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SWARON OS:the mirror (Page 6)

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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 12:09pm | IP Logged
Beautiful concept..
true love always remains.. And seeeing that with closed ones is beyond a beautiful feel...
  

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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 11:04pm | IP Logged
Medha this story brought tears to my eyes,,,the way you wrote it was jut beautiful I really do think you are gifted..please keep writing you are just amazing 

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Posted: 30 June 2013 at 9:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by deep_Tanha

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darun hoe6e bhai Embarrassed
amai abr ki bolis...tui to jewel reShockedHug


undoubtedly she is a jewel ..so are u rumpu Hug

sorry to intervene ..i can understand bengali..cant speak LOL


no dear...it's okTongue
awww...me jewel Embarrassed
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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 6:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by damonTVDrocks

How dare you say it lame!!Angry Its a beautiful piece of work... The way you handled both the povs, it was awesome... You wrote their entire life down! Awesome... I don't see that writer's block anywhere!Clap

damon gussa mat karo yaar----lame nahi bolungi---and thanks for the encouragement. i hope ki block jaldi chala jayTongue
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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 7:31pm | IP Logged
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there dance, there blissful life, the anniversary ritual, savera, swayam's death n finally sharon joining him .. there life in a mirror was really very very  beautiful ..  as there daughter savera (quite an unusual name, bt i kinda like it Wink) quoted they lived and died a fairytale .. and the os really had one of the most happiest ending ever, i just loved it .. the way u quote sentences yaar, i am a huge fan of tht ..

i knw im too late to comment but still better late than never .. n btw u thought this OS didn't went well, come on stop judging ur work, its us readers who need to do that, n what i knw for sure is it was blissfully beautiful ..

Keep Writing .. 
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Posted: 02 July 2013 at 11:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by neeliyer

Clap
there dance, there blissful life, the anniversary ritual, savera, swayam's death n finally sharon joining him .. there life in a mirror was really very very  beautiful ..  as there daughter savera (quite an unusual name, bt i kinda like it Wink) quoted they lived and died a fairytale .. and the os really had one of the most happiest ending ever, i just loved it .. the way u quote sentences yaar, i am a huge fan of tht ..

i knw im too late to comment but still better late than never .. n btw u thought this OS didn't went well, come on stop judging ur work, its us readers who need to do that, n what i knw for sure is it was blissfully beautiful ..

Keep Writing .. 

thanks neel----and savera is my bestie's name

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Posted: 04 July 2013 at 2:20am | IP Logged
awesome os
loved the way sharon n den her daughter pov
that mirror was the one in front of whom the eternal love life story of swaron was reflected 
loved this concept n brilliantly penned down 
loved the last lines said by swaron daughter
"My dad and mom----swayam shekhawat---and Sharon raiprakash shekhawat lived, loved and died a fairytale."
thanx for the pm 
keep writing

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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 10:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vrushanharshi

awesome os
loved the way sharon n den her daughter pov
that mirror was the one in front of whom the eternal love life story of swaron was reflected 
loved this concept n brilliantly penned down 
loved the last lines said by swaron daughter
"My dad and mom----swayam shekhawat---and Sharon raiprakash shekhawat lived, loved and died a fairytale."
thanx for the pm 
keep writing

thanks dearie---and thanks for the feedback.

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