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My Teacher (III) - chap 33 @PAGE 143 // 11th dec (Page 28)

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Posted: 30 June 2013 at 7:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mannubhardwaj

hey Reet, how r u now??? headache and computer is bad combination for me.. don't know how u managed to write such a long update...
thanks alot for the update reet..


i'm loving Satya more and more..


it was lovely update.. 
finally everything is back on track...
but i think past will come back in future with geet's 'sweet' dadaji..Angry

Arjun shud elope with geet and take her somewhere away from this Devil...Evil Smile

aur koi surprise in line????

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Posted: 30 June 2013 at 7:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by scorpiodreams

Fantastic...update is like thirst quenching drink after running thro' the deserts of sorrowfulness. glad that they poured their heats out though skipped sharing their past. geet got what she wanted, his confession and affirmation of their relation. no need to mention your excellent penning skills in bringing out their feelings. felt bad for dia but satya will bring her out of this pain soon.hope both the couples stay together now.
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Posted: 30 June 2013 at 7:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetsampa39

God do they do anything,I mean anything normally.Naaa...Then it wont be Reet's Maaneet.They've got to be exceptional.

Geet even after getting the ring,didnt want to be in"bujho toh jaane" mode.She wanted it vocal,the assurance that He is there and will never leave her.
And Arjun cudnt easily voice out his love after her denial at first time.Then he thot his love wudn't need word.But The hurt child Geet needed words.And Arjun begged.[This only one line I didnt like.There's no place of begging in love]
My heart cried at the heartfelt confession of Maan.
And after that the whole time Maaneet spent in each other arms,was pure bliss.Geet securely clinging to Maan,not letting him go,its fantastic.
Their close moments were mesmerising.

But the 'Maan' part yet remained unsolved.I m scared it wud again create major prblm.

And poor Dia actually witnessed Maaneet smooching and the Maan carrying Geet to his apartment!!!!!!!!
Her heart broke into thousand pieces.But she has to gather herself and Satya wud be there with her jst like today.Crying out loud will help her decrease the pain.

Lovely part,Maaneet confessed,ring ceremony bhi gayi,kissy wissy also done.Now eagerly waiting for next part.

Thanx reet for the update.
I hope U are better now.

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Posted: 30 June 2013 at 7:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sheen-Coolkiwi

Superb Part Clap
Finally Arjun SIR proposed Her Embarrassed
I don't know how to do Long Comments LOLOuch
In 2 lines se kaam chala lo LOLWink

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Posted: 30 June 2013 at 7:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Koolsmile

Gr8 chapter Reet Clap
The proposal was sooo haayeee Day Dreaming
The way he knelt down n proposed her wid so much love Embarrassed i fell for the teacher of hers Embarrassed
thank yew so so much for updating Reet Hug
Hope health is fine now Smile Take Care !

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Posted: 30 June 2013 at 7:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Smartangel

Awsome update,aww ,i loved the proposal very much,i was waiting for d update eagerly,n it proved worthwhile n very much better than my expectation,feel bad for dia,bt this is story of maan/arjun n geet ,so anyone who dare to come between will have to pay ,i think arjun must disclose about him,before it lead to another mu b/w them, once again i liked d update very very much

i was stalking ur thread,i came to know about ur one more story in love with enemy, i thought,since d writer is u,i must read ,n i googled d story,n read all d parts in one go,now i must say i m in love with that story,i so much liked guru/maan/cheif n their gang n all,plsss complete that story also,plsss... Give one update for that story in between,i n dying to know what next? Plsss...

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Posted: 30 June 2013 at 7:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by fffanatic

beautiful update reet.

idiot arjun thinking of ways to propose her after he was back after thrusting the ring in her handLOL
poor geet.she knew there was a ring but was nowhere near thinking if it will ever come her way and when it came in the most unexpected way. must say it was indeed a very unique proposal.
maan knew about the info dia had passed to geet and also knew that it was the reason of geets confession and her behaving nicely with dia. he is ishmartApprove
their blame game with a pinch of complain pain and anger was beautifully penned.
finally the role of SIR endsWink
arjun going on his knees and baring his heart was dreamy.
geet was so cute when she was concerned abt her saree and when she complained that he ruined her moment by making her wear the ring when she was nt aware.
next part pe no commentEmbarrassed

 I m born to be with you and you are the only one for me.
So if ever past comes back knocking on our door arjun , any of our past ! .. , I promise you , I will chose you .
i will always come back geet ..again and again ..even if you hate me .

the above lines define their future for me.they are meant to be.they may hate, they may fight,they may hurt BUT they also cant help but love.they belong together no matter what.

i could feel dia's pain but i m glad satya is there for her. satya realized he is irrevocably in love with the girl who is standing in his arms crying for the man whom she loves, drenched in rain, pouring her pain out through her unstoppable tears. i loved how he asked her to let go.

waiting for more and more and more.
reet you are a born writer. writing is something you should never stop.Star hugsssHug

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Posted: 30 June 2013 at 7:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by daredevilisback

"Geet clenched her teeth .".okay .. enough drama .. tonight you need to face me.""
Geet love you for this decision of yoursBig smile
Thank god u decided to talk to himSmile
I just loveddd how maan blabbering with himselfLOL
"Geet did u find the ring ..? umm that's actually mine ..but I want you to have it . oh by the way that's a marriage ring . we should get married ..as quick as possible ."ROFL
Maan you are impossibleLOL
The most I loved about update was maaneet's fight..ROFL
Throught out the update they were fighting like teenage lovers...but obiviously there is No age for loveSmile
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"I am not marrying you ..!

She announced defiantly crossing the arms on her chest ."
"Oh you are marrying me geet ..

Samjhi tum ..!!"
ROFLROFL
you have to marry me ..you don't have a choice .!

she mimicked derisively..LOL

This part was hilarious...
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And ofcourse after laughing with most funny yet adorable fight THE MOST AWAITING PROPOSAL BY MSK TO GEET Smile
My mosttt fav. part of the update or may be whole ff...
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"but I kept coming back to you with the traitor heart in my palms ."
Awww so cutely he confessed itEmbarrassed
"kiunki ..jiya nahi jaata tumhare bina ."
Mere toh aankho me khushi k aansoo aa gayeCry
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"Banogi meri dulhan ?"
WOW..WOW..WOW..
couldn't stop myself saying thisEmbarrassed
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She shared her past with him..
" i m always going to choose you ."Smile
But will be waiting how she'll react after knowing arjun is maan...
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Maaneet's momentsEmbarrassed
Rain and allBlushing
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"What happened .. he groaned at the sudden loss of warmth .

My saree .. its getting spoiled.."
LOL
Ufff yeh geet bhi na romantic time me bhi saari k baare soch rahi haiLOL
"He cursed aloud .its no more beautiful than you ..come kiss me jaan."
ROFL maan's eagernessEmbarrassed

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"Take me home arjun .."
HayyyeeeEmbarrassed
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At the last dia seen maaneet together ...
can understand her pain Unhappy
But she've to see what she has got ..
Satya truly loves her even realised itSmile..
"Satya realized this girl wasn't anymore "someone" to him ."

Loved it thorughly
Pardon for mistakes typed it from mobile so maybe there r chances for mistakes...

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