Writers Corner: Books, Stories & Poems

India-Forums

   
Writers Corner: Books, Stories & Poems
Writers Corner: Books, Stories & Poems

Drabble: Limitless Love *Ch 04 Pg 25 26/09 (Page 5)

-Koeli_Appy- IF-Stunnerz
-Koeli_Appy-
-Koeli_Appy-

Guardian of CC, FFG GodMother
Joined: 19 January 2012
Posts: 25513

Posted: 27 June 2013 at 3:54am | IP Logged

Chapter 1

The shop

Zara gazed at her sister Sofie's shop, which was located near the round-a-bought, very close to her rented cottage. It was doing just fabulous. Recently there was an article on the shop where it stated that the shop is picking up in international market and very soon it was going to be merged with the Ron Banerjee's company.

 

Ron Banerjee was a very known name and his business spread of one of the best chain of companies India have today. 

Till now the shop was registered under Sofie and Zara, who were not only the keeper of the company but also the owner. Zara was 18 when her sister Sofie bought the company and made Zara one of the partners. But later she came to know that her sister bought the company in Loan and the Loan giver was non other than Ron Banerjee, the ruthless, manipulating tycoon and India's biggest womanizer.

Ron Banerjee and Sofie used to study in the same university and were 5 years elder to Zara. He used to come to their small bunglow for joint studies with Sofie as they shared the same subject. And from that time onwards Zara was attracted to him. He was indeed a very charming boy in his teens and whole school used to go gaga over him. He mastered in all the field and had been award Student of the Year too. He was brilliant in Academics, which fetched him the title Head Prefect of their school.

Zara used to watch him while he and Sofie studied in their bunglow and used to blush on her own. Zara's sister was much more good looking than Zara, or should I say Zara never made an effort to look good. She was happy in her own world, her arts. She was caught looking at Ron many times by Ron himself, which made her run away shyly and dump herself on the bed hiding her face in embarrassment.

But the day she got the letter from her sister stating that she is running away with Ron for some personal reasons, Zara's would fell apart. She felt disgusted about the fact that she had been fantasizing on her own sister's love interest. Though she was not aware of it initially when she silently fell in love with him, but still the fact remained the same that she liked her would-be brother-in-law.

Next

Chapter 2 Their eyes met



Edited by appy_indy-KD - 28 June 2013 at 3:50am

The following 89 member(s) liked the above post:

vanesha230manaskrmajumderreena1146arshidreamkaris2395drakecyrusKMB-MSKseemaaryanLaughingBarbiePyaariPrincessAzkaasunshineswirlneetakerkarBublyKhushiswarnakolasaniArshi200maliha_khankashmala.123deepa0507dimishrasman2195Miss_wannabecvrocksnidhu18cutie13shalinikanagus_mgsaruni0109headtotoell..Gungun..llbluesobtimegh.arhiTirtharupatanvi_arshishekha2012farha623m-g19rainyday3000shane1AngelMcQueenimran78aks555tabzzPrncssOfHeartTanumonswatim318Aasmaalishubhi15mbbsrocksArshix144fareeVYGA89arnaushirumuasthagarwalkirti123ragvir92hi50ArshisarunfanHawa1997.ButterCup.YaSha0512Javeria3991suji5sidhu285Amti4ugowri1712lalarukhsweetydoll32B.S.I_Love_Youhoney-sweetyvarsha2KDstar_fan1MyLuvBarunjisasruthickyoga123-Roshini-Srilathalollakutspup03Nickysweetdiyadivyasummaiyasayed..Khaleesi....Anita..nishu_shornamishti_17ara_000

Amti4u IF-Rockerz
Amti4u
Amti4u

Joined: 07 August 2011
Posts: 7127

Posted: 27 June 2013 at 4:03am | IP Logged
Nice one...Smile.. So, Ron is Zara's would be brother in law...Unhappy...
 
Zara used to watch him, when he was having combined studies with her siss... AwwwWink.
 
Why do I have a feeling that Ron is also affected by her..?????? Anyways, I am loving this style of writing...Smile..
 
Are we going to get daily updates ??????
 

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

-Koeli_Appy-

nishu_shorna IF-Sizzlerz
nishu_shorna
nishu_shorna

Joined: 29 January 2013
Posts: 20228

Posted: 27 June 2013 at 4:04am | IP Logged
OMG...awesome start...Should i say Zara had a crush on Ron,or its more than that...and he too noticed that...what happened after Sofie ran away with Ron...why the shop is merging to his company...who ran it in the first place...Zara or Sofie...And Zara live in a rented cottage...why???what happened to their bunglow where they lived????cant wait to see...

Edited by nishu_shorna - 27 June 2013 at 4:13am

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

-Koeli_Appy-

asthagarwal IF-Dazzler
asthagarwal
asthagarwal

Joined: 29 December 2010
Posts: 2201

Posted: 27 June 2013 at 4:35am | IP Logged
I'm luvng it...

Zara's teenage infatuation made me reminded of my days... Blushing

Inall dere r lots of questions wich only u cn answer wid tym...

I'm super excited 4 dis...

As I'm a ARSHIHOLIC I hv nvr read anythng beyond dem bt I cn imagine dem as RON n ZARA here...   

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:

PrincessAzkaa-Koeli_Appy-

-Koeli_Appy- IF-Stunnerz
-Koeli_Appy-
-Koeli_Appy-

Guardian of CC, FFG GodMother
Joined: 19 January 2012
Posts: 25513

Posted: 27 June 2013 at 4:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Amti4u

Nice one...Smile.. So, Ron is Zara's would be brother in law...Unhappy...
 
Zara used to watch him, when he was having combined studies with her siss... AwwwWink.
 
Why do I have a feeling that Ron is also affected by her..?????? Anyways, I am loving this style of writing...Smile..
 
Are we going to get daily updates ??????
 

yap i am planning so... you might get two updates in one day also... as it is a drabble it easy for me to write. LOL

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:

asthagarwalHawa1997

-Koeli_Appy- IF-Stunnerz
-Koeli_Appy-
-Koeli_Appy-

Guardian of CC, FFG GodMother
Joined: 19 January 2012
Posts: 25513

Posted: 27 June 2013 at 4:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by asthagarwal

I'm luvng it...

Zara's teenage infatuation made me reminded of my days... Blushing

Inall dere r lots of questions wich only u cn answer wid tym...

I'm super excited 4 dis...

As I'm a ARSHIHOLIC I hv nvr read anythng beyond dem bt I cn imagine dem as RON n ZARA here...   

same here... never ever imagined other characters but when i started reading books lately i imagine SaRun irrespective of names.

The following 3 member(s) liked the above post:

asthagarwalAasmaaliHawa1997

Meeshaali Senior Member
Meeshaali
Meeshaali

Joined: 14 December 2012
Posts: 615

Posted: 27 June 2013 at 5:07am | IP Logged
OMG its realy intrsting to know love Triangle b/w zara, ron
And sofie ohhh im loving it plzzz update soon... U r a true
Writer love ur work Clap

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

-Koeli_Appy-

Aasmaali IF-Dazzler
Aasmaali
Aasmaali

Joined: 17 March 2012
Posts: 4078

Posted: 27 June 2013 at 5:14am | IP Logged
Oh... Brother In Law!!!! Shocked
Well, awesome update...
Sad that sophie and ron ran away...
Superb start...
So happy that you're sparing 10 minutes for writing while travelling too...
Missing your updates...
Sophie's last belonging means she is dead...
So hopefully ron n zara meet soon...
But still confuse about sophie...!!!


Edited by Aasmaali - 27 June 2013 at 5:55am

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

-Koeli_Appy-

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
Addicted||SS||Epilogue- Pg 61 | 12/1/2014||

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 58 59

Author: ..nams..   Replies: 468   Views: 23614

..nams.. 468 23614 19 April 2014 at 9:56am by ..nams..
*Removed*

Author: -Chudel-   Replies: 3   Views: 1387

-Chudel- 3 1387 31 August 2013 at 9:47am by bookworm-ALS--
Anubhav a love story

Author: Dibya7dj   Replies: 2   Views: 551

Dibya7dj 2 551 30 August 2013 at 6:18am by ..nams..
*Removed*

Author: -Chudel-   Replies: 0   Views: 340

-Chudel- 0 340 15 August 2013 at 9:55am by -Chudel-
Love Boat 1- Love in a Cup

Author: Wanderbug   Replies: 3   Views: 1062

Wanderbug 3 1062 20 September 2012 at 3:39am by Warda.

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Writers Corner: Books, Stories & Poems Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index