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My Teacher (III) - chap 33 @PAGE 143 // 11th dec (Page 68)

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Uss ne mujhe daanta kal... Avi sad and mooh phering...


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Posted: 02 July 2013 at 3:10pm | IP Logged
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^ Ye kya hua tum dono ke beech... 
 
Uss ne mujhe daanta kal... Avi sad and mooh phering...


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LOLLOLLOL Oye main toh DQing kar rahi thi... LOLLOL  mujhe ruthna nhi aata...


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Posted: 02 July 2013 at 7:45pm | IP Logged
bravo Clap
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i just finished reading this ff from the start and just one word is popping in my mind-outstanding
you are a very talented writer and i am honoured to read this ff.cannot wait to read moore.thx for the update.

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I caught up with chapters 29 & 30 . I may not be able to express in words but still trying Embarrassed 
I think I read a heart wrenching confession so beautifully scripted I actually had moisture in my eyes . I guess you have way with words plus your characters Geet & Maan prominently make us laugh & cry & vent anger with and on them . Their ego is maddening but their love is just beyond words ... beyond anything earthy its pure and divine . Among the extremely passionate confession I loved their complaint and admittance that yes they did let others come in between knowing well what both are to each other . I cannot say anything except it was simply flawless . And chapter 30 firstly to me I found nothing indecent on the contrary it was a most sensuous drafted passionate chapter . It was more than I would categorize in a typo love scene . It was serene for sore eyes as a reader who saw them went under so many turbulent times , painful circumstances yet finally emerging victorious in love ... their love . You have a Beautiful way with words dear & I salute you Clap

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