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Roses & Thorns | Ch25 Pg1 (10/03) (Page 93)

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Posted: 23 November 2013 at 7:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by moomin4455

Heartbreaking, but inevitable. I hope both take time to reflect and get to know each other - become friends - before they begin their journey once again as husband and wife...
I hope they don't take too much time though...I love my Arnavs and Khushis to be together... LOL

Very well put and I want what you want for Arnav and Khushi but before that its necessary they face some questions and clear some doubts - both of their own and that of the other.

Thank You so much for your comment! :)

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Posted: 23 November 2013 at 7:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -MeraBarun-

So she left

The situation reminds me of the engagement scene at d temple with Ipk title song in the background

Thank You! :)

And I am honoured it reminds you of that stellar sequence! :)
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Posted: 23 November 2013 at 10:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by dilectus

Some would say its Drastic change, too good to be true. I would say its a shift in perceiverance. All of her traits, which he considered to be a trap, a lie - are shining forth in the light of truth. The acceptance of her goodness has calmed the storm of fight between his heart and his brain. Hence, he no longer needs to worry over her motives, for he knows she is what she appears to be. This, combined with the guilt, the remorse and most importantly the love, that one feeling which should have been given the power to overcome everyother thought, that one feeling which he refused to accept.

I know she needs time to heal, I know he should be left alone for a while, still I cant stop my heart from crying out loud that "You have to be together, this is your destiny. Dont try to run from it, you sweet fools!!"

I absolutely love what you have written! Its very well thought out and extremely sensitively written and completely sums up what I have been trying to say since the last few updates.

And the last line...I want to tell them the same but kya karein...dil ka maamla hai, dil ko toh sure hona padega before anything else!

Thank You so much for your comment! :)

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Posted: 23 November 2013 at 11:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aquagal

Chapter-23
I won't say I felt bad or her going away was heart-breaking because it wasn't. It was kind of bitter-sweet. If Khushi's words made me feel sad, yearning to stop her to avoid the inevitable, Arnav's words were like a balm -a promise that they will find their way in each other's heart and life, that they will be together again - one more inevitable part! WinkSmile
I think this is the time for Arnav to reflect upon himself and his actions. He now would hopefully correct his wrongs. Khushi already knows that he has changed. This will only strengthen their love for each other.
They will be together because Love will find its way...

Both the parts that I have bolded in your comment are so beautifully put! And I am so glad you felt the turmoil, the tug of war...makes me feel as if the chapter hit its mark so thank you so much! :)

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Posted: 16 December 2013 at 10:19am | IP Logged
Hope you are well and your exams went well too, can we hope for one more update this year, please?   Perhaps Khushi  is ready to come back !!

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Posted: 17 December 2013 at 8:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by LadyR

Hope you are well and your exams went well too, can we hope for one more update this year, please?   Perhaps Khushi  is ready to come back !!

Hello! The exams went okay but I still have a viva left...and I didnt think people were actually waiting for any update of R&T! Quite a surprise here, a pleasant one! :)

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Posted: 17 December 2013 at 10:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Raila1014

Giving her the freedom to choose how they move forward after he forced her into their marriage is not only going to help her feel stronger and feel important but it will hopefully take away some of the guilt he is feeling from trapping her into this relationship.  He knows he cannot be selfish anymore even though he loves her.  She sees the change in him but needs to get herself back together, back to who she wad before she was broken.  Standing on equal footing is the best way to start anew.  Love the simple exchange of "I am leaving" and "I will be waiting for you".  Not many words but enough of a promise to let her know he cares.  

Thank You! :)

I am glad you understood the intention behind the chapter...they both need time to reflect and heal and as you said get back to each other to talk it out on equal footing.
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Posted: 17 December 2013 at 10:54pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mistyrains

This chapter was again, beautiful , but I guess for different reasons this time. It held many revelations of Arnav's heart - the part about if the sudden marriage had not happened and the course their lives would have taken. The part about him understanding the that they needed the said time to understand each other's significance in their lives - it just goes to show how the man is gradually changing.
Somehow I was rooting for Khushi to not leave, but reading the first part of the chapter, I'm glad she did.

Loving the way you're taking the story forward! Amazing work, as always <3


Glad that you understood why Khushi had to leave, just as Arnav understood, on a journey with him. 

Thank You :)

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