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My Teacher (III) - chap 33 @PAGE 143 // 11th dec (Page 69)

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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 8:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by BelleFilleDD

I caught up with chapters 29 & 30 . I may not be able to express in words but still trying Embarrassed 
I think I read a heart wrenching confession so beautifully scripted I actually had moisture in my eyes . I guess you have way with words plus your characters Geet & Maan prominently make us laugh & cry & vent anger with and on them . Their ego is maddening but their love is just beyond words ... beyond anything earthy its pure and divine . Among the extremely passionate confession I loved their complaint and admittance that yes they did let others come in between knowing well what both are to each other . I cannot say anything except it was simply flawless . And chapter 30 firstly to me I found nothing indecent on the contrary it was a most sensuous drafted passionate chapter . It was more than I would categorize in a typo love scene . It was serene for sore eyes as a reader who saw them went under so many turbulent times , painful circumstances yet finally emerging victorious in love ... their love . You have a Beautiful way with words dear & I salute you Clap
the way you described chapter 29-30 is marvolous though i like chapter but i cant express or adsmire the way you had express it,your language is to the point and so much expressive and well structured that you wrote the thing we wants to express well done miss-idunno.

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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 10:45am | IP Logged
loved the update truly...
it was awesome...
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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 2:37pm | IP Logged
nice update!!
Loved it
continue soon
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Missing this story already Cry

U 2 Reet Smile

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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 3:32pm | IP Logged
nice update
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nice update

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Any chance of update Day Dreaming
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Waiting for the next part Reet..!!

Please update soon..!!

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