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KR OS- One... Two... Sold (Page 2)

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 3:03pm | IP Logged
This is amazing...Big smile

Their relation looks cool... buddies/neighbours/frnds..Smile

But tomboy se girl ban gyi toh notice kiya na rey ne...Embarrassed

Itna ki... uski baatein bhi nhi suni .. aur bas haan kar di..LOL

Rofl... rey ko becha ja rha hai... these charity thingies are quite amusing...Tongue

Oh god.. achhi bhali moment ko bigaad diya...D'oh

This sara gal is way more clingy... as if she already won him..Dead

Poor kriya... looks so cute in jealousy.. actually realized by now... oh oh wrong timings..Embarrassed

Whoa... she's bidding for him... aise kaise jaane de rey ko...Wink

He already had a safe plan?.. smart rey..Shocked

Yes yes... I loved it..Hug

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tish18

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 5:13pm | IP Logged
Don't know you so "Hello!" And hope you and your special someone hit it off well Wink
Coming to the OS. I absolutely loved it. The way you mixed the different emotions so subtly in there.
Kria and Rey could easily be best buds so it was fun reading them with the new twist. The witty dialogues that both threw at each other were entertaining. Rey was extremely hilarious when he was claiming that Kria was selling him off and also at the end. This man never changes. Kria was a treat to see when jealous...the way she bid on him to prevent him from going to Sara was fun to read. But damn! You entered Sharon in there! Now, I'm surprised that Sharon was never introduced to Kria but glad too because she was still jealous.
All in all...it was a really sweet OS. And thanks to the special someone I think we will be getting more of these OS.

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 8:00pm | IP Logged
soo cute os

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 8:09pm | IP Logged
awesome...Smile

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 8:09pm | IP Logged
You never fail to enthrall me with ur beautiful writing skills! At first, when I read d starting lines of a paragraph. I thought Kria d tomboy fell in love with her bestie Reyaansh n then they will realise n confess but thanks that it wasn't a same random piece of work. I loved d charity, bidding and especially the way Kria was portrayed. It was marvellous! I could feel Kria's emotions throughout n Rey is so lucky to get one like herWink. It was perfect, beautiful and superb! Love u Tish, thanks for such a fantabulous piece..ClapClap

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 8:55pm | IP Logged
Tishhh Diii Hug

This was so so so Adorable one!
Itni zyada cute!

Hehehheee.. I love that part where rey asks kria was she selling him ! ROFL ROFL

Hehehheheee... And in the end Sharon won! Wow what an entry!

Thanks a lot for writing it! Hug  It just made my day. Now I'll be thinking about it whole day :P 

I loved ittt!

And I love you more,

Love~Upi.


Edited by Incandescence. - 26 June 2013 at 11:45pm

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 10:43pm | IP Logged
This is so adorably cutee os
the neighbour cum good freinds...wowww
i loved the way you wrote and described everything
gosh and that confession was awesomeee...amazing amazing amazing os dear

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 11:00pm | IP Logged
it was a beautiful os ... 
mind blowing ... 
kria getting jealous ... :D
sharon and rey cousins ...
and the final confession ... hahahaha ... bechari kria ...

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