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SWARON OS:the mirror (Page 5)

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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 8:30am | IP Logged
omg I am just speechless..
it was just anazing..
it was totally amazing.. It was just beautiful and indeed just a perfect story a perfect fairytale..
I loved the concept..
beautifully penned down.. Clap
Amazing work!!

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ToujoursPur

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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 8:41am | IP Logged
A beautiful write up Medha. It had a very unique concept. I loved how the way u hav included mirror in the whole journey of SwaRon. The narration was wonderfully done. Written outstandingly. I loved how u included dance thruout the whole story. In happy tyms and also in the end dance stayed with dem. The ending was beautiful. Sharon following after Swayam death's. I luvd Savera's PoV in the end. A brilliantly written work. You have a beautiful style of storytelling.

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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 8:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by medhasarkar

Originally posted by surprising

darun hoe6e bhai Embarrassed
amai abr ki bolis...tui to jewel reShockedHug

oh thank you---well considering tuio besh hire hire typer----chal dujone goynar dokan dei.WinkLOL


gr8 idea...let it do asapROFL

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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 8:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tannu_swayam

A beautiful write up Medha. It had a very unique concept. I loved how the way u hav included mirror in the whole journey of SwaRon. The narration was wonderfully done. Written outstandingly. I loved how u included dance thruout the whole story. In happy tyms and also in the end dance stayed with dem. The ending was beautiful. Sharon following after Swayam death's. I luvd Savera's PoV in the end. A brilliantly written work. You have a beautiful style of storytelling.

thank u so much...and dance is why we love swaron so much-----and as i was trying to write up their life---dance had to be in it----bcoz dance is their lifeSmile

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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 9:04am | IP Logged
Beautiful os...
Really adorable and emotional...
just loved it...
Beautifully penned down..
The way u potrayed the cherishing memories of swaron...
It was so touching that it made me cry...
Amazing concept..
Clap Hug Thumbs Up

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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 11:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetdivya

awesome dear... Smile
usually i dont like sad endings..but u hav really written it so wel...just loved it... Smile
loved d way you hav describe d emotions... Smile

even i dont like sad endings---but i'd  like to call this fulfilment divyaWink
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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 12:09pm | IP Logged
Beautiful concept..
true love always remains.. And seeeing that with closed ones is beyond a beautiful feel...
  

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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 11:04pm | IP Logged
Medha this story brought tears to my eyes,,,the way you wrote it was jut beautiful I really do think you are gifted..please keep writing you are just amazing 

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