mention that.. Hug
This line was my fav. the way he says it. I m glad u retained it here:
 
Ashu: Baba..I..uh..Iwanttomarryher.
 
Big smile thats my fav dialogue..couldn't take it out..

Aww the red roses - sho cute. and the SMS songs were apt but more tthan anything, I liked this way of conveying the msges.
LOLLOL yeah yeah..don't i know it.. 
CV refused, as expected.
 
Ab aage? 
aage chapter 10.
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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 5:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by s_danger

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Pappa also told her the same thing (earlier also Dr uncle had asked her to increase her weight) Thoda cheese, Almonds etc...par yeh nahi khayegi. You know yesterday what she ate for snack? took one bread slice, put boiled peas in it, put some tomato sauce on it and another slice on it...


Shocked really?? eewww..i know its healthy and all but just boiled peas?? ShockedLOL 
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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 5:37am | IP Logged
Chapter10 kab ?Day Dreaming
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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 5:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by bc123456

Chapter10 kab ?Day Dreaming

probably Monday Dr Babs..

weekend hain na..taking a break. Embarrassed

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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 6:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Suvika.

Originally posted by sshirley

Hi Suja, socha ke chalo abhi detailed review de doon. Mood banne ke liye wait karoongi toh ho chukka..
 LOL good girl Shirley..Wink
 
See I m a good friend, aapki tarah nahi pahle mere readers ko bhadkao, aag me ghee daal ke phir poori aag hi thandi kar do - meri cliffhanger ki poori mehnat pe paani pher ke

Do I need to say this chapter swept me off my feet. Simply fantabulous - such a beautifully charged up roller coaster ride of emotions. just loved it.
 
i knew you would...aapke shtyle mein jo tha..all subtle gestures with flowers and sms Big smile
 
Hmm u know me too well ji

Loved the opening scene - Dr. Khanna's brief but heartfelt welcome and that bit about going bald. hehe.
  Ouchyou are the only one who noticed that part of the humour buddy...thank you..Hug
 
Raising my collar in pride
 
Liked the hallucination part - pahle toh even I was confused. Also superliked Nidhi's reaction when Dr. Sanjay tells her abt ashu's return - just perfectly written Suja Clap
 
arre aap apni baat kar rahe ho...i myself was confused..i had to make Ashu see her..she should see and think that she is imagining..i should tell the readers that she is imagining...then write Ashu's feelings when she walks off..i was like exhausted emoticonLOL

Really yaar now that u say it, it was actually a difficult scene to write - I don't think I could have written something like that. Hats off to u buddy.
 
 
 
Liked your description of the place. the 45 minutes of silence must have been so... (don't have a word to describe)
 simmering and smouldering...thudding hearts and fidgeting hands..
 
 
Yeah right.. absolutely.
 
Loved the brief but meaningful yet simple Anji-Nidhi convo.

Ouch again you are the only one to mention that.. Hug
 
Thank you yaar, but can you blame the others? they wanted romance in kashmakash-1 style. Poor souls, they are not able to keep KSMK 1 aside.
 
This line was my fav. the way he says it. I m glad u retained it here:
 
Ashu: Baba..I..uh..Iwanttomarryher.
 
Big smile thats my fav dialogue..couldn't take it out..
 
Mera bhi mera bhi

 
Aww the red roses - sho cute. and the SMS songs were apt but more tthan anything, I liked this way of conveying the msges.
LOLLOL yeah yeah..don't i know it.. 
 
Uh huh
CV refused, as expected.
 
Ab aage? 
aage chapter 10.
 
When when?

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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 6:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sshirley

Originally posted by Suvika.


 
See I m a good friend, aapki tarah nahi pahle mere readers ko bhadkao, aag me ghee daal ke phir poori aag hi thandi kar do - meri cliffhanger ki poori mehnat pe paani pher ke

oye..i wouldn't have opened my mouth but you said readers ko bhadkarahi ho..enough..so i tried to do some damage control and said i don't think it will happen that way...ab beech mein thoda bahut muh se nikalgaya toh i can't help it na..if you ask your editor to spam your thread you should be prepared for all this.LOL

aage chapter 10.
 
When when?
hopefully monday..Big smile
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