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OS-- Forgive me, My Love... (Update pg 2)

Sara_76 Groupbie

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 12:48pm | IP Logged
Hi All, first attempt at writing anything...
Here goes..


He sat engulfed in darkness. Darkness  permeated his room..darkness permeated his life, reminding him of his sombre pre- Zoya existence.

"I had set out to protect her", he thought. "I wanted to shield her from the curse I carry as the son of Rashid Ahmed khan.  And yet I ended up breaking her heart.Just once .. if I could see her just once". But he knew he was asking for a lot. He had lost her. She had brought hope, light and love into his life. And now she was gone. He hadn't mustered enough courage to tell her that he was in love with her. Deeply, passionately and completely. Zoya, Zoya, Zoya, Zoya. The name kept beating in his heart, pounding in his head and finally escaped through his trembling lips, ever so softly ." Zoya". I am not ready to let you go. I can't let you go. He promised himself as much as he promised her.



The figure in black lay in stark contrast to the beige vastness that lay all around him. He looked haggard and disoriented. Soft sounds escaped his parched lips every now and then.Zoya...Zoya... How long he had laid there he didn't remember. A sparkly trinket seemed to be peeping out of a fist of his out streched hand. Was it an earring... ?

**Worth continuing???

Edited by Sara_76 - 27 June 2013 at 1:45am

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rosamale IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 12:54pm | IP Logged
are you kidding me?Smile you should definitely continue itBig smile prologue looks really promisingClap continue soonishEmbarrassed

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AnjuRish IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 2:42pm | IP Logged
looks good PM when u update
Tv_wale_babu Senior Member

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 2:48pm | IP Logged
Yes it is worth continuing! Please continue! and if you can, do pm :) 
Surish IF-Addictz

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anushreemishra IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 3:36pm | IP Logged
LOved it...your writing is intense...do continue and pm me please wen u doSmile
kandygrover Goldie

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 5:23pm | IP Logged
Please pm me when you continue!!!!
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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 5:24pm | IP Logged
yes yes yes

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