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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 2:31am | IP Logged

bhabhi jiHug

kya OS likha haiClap
awsome OS
 
i loved it.
it was perfect.Star
 
kash yeh d3 me bhi ho humare swaron ke sathEmbarrassed
 
keep writing more and thanks for the pmHug

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 3:17am | IP Logged
awesome os
loved it especially Sharon's confessing part
I just wish ki aisa kuch d3 mein bhi ho
a beautiful swaron os
thnks for writing SmileSmileSmilekeep writing

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 3:24am | IP Logged
guess what di... I hav read ur os during lec Party

and i totally went Day Dreaming in dreamy mode LOL

di i was smiling like an idiot...while reading it..
Beautifully writtern i luv it...i really want cv shows such type of sequence...

Cycle puncher waala moment it was epic...love the beautiful feeling they shared together...i realy want to see such moment in d3


luv u nami di...u are awesom writter...and write up karte samay aapka shehetan dimag so gaya tha kya...lolz..

Di i want u to write more plz apne shiqsh ki demand puri karo...apko gurudhakshina avshq milege..
Plz di write more..

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 3:33am | IP Logged
Beautiful OS 
Its amazing !
Wish we could see this in D3 :)
My favourite part was their conversation while they were walking. Smile

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 3:43am | IP Logged

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Wow nyc OS... longing ..their desperation to meet..pain to stay away ...their intense love ...very welll wriiten...the way they were missing each one while rehersing..

small peck to shut off the siren...lolzz hehehe

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They stopped walking and Swayam took her to a nearby bench. Holding each others hand they sat on the bench. She was holding his hand with both of hers and placed her head on his shoulder.
"You don't have to dig into the past Sharon. The present is you love me and I love you" said Swayam caressing her.

cupped her face in his hands and said "You are perfect for me. Both of us are perfect for each other. Please stop blaming yourself. If you think you have done mistakes then even I have done mistakes. Past is the one which has to be remembered for the good times. The present is we are together. Happily together and that is all that matters. I have always loved you and I'm proud to be your lover boy"

She chuckled and hugged him tight resting her head on his chest. She could feel his heartbeats and wished to remain in his arms forever. He hugged her back and both of them closed their eyes. They felt so safe to be in each others arms. The longing, the passion and the intensity was equally visible in both of them. Swayam, who waited for more than a year to get his love and Sharon, who was bowled out by true love have now officially become SwaRon, a couple.

 
 
nami u r really good writer...m buddying u ...plz send pm of ur wrk...
 
thnks deep for sharing this link ...

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 9:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by deep_Tanha

<div align="center">Hey Nami...

U are amazing when it comes to current track...WOW...this is what every SwaRon fan is dying to see ...SwaRon the newly in love couple...new love...dreamy desires...desperation to be together ...

I loved the way u showed the girls and boys gang rehearsing separately..sharon...the diva desperate to dance with her majnu...ahaaa...couldn't get better than this ...

Majnu true to his name...missing his siren...how adorable these two can get...Day Dreaming

The cycle ride dreams got shattered but u kept something even more heavenly for us...and that peck on her lips to shut the siren was so cuteee...

The heart to heart conversation about shivam...the support swayam gave to her ...and the way she voiced her feelings..the soft kiss ...the sweet love...

This is how we want our SwaRon post confession...its not the end ..its the beginning of LOVE...


LOVED the OS Nami...u are such a fabulous writer ClapClap

Luv
Deep

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Thank you Deepu Hug for liking it n for d free publicity LOL

Yes I like relating to the current track always coz m nt so creative to think something more than dis LOL
Haan maine cycle ride waala dream tod diya coz I wanted Siren Sharon n majnu Swayam walk hand in hand.. Embarrassed
I'm so glad u liked it n yes its a new beginning :)

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 9:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by swaron9113

Hey mumma
amagaing os lovd it so wish apke last os "i won't be ur partner"
ke trh ynha bhe apke story copy kr le.
Bcoz every swaron fan is dyning to see smthng lyk ths.
Lovd it mumma.
Btw iska kya mtlb tha apne fav line likhna frm ths.
Well mai line ni decide kr payi. Bt i love ths part.
" Swayam
smiled and asked "So how was
your day?" Sharon thought to
herself Hell! It was hell without
you! but she managed to say "Ya
good and yours?" "Not at all
good without you around. I
missed you" he said cutely and
was about to hug her when
Sharon playfully pushed him
saying "We are in the parking
lot!" She saw him pout and
couldn't help but smile looking at
his cute expressions.
"Acha! Tell me how are you
going home? By car?" he asked
"Yeah but I wouldn't mind if I get
a lift" she smirked
"Really?!" asked an excited
Swayam
"Hmm" she nodded
"Okay just give me a min!" he
said and ran towards his cycle.
In the meanwhile Sharon called
her driver and asked him to
leave.
"Swayam! What are you doing?"
she went near him. He was doing
something with the cycle tyre.
"I'm so sorry Sharon. The tyre is
punctured!" he said sadly.
"Swayam!! How could you? I
mean you knew I would be
coming and still you come
without preparation?! I even
asked my driver to leave! Now
how will I go home? Do have any
idea what you've done?" she
started shouting and ignore
Swayam's efforts to calm her
down.
"You're just.." and her eyes
widened. She felt his lips on hers
for a second. He pecked her for a
second to calm her down and
retreated.
"I'm sorry you were in your siren
mode and I had to do this." he
said and held her palms in his"

p.s-ab ap chahe jo kriye m nt gonna call u di again.
Ab mai apko mom he bolunge. Evil Smile


Bacha.. Hug
I wish jo tu keh rahi hai woh sach ho jaaye.. If not the exact same thing but at least a part of it shown in d epi I'll be more than happy! :)
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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 9:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MoNayaHolicPrag

if i have to comment
u know main gaana zarur gaungiEmbarrassed

so here it goes

mashallah mashallah
likhti tu mashallah
swaron ke scene bhi likhti tu mashallahLOL

okay coming back
I loooved itBig smile
is padhe ke mujhe cvs ko bolna
lo kuch sikho isseBig smile

And meri SS you atlast have shown your besharmi haiWink
Chance pe Dance
Wah wahLOL

You know amazing yaarClap
the way you showed sharon wenting out her feeling
lover boy supporting her
and then the last part
i woudnt like to make comments on the last part
yeah it was my favorite thoughEmbarrassedStar

I am so happy to read ur ff
All the torture i was going through coz of D3 just vanishedTongue

Mindblowing
Simply fabulousClap




Prags ROFL
Tu yahaan bhi shuru ho gayi LOL
This song is masth bdw LOL
I'm happy ki tujhe pasand aaya meri SS. Aur haan maine koshish ki apni besharmi waali string ko na touch karoon lekin kya karein aadat se majboor LOL
I wish ki aisa kuch scene mil jaaye D3 mein aur hume iss torture se chutkara mil jaaye.. Ouch

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