Hoth Tere Mai Ke Pyaale,Kajrare Naina Tere, Maathe Par Sinduri Subaha ,Julfho Main Raina Base
Saansein Yeh Teri Hain,Dhadkan Bhi Teri Hain, Jeevan Yeh Tera Hua ,Tere Hi Choone Se, Tan Man Saja Mera,
"Hui Main Parineeta"
Feeling like I m floating in the sky with love all around me.You've so beautifully and soulfully written the close moments of Maaneet that even if say I m mesmerised it wud be an understatement.
I m gleefully awed at Geet's trust on Arjun,its divine and the way Arjun was concerned that sm thng wrong might not happen to Geet if they stay close,so selfless.
But then he cudnt deny her crazy,impulsive,stupid,insanely in love with him,child women.And when they made love its sacred.You know I m a very Indian girl but here Maaneet never seem wrong with the ocean of love they have in their hearts for each other.
I even more loved the morning scene,when Geet took Arjun to be her bed.The way you describe Arjun when she was admiring her,even I fell once again for the English teacher.
The part where Arjun holds Geet securely thinking if he sleeps the unbelievable reality will turn into dream,it brought tears in my eyes.How long the souls have waited for each other!!!!!!!!
Congrats for writing the update and the story and thanx to all Ur frnds who help you.
P.s-How will we survive for seven days buddy. 😠But koi ni,You enjoy the break. 😃
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