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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 9:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by deep_Tanha

<div align="center">Hey Nami...

U are amazing when it comes to current track...WOW...this is what every SwaRon fan is dying to see ...SwaRon the newly in love couple...new love...dreamy desires...desperation to be together ...

I loved the way u showed the girls and boys gang rehearsing separately..sharon...the diva desperate to dance with her majnu...ahaaa...couldn't get better than this ...

Majnu true to his name...missing his siren...how adorable these two can get...Day Dreaming

The cycle ride dreams got shattered but u kept something even more heavenly for us...and that peck on her lips to shut the siren was so cuteee...

The heart to heart conversation about shivam...the support swayam gave to her ...and the way she voiced her feelings..the soft kiss ...the sweet love...

This is how we want our SwaRon post confession...its not the end ..its the beginning of LOVE...


LOVED the OS Nami...u are such a fabulous writer ClapClap

Luv
Deep

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Thank you Deepu Hug for liking it n for d free publicity LOL

Yes I like relating to the current track always coz m nt so creative to think something more than dis LOL
Haan maine cycle ride waala dream tod diya coz I wanted Siren Sharon n majnu Swayam walk hand in hand.. Embarrassed
I'm so glad u liked it n yes its a new beginning :)

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 9:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by swaron9113

Hey mumma
amagaing os lovd it so wish apke last os "i won't be ur partner"
ke trh ynha bhe apke story copy kr le.
Bcoz every swaron fan is dyning to see smthng lyk ths.
Lovd it mumma.
Btw iska kya mtlb tha apne fav line likhna frm ths.
Well mai line ni decide kr payi. Bt i love ths part.
" Swayam
smiled and asked "So how was
your day?" Sharon thought to
herself Hell! It was hell without
you! but she managed to say "Ya
good and yours?" "Not at all
good without you around. I
missed you" he said cutely and
was about to hug her when
Sharon playfully pushed him
saying "We are in the parking
lot!" She saw him pout and
couldn't help but smile looking at
his cute expressions.
"Acha! Tell me how are you
going home? By car?" he asked
"Yeah but I wouldn't mind if I get
a lift" she smirked
"Really?!" asked an excited
Swayam
"Hmm" she nodded
"Okay just give me a min!" he
said and ran towards his cycle.
In the meanwhile Sharon called
her driver and asked him to
leave.
"Swayam! What are you doing?"
she went near him. He was doing
something with the cycle tyre.
"I'm so sorry Sharon. The tyre is
punctured!" he said sadly.
"Swayam!! How could you? I
mean you knew I would be
coming and still you come
without preparation?! I even
asked my driver to leave! Now
how will I go home? Do have any
idea what you've done?" she
started shouting and ignore
Swayam's efforts to calm her
down.
"You're just.." and her eyes
widened. She felt his lips on hers
for a second. He pecked her for a
second to calm her down and
retreated.
"I'm sorry you were in your siren
mode and I had to do this." he
said and held her palms in his"

p.s-ab ap chahe jo kriye m nt gonna call u di again.
Ab mai apko mom he bolunge. Evil Smile


Bacha.. Hug
I wish jo tu keh rahi hai woh sach ho jaaye.. If not the exact same thing but at least a part of it shown in d epi I'll be more than happy! :)
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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 9:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MoNayaHolicPrag

if i have to comment
u know main gaana zarur gaungiEmbarrassed

so here it goes

mashallah mashallah
likhti tu mashallah
swaron ke scene bhi likhti tu mashallahLOL

okay coming back
I loooved itBig smile
is padhe ke mujhe cvs ko bolna
lo kuch sikho isseBig smile

And meri SS you atlast have shown your besharmi haiWink
Chance pe Dance
Wah wahLOL

You know amazing yaarClap
the way you showed sharon wenting out her feeling
lover boy supporting her
and then the last part
i woudnt like to make comments on the last part
yeah it was my favorite thoughEmbarrassedStar

I am so happy to read ur ff
All the torture i was going through coz of D3 just vanishedTongue

Mindblowing
Simply fabulousClap




Prags ROFL
Tu yahaan bhi shuru ho gayi LOL
This song is masth bdw LOL
I'm happy ki tujhe pasand aaya meri SS. Aur haan maine koshish ki apni besharmi waali string ko na touch karoon lekin kya karein aadat se majboor LOL
I wish ki aisa kuch scene mil jaaye D3 mein aur hume iss torture se chutkara mil jaaye.. Ouch

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 9:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Swaronvrushan

Namu...first of all thank you for writing again and writing the swaron after confession part...

Now coming to update it was so beautiful emotional and heart touching...


Sharon want to clear out all the past regrets and want their relation to b without any spot of past in it was so beautifullay pointed out...

I also loved how swayam didn't want to go on in the past as he somewhere knows that talking past can make Sharon upset...

The fast kiss to stop Sharon was cute bt the first kiss was divine...it reflected all their emotions love for each other ...


In and out it was indeed a perfect and khubsurat os...

Keep writing and aage se mijhe pm send karna


Thank you Goga! Smile
I'm glad u liked it :)
I always wanted SwaRon to have a heart to heart talk abt their journey of being together n I hope n wisb to c such things not inly in my OSbut also on screen.. Embarrassed
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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 9:21am | IP Logged
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maariyo mat... ab padhke pakka comment karungi...
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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 9:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ---Priya---

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#cc33cc">what have you writtenShockedShockedomg omg omg... i so wish palki reads all this and gets ideas for swaron scenes!!!</font>
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<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#cc33cc">I so loved that part where they both were even counting mili seconds... They couldnt stay away from each other.. This is how i want swaron to behave.. this is how a couple should be..</font>
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<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#cc33cc">Sharon Rai Prakash waiting for swayam and wanting to go on a bicycle ride was aww... Kash we get all this on screen too!!! I love how swayam wanted to hug Wink Ahem... swayam's way of calming down siren sharonBlushing</font>
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<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#cc33cc">A romantic walk is all day a beauty to read and when its on swaron, the beauty just gets added. I liked the way how sharon and swayam talked abt their past and cleared out things!</font>
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<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#cc33cc">The consoling hug and swayam's lover boy line, everything was perfect!!!</font>
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<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#cc33cc">I loved the OS nami Hug Hug</font>
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<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#cc33cc">This OS was a saviour today guru ji Hug after watching a frustrating epi, this gave an awesome feeling while reading. i had that huge smile on my face from the startBig smile</font>

Shishya Hug
I'm so happy u liked it :)
Ur idea of replacing Palki wid me is an all time hit provided I gt my gurudakshina Wink
And u are improving balike.. The besharmi string in u has also been showing up off late LOL
I'm glad this turned ur mood ON
I LOL
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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 9:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sakshi.ekansh

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maariyo mat... ab padhke pakka comment karungi...


Ab main tujhe maaroon?! Angry
Nahi shraap deti hoon.. Tera Vetaal humesha tera pecha karte rahe.. Swaha!
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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 9:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SwaronVrushaan

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#cc0099">Awesome OS nami\Star</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#cc0099">i really loved it to the coreHug</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#cc0099">y cant cvs show dis kind of scene in the showHeartDay Dreaming</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#cc0099">superb yar it isStarStar</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#cc0099">sharon saying abt how she felt in the past ...i always wished dat dis kind of convo will hapeen bt it will never happen each other janda nad walking...omg it is just fantasticStar</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#cc0099">and they holding</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#cc0099">thank u for dis OS nami it is much needed</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#cc0099">i want an OS from u daily...Tongue</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#cc0099">cvs take some ideas from the writers hereAngry</font>


Thank you Chandu Smile
Daily OS? I'll have to quit my jobROFL
Glad u liked my writing n had a god time reading :)

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