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Roses & Thorns | Ch25 Pg1 (10/03) (Page 96)

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Posted: 23 November 2013 at 7:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by srat

And so now the waiting begins, if she comes back , when she comes back... 

If and When - the two most important questions.

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Posted: 23 November 2013 at 7:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by fhussain237

Superb update hun
Its time khushi took the decision for their relationship
Looking forward to see how khushi leaving changes arnav n how she copes too
Continue soon hun

Thank You! :)

Glad you are liking the story so far.
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Posted: 23 November 2013 at 7:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by henamani

Don't tell me this is the end
But I'm very hopeful bc arnav and Khushi are meant together 
When a writer can evoke such powerful reaction in the reader that means his job is done

Thank You so much! I am glad you feel that the writing is powerful and that you are liking the story so far! And I hope that its not the end either for Arnav and Khushi but lets see... :)
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Posted: 23 November 2013 at 7:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anonyasr

Poignant and beautiful. Very well written chapter.

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Posted: 23 November 2013 at 7:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by moomin4455

Heartbreaking, but inevitable. I hope both take time to reflect and get to know each other - become friends - before they begin their journey once again as husband and wife...
I hope they don't take too much time though...I love my Arnavs and Khushis to be together... LOL

Very well put and I want what you want for Arnav and Khushi but before that its necessary they face some questions and clear some doubts - both of their own and that of the other.

Thank You so much for your comment! :)
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Posted: 23 November 2013 at 7:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -MeraBarun-

So she left

The situation reminds me of the engagement scene at d temple with Ipk title song in the background

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And I am honoured it reminds you of that stellar sequence! :)
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Posted: 23 November 2013 at 10:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by dilectus

Some would say its Drastic change, too good to be true. I would say its a shift in perceiverance. All of her traits, which he considered to be a trap, a lie - are shining forth in the light of truth. The acceptance of her goodness has calmed the storm of fight between his heart and his brain. Hence, he no longer needs to worry over her motives, for he knows she is what she appears to be. This, combined with the guilt, the remorse and most importantly the love, that one feeling which should have been given the power to overcome everyother thought, that one feeling which he refused to accept.

I know she needs time to heal, I know he should be left alone for a while, still I cant stop my heart from crying out loud that "You have to be together, this is your destiny. Dont try to run from it, you sweet fools!!"

I absolutely love what you have written! Its very well thought out and extremely sensitively written and completely sums up what I have been trying to say since the last few updates.

And the last line...I want to tell them the same but kya karein...dil ka maamla hai, dil ko toh sure hona padega before anything else!

Thank You so much for your comment! :)

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Posted: 23 November 2013 at 11:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aquagal

Chapter-23
I won't say I felt bad or her going away was heart-breaking because it wasn't. It was kind of bitter-sweet. If Khushi's words made me feel sad, yearning to stop her to avoid the inevitable, Arnav's words were like a balm -a promise that they will find their way in each other's heart and life, that they will be together again - one more inevitable part! WinkSmile
I think this is the time for Arnav to reflect upon himself and his actions. He now would hopefully correct his wrongs. Khushi already knows that he has changed. This will only strengthen their love for each other.
They will be together because Love will find its way...

Both the parts that I have bolded in your comment are so beautifully put! And I am so glad you felt the turmoil, the tug of war...makes me feel as if the chapter hit its mark so thank you so much! :)

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