SWARON OS:the mirror - Page 4

omg I am just speechless..
it was just anazing..
it was totally amazing.. It was just beautiful and indeed just a perfect story a perfect fairytale..
I loved the concept..
beautifully penned down.. 👏
Amazing work!!

A beautiful write up Medha. It had a very unique concept. I loved how the way u hav included mirror in the whole journey of SwaRon. The narration was wonderfully done. Written outstandingly. I loved how u included dance thruout the whole story. In happy tyms and also in the end dance stayed with dem. The ending was beautiful. Sharon following after Swayam death's. I luvd Savera's PoV in the end. A brilliantly written work. You have a beautiful style of storytelling.

Originally posted by: medhasarkar

oh thank you---well considering tuio besh hire hire typer----chal dujone goynar dokan dei.😉😆

gr8 idea...let it do asap🤣

Originally posted by: tannu_swayam

A beautiful write up Medha. It had a very unique concept. I loved how the way u hav included mirror in the whole journey of SwaRon. The narration was wonderfully done. Written outstandingly. I loved how u included dance thruout the whole story. In happy tyms and also in the end dance stayed with dem. The ending was beautiful. Sharon following after Swayam death's. I luvd Savera's PoV in the end. A brilliantly written work. You have a beautiful style of storytelling.

Beautiful os...
Really adorable and emotional...
just loved it...
Beautifully penned down..
The way u potrayed the cherishing memories of swaron...
It was so touching that it made me cry...
Amazing concept..
👏 🤗 👍🏼

Originally posted by: sweetdivya

awesome dear... 😊

usually i dont like sad endings..but u hav really written it so wel...just loved it... 😊

loved d way you hav describe d emotions... 😊

Beautiful concept..
true love always remains.. And seeeing that with closed ones is beyond a beautiful feel...
  

Medha this story brought tears to my eyes,,,the way you wrote it was jut beautiful I really do think you are gifted..please keep writing you are just amazing 

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

undoubtedly she is a jewel ..so are u rumpu 🤗

sorry to intervene ..i can understand bengali..cant speak 😆

no dear...it's ok😛
awww...me jewel 😳

Originally posted by: damonTVDrocks

How dare you say it lame!!😡 Its a beautiful piece of work... The way you handled both the povs, it was awesome... You wrote their entire life down! Awesome... I don't see that writer's block anywhere!👏