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My Teacher (III) - chap 33 @PAGE 143 // 11th dec (Page 6)

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 1:16pm | IP Logged
Congrats on the new thread..!!

So happy with this update..!!

Finally they are together and Geet has no interest in knowing the past..loved their romance and mushy mushy parts. :D

Feel bad for Dia..but glad Vikas is there by her side and he realized that she's not only someone to him but she's more than that...!! He's in love with her and has accepted her in all ways...love him so much..!!

Loved the update reet..!!

Hope u r doing fine now..take care..!!

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 1:19pm | IP Logged
Oh my long update but I'm loving it all Heart 

Everything... the pain, anguish, hurt, outpouring and venting all the suppressed emotions... culmination of the dream like proposal. Embarrassed

Clap Beautiful description of each emotion... I'm still savoring it all. Embarrassed

Finally there were words flowing without inhibitions and blinding rage but just for two souls dying to be together. He did it with his words and actions reciprocated it all. She was able to vent it all out healing herself and him too. 

Loved the mingling of two souls melting in the intimacy and love with nature acting symbolic force to shield and guide them and the song adding the desired feel and effect; all giving it all a complete blissful feeling. Heart 

The past did make an entry though not fully and loops are still left untangled but then there's a hope so strong now that they will be a forever filled with undying love and unshakable trust leading to bliss that they will cherish after overcoming all the hurdles in their path. 

There was right mixture of pain, love, melting, submission, desires, blazing passion and suppressed emotions coming out after tending to all of their own past raw wounds and scars that soothed them with each others worthy love, words, gestures and actions.. with final the symbol of love being there existent in her fingers... Heart A beauty woven together by you that is a sure shot successful recipe of love that makes me and has transported me to a different world BlushingEmbarrassed that I'm still recovering form it ... Thumbs Up 

The intimacy, kiss and submission to long held onto desires and pleasure was just so needed that I feel you've excelled in showing all of their emotions.. ClapClap With true solace in each others arms cocooning them in a world with just them leaving everything else out unworthy to enter their "Home" again. Embarrassed 

Dia-Satya ... felt for them both but I'm glad that they have each other. I knew this was coming but then it did hurt them both for lost love and pain and anguish of the pain of a loved one.. But nevertheless they can tide over it with their own self supporting the other . Big smile

Thanks for this update... Hug take care of your health... and continue whenever possible
 



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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 1:21pm | IP Logged
o reet such a beautiful updtt.totaly lovd de way he proposed nd geet pouncd on hm.hyee  m fida on  de prt ware geet s woried about hr saree de first gift nd arjun said mei aur ledunga kiss me jaan.songs r beautiful nd apt as always .dias hrt break bt tym 2 accpt de reality.arjun ne fir se geet ko pura truth nehi btaya m woried 4 dat...going 2 rd again...
thnx 4 updting wen u r hving fever.get well soon..Smile

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 1:22pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Amour_Reet

Originally posted by dqno1

Superb!
 
I love his anguish.  He is an English professor but his heart's words he has difficulty saying.
 
I love how angry she got at the way he proposed.  She is right.  Every word of it is correct. 
 
Taking a step backwards now... no no... Arjun don't step back...
 
Awesome amazing and emotional part..
 
Hayyeee !  The proposalHeartHeart
 
Maar dala...
 
Gosh... that was the most romantic proposal I have ever heard...
 
I could just see her bending down to his level and pouncing on him...
 
She deserved this and much more...
 
So happy for this part.
 
The yearning the need the want the desire the masti and finally carrying her home...
 
Avi is in a dead faint from the romantic stupor she is in now...
 
 
ClapClapClap  YOU ARE UNDOUBTEDLY the Queen of Romance!.
 
Just read Satya and Dia's part...
Absolutely the perfect time for Dia to find Satya.
 
I felt so bad for her...
 
Loved the songs too...
 
Am so desperately greedy for more of your writing...
 
Loved it...
 
 
HugThanks for doing this even when you were not well...
 
 



bowing down avi !
pleasure is all mine to make you see this happy !
okie ..i m elated to have your first comment ..here on this thread

aww...u loved the songs ?



but panicked ...you are avoiding one part !!
Confused
 
I pm'd... check dabba... inbox...Big smile
 
now no more doubting... let me go back to read the proposal part again...I can't believe I am so mean and shoo'ing you...LOLLOLLOL but I want to read it...
 
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Edited by dqno1 - 26 June 2013 at 1:28pm

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 1:34pm | IP Logged
awesome

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 1:34pm | IP Logged
awesome update
i am a new reader
loved you story
 so is the door of past really closed  ----------------    or
it may come later ----------- i wonder

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 1:39pm | IP Logged
Congrates for new thread, amazing sensual n excellently written update.

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 1:40pm | IP Logged
"Geet clenched her teeth .".okay .. enough drama .. tonight you need to face me.""
Geet love you for this decision of yoursBig smile
Thank god u decided to talk to himSmile
I just loveddd how maan blabbering with himselfLOL
"Geet did u find the ring ..? umm that's actually mine ..but I want you to have it . oh by the way that's a marriage ring . we should get married ..as quick as possible ."ROFL
Maan you are impossibleLOL
The most I loved about update was maaneet's fight..ROFL
Throught out the update they were fighting like teenage lovers...but obiviously there is No age for loveSmile
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"I am not marrying you ..!

She announced defiantly crossing the arms on her chest ."
"Oh you are marrying me geet ..

Samjhi tum ..!!"
ROFLROFL
you have to marry me ..you don't have a choice .!

she mimicked derisively..LOL

This part was hilarious...
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And ofcourse after laughing with most funny yet adorable fight THE MOST AWAITING PROPOSAL BY MSK TO GEET Smile
My mosttt fav. part of the update or may be whole ff...
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"but I kept coming back to you with the traitor heart in my palms ."
Awww so cutely he confessed itEmbarrassed
"kiunki ..jiya nahi jaata tumhare bina ."
Mere toh aankho me khushi k aansoo aa gayeCry
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"Banogi meri dulhan ?"
WOW..WOW..WOW..
couldn't stop myself saying thisEmbarrassed
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She shared her past with him..
" i m always going to choose you ."Smile
But will be waiting how she'll react after knowing arjun is maan...
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Maaneet's momentsEmbarrassed
Rain and allBlushing
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"What happened .. he groaned at the sudden loss of warmth .

My saree .. its getting spoiled.."
LOL
Ufff yeh geet bhi na romantic time me bhi saari k baare soch rahi haiLOL
"He cursed aloud .its no more beautiful than you ..come kiss me jaan."
ROFL maan's eagernessEmbarrassed

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"Take me home arjun .."
HayyyeeeEmbarrassed
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At the last dia seen maaneet together ...
can understand her pain Unhappy
But she've to see what she has got ..
Satya truly loves her even realised itSmile..
"Satya realized this girl wasn't anymore "someone" to him ."

Loved it thorughly
Pardon for mistakes typed it from mobile so maybe there r chances for mistakes...

Edited by daredevilisback - 26 June 2013 at 1:52pm

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