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kriapatel Goldie

Joined: 07 November 2012
Posts: 2278

Posted: 27 June 2013 at 1:14am | IP Logged
Love it
both are spy

like the concept

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anjoriii IF-Rockerz

Joined: 11 January 2013
Posts: 5363

Posted: 27 June 2013 at 3:10am | IP Logged
awesome os ... 
luved it ... 
u have used heavy words ... 
i have to again and again consult google to understand the meaning of those words ... 
th os was just fabulous ... :)

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..Roop.. IF-Rockerz

Joined: 17 August 2012
Posts: 7545

Posted: 27 June 2013 at 7:14am | IP Logged
Oh Ehm Gee...PJ...

are u kidding me...

i mean this was f*ckingly ahmazing...

i so love you for this...

or i love this OS more...LOL

from the beginning there was some kind of passion and desire between them...

KR are spy agents...ahh correction sexy spy agents...

and then their convo...

then their bet and kriya losing it...

and ofcourse than that red Saree...*u know i thought k that was a two piece for her...excuse me for my tharki mind..ROFL*

and finally their romance...with a Rose...

you wrote it so beautifully...

i can't tell you how much i loved it...

ho ske to ese OS's aur likha kar...Wink

Hugs and kisses from my side...

Edited by ..Roop.. - 27 June 2013 at 7:15am

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d3_rox Goldie

Joined: 16 February 2012
Posts: 1498

Posted: 27 June 2013 at 9:29am | IP Logged
Totally loved it...
I was actually confused in the start but then when she came in the Sarsi thought they were in love n were just gng to confess...
But unsurprised me in the end...
Loved it!!!:):)

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sweetydiyafrien IF-Rockerz

Joined: 18 October 2012
Posts: 6836

Posted: 27 June 2013 at 9:32am | IP Logged
awesome and loved it...

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agreatperhaps IF-Rockerz

Joined: 14 March 2010
Posts: 8608

Posted: 29 June 2013 at 2:16am | IP Logged
Not at all confusing, rather very wonderful and it got even more amazing as the surprises kept coming in.

Beautifully written! :) 

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ShonaSparkzz Senior Member

Joined: 22 May 2012
Posts: 248

Posted: 29 June 2013 at 3:29pm | IP Logged
IT was indeed a beautiful os
Just in an os 

Never let personal life be affected by ones work
By the time i reached the end 
Every word made me blush 
Trust me it was intoxicating
Most of all
The anniversary came as an element of surprise
You portrayed a very beautiful relationship- competing at every step yet passionate

And I love Detectives so i found it even more exiting
I must compliment your choice of words aggressive yet subtle.

All in all - I  just fell in love at first sight
Hope you can write more such osClap

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Roxxy47 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 25 June 2012
Posts: 5494

Posted: 30 June 2013 at 3:52am | IP Logged
Very sorry Di , couldn't comment earlier Embarrassed...

Wow!!! Was all I could say about this Big smile...
Inna Hot and Happening tha g Approve...
Ek dum mast istyle Cool...
This was one of the most 'Unique' way of celebrating an Anniversary Wink...
Starting was cool types...
The way Rey was teasing and irritating Kria , i had no clue that they were married...
Race scene was Amazing Approve...
Pool scene was Hot g Blushing...
Didn't knew Spys can be this romantic LOL...
Being a spy and celebrating their Anniversary in 'This' style , niceee Wink...

It was Fabulous ,'great choice of words Big smile...
Loved it Heart...
Do write stuff like these TongueEmbarrassed...
N thanks for the pm Smile.

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