Yeah.. I really do want to kill U.. for killing Maan's Geet..😡 But next sentence.. sigh...😆 Nice update.. Maan's last sentence..Yaar did I ever interfere in ur romance.. So funny.. cribbing like small bachha..😛 Nice one .. loved it..
The dream was devasting...bt at the end u made it beautifully done wid the love n cute cribbing of geet...n caring nature of maan...n possessive geet... 😳 😉
yeh rabba i so thought it was sad story at d beginning but relief came back after realizing it just a dream n end was totally bliss hayye mera maan ka comment😉
its just awesome ...amazing.. by reading forst half i was on verge of crying ...but after reading other half got smile.. realy its beautiful...😊 specialy maan last line..😉
omg omg u u u uff u really scared me first schi marne ka mann kiya😆😆 i thought geet😲 chi chi na babaji bt it was a dream a horrible dream n maanu's reaction ugg he left house in vest n tracks n all oogling at him babji maanu b na😆😆😆 me just lvd it superbbb
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