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My Teacher (III) - chap 33 @PAGE 143 // 11th dec (Page 38)

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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 1:47am | IP Logged
it was so passionate both loved each other so much u write  their togetherness so beautifully they have finally become one soul loved the update so much waiting for next part love u bye

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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 1:58am | IP Logged
Killer update Smile. Soo passionate adorable breathtaking part Embarrassed
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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 2:14am | IP Logged
Thud !!!

Thud !!!
 
Thud!!!!
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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 2:53am | IP Logged
Reet dear this is the new thread and plz post the update link here dear...
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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 3:19am | IP Logged
Before reading the update i was in dire need of sleep... After reading the update i was in dire need of my husband... ummm...ahem.. to worship him off course..ROFL

Now I can understand why reet couldn't be able to update on day before yesterday as well as exrtreamly late on yesterday.. reet u really need this break.. Go and enjoyWinkROFL


Jokes apart...you wrote the whole scene so beautifully with such serenity that one has to miss her/his partner's warmth while reading the update.i can't comment on that part.for me sometimes one should keep quiet to cherish the essence of pure bliss in form of words.i fear if i write something the serenness will be gone.

never again say that you don't have any right on me. I didn't give that right to you ..you earned it . you earned me arjun .


Maan never earned geet. He had been given that right by uday. But arjun has earned it.that too from geet. Here arjun has defeated maan.

I hope u don't mind about my joke. If so then i'm extreamly sorry for that and plZ ignore the same

Edited by sonai-adrica - 01 July 2013 at 6:00am
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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 3:28am | IP Logged
Speechless is d word...finally dey r one in every possible way...loved it would b an understatement 

Maan's hesitance n longingness and geets innocence and surrender...it was beautifully described vd out going out of d line...every word was dipped in love der love...
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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 3:31am | IP Logged
Very beautiful update!!
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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 3:56am | IP Logged

OMG...that was so so so wonderful.Clap

what a beautiful part u hv wrten.Hug

very passionate very hot n the same time very descent .

reet only u can describe them like this.

ur master in ur craft u know hw 2 play vd words.

vn i read ur update i can feel the symphony n melody of love

  under line the words.

  ur simply the best.Thumbs Up

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