With you - SwaRon OS - Page 3

Namu guru ji 🤗
Yeh Kya likh daala 😊 😊
Humne jo demands rakhi thi for d os yeh toh usse bahot bahot upar ka nikla 😳
Thank u thank u so so so much for writing dis for us 😳
Its just bang on 👏 u know Wat dis is somethin i always wanted to see between swaron after der confession.. Sharon sharing every bit of her feelings with swayam n how he consoles her n comforts her n u actually wrote it exactly as i wanted to see 😳
I simply loved d way u penned down d conversation between them while walking i loved it d way she shared d way he hugged her just to make her feel comfortable n loved 👏 👏
I also loved d siren sharon part suddenly hyper ho gayi dats actually sharon n d way swayam calmed her i din think he would do dat but i loved it 👏 👏
N for d ending no words d kisses one by one is our dream jo i doubt kabhi pura hoga to see it on screen 😳

Loved ur os 👏 was waiting for it from dat day n dekh am so late in reading it. .
Am cursing myself for reading it so late...
It was beautifully lovely n more over it was actually Wat every swaron fan wants to see on screen 😳
I wish ke v could see same on screen dat ll be best day for all swaronians 😳 😳
Great job guru ji 👏 am so so happy to read dis it was awesome 👏
U made my day mornin mornin yeh pada hai toh day is gonna be super rocking 😳 😳

Ps: hmmm yeh padke lalach bad gaya hai pls write one more os on swaron first date or maybe der first cycle ride as a couple totally different pls its my request 😳 😳

i have always wanted sharon to tell swayam abt wat she felt during past incidents lyk secret admirer, shivams party...i really loved how u wrote tat part...it ws simple bt true from heart...i really vsh if a swaron scene ws ter lyk dis...😛

nami its beautiful😊..loved it...dis is d swaron v all want to c aftr getting into relationship..dey sharing dere feelings..n splly sharon..she told hw she always felt whn he was around..hw he affected her..n abt dere 1st dance..

n most imp she cleared out shivam fiasco..oh gosh i really want it to happen in d3...

n lastly dere 1st spl kiss😳..mesmerizing...very nicely written nami..love u🤗

bt nxt tym pls include cycle ride also...😊

bhabhi ji🤗

awesome os

guess what di... I hav read ur os during lec 🥳

and i totally went in dreamy mode 😆

di i was smiling like an idiot...while reading it..
Beautifully writtern i luv it...i really want cv shows such type of sequence...

Cycle puncher waala moment it was epic...love the beautiful feeling they shared together...i realy want to see such moment in d3

luv u nami di...u are awesom writter...and write up karte samay aapka shehetan dimag so gaya tha kya...lolz..

Di i want u to write more plz apne shiqsh ki demand puri karo...apko gurudhakshina avshq milege..
Plz di write more..

Beautiful OS 

nami2811

Wow nyc OS... longing ..their desperation to meet..pain to stay away ...their intense love ...very welll wriiten...the way they were missing each one while rehersing..

small peck to shut off the siren...lolzz hehehe

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They stopped walking and Swayam took her to a nearby bench. Holding each others hand they sat on the bench. She was holding his hand with both of hers and placed her head on his shoulder.
"You don't have to dig into the past Sharon. The present is you love me and I love you" said Swayam caressing her.

cupped her face in his hands and said "You are perfect for me. Both of us are perfect for each other. Please stop blaming yourself. If you think you have done mistakes then even I have done mistakes. Past is the one which has to be remembered for the good times. The present is we are together. Happily together and that is all that matters. I have always loved you and I'm proud to be your lover boy"

She chuckled and hugged him tight resting her head on his chest. She could feel his heartbeats and wished to remain in his arms forever. He hugged her back and both of them closed their eyes. They felt so safe to be in each others arms. The longing, the passion and the intensity was equally visible in both of them. Swayam, who waited for more than a year to get his love and Sharon, who was bowled out by true love have now officially become SwaRon, a couple.

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

<div align="center">Hey Nami...

U are amazing when it comes to current track...WOW...this is what every SwaRon fan is dying to see ...SwaRon the newly in love couple...new love...dreamy desires...desperation to be together ...

I loved the way u showed the girls and boys gang rehearsing separately..sharon...the diva desperate to dance with her majnu...ahaaa...couldn't get better than this ...

Majnu true to his name...missing his siren...how adorable these two can get...

The cycle ride dreams got shattered but u kept something even more heavenly for us...and that peck on her lips to shut the siren was so cuteee...

The heart to heart conversation about shivam...the support swayam gave to her ...and the way she voiced her feelings..the soft kiss ...the sweet love...

This is how we want our SwaRon post confession...its not the end ..its the beginning of LOVE...


LOVED the OS Nami...u are such a fabulous writer 👏👏

Luv
Deep

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Thank you Deepu 🤗 for liking it n for d free publicity 😆

Yes I like relating to the current track always coz m nt so creative to think something more than dis 😆
Haan maine cycle ride waala dream tod diya coz I wanted Siren Sharon n majnu Swayam walk hand in hand.. 😳
I'm so glad u liked it n yes its a new beginning :)

Originally posted by: swaron9113

Hey mumma
amagaing os lovd it so wish apke last os "i won't be ur partner"
ke trh ynha bhe apke story copy kr le.
Bcoz every swaron fan is dyning to see smthng lyk ths.
Lovd it mumma.
Btw iska kya mtlb tha apne fav line likhna frm ths.
Well mai line ni decide kr payi. Bt i love ths part.
" Swayam
smiled and asked "So how was
your day?" Sharon thought to
herself Hell! It was hell without
you! but she managed to say "Ya
good and yours?" "Not at all
good without you around. I
missed you" he said cutely and
was about to hug her when
Sharon playfully pushed him
saying "We are in the parking
lot!" She saw him pout and
couldn't help but smile looking at
his cute expressions.
"Acha! Tell me how are you
going home? By car?" he asked
"Yeah but I wouldn't mind if I get
a lift" she smirked
"Really?!" asked an excited
Swayam
"Hmm" she nodded
"Okay just give me a min!" he
said and ran towards his cycle.
In the meanwhile Sharon called
her driver and asked him to
leave.
"Swayam! What are you doing?"
she went near him. He was doing
something with the cycle tyre.
"I'm so sorry Sharon. The tyre is
punctured!" he said sadly.
"Swayam!! How could you? I
mean you knew I would be
coming and still you come
without preparation?! I even
asked my driver to leave! Now
how will I go home? Do have any
idea what you've done?" she
started shouting and ignore
Swayam's efforts to calm her
down.
"You're just.." and her eyes
widened. She felt his lips on hers
for a second. He pecked her for a
second to calm her down and
retreated.
"I'm sorry you were in your siren
mode and I had to do this." he
said and held her palms in his"

p.s-ab ap chahe jo kriye m nt gonna call u di again.
Ab mai apko mom he bolunge. 😈

Bacha.. 🤗
I wish jo tu keh rahi hai woh sach ho jaaye.. If not the exact same thing but at least a part of it shown in d epi I'll be more than happy! :)