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Roses & Thorns | Ch25 Pg1 (10/03) (Page 93)

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Posted: 10 November 2013 at 10:49pm | IP Logged
Chapter-23
I won't say I felt bad or her going away was heart-breaking because it wasn't. It was kind of bitter-sweet. If Khushi's words made me feel sad, yearning to stop her to avoid the inevitable, Arnav's words were like a balm -a promise that they will find their way in each other's heart and life, that they will be together again - one more inevitable part! WinkSmile
I think this is the time for Arnav to reflect upon himself and his actions. He now would hopefully correct his wrongs. Khushi already knows that he has changed. This will only strengthen their love for each other.
They will be together because Love will find its way...

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Posted: 10 November 2013 at 11:02pm | IP Logged
Giving her the freedom to choose how they move forward after he forced her into their marriage is not only going to help her feel stronger and feel important but it will hopefully take away some of the guilt he is feeling from trapping her into this relationship.  He knows he cannot be selfish anymore even though he loves her.  She sees the change in him but needs to get herself back together, back to who she wad before she was broken.  Standing on equal footing is the best way to start anew.  Love the simple exchange of "I am leaving" and "I will be waiting for you".  Not many words but enough of a promise to let her know he cares.  

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Posted: 10 November 2013 at 11:05pm | IP Logged
This chapter was again, beautiful , but I guess for different reasons this time. It held many revelations of Arnav's heart - the part about if the sudden marriage had not happened and the course their lives would have taken. The part about him understanding the that they needed the said time to understand each other's significance in their lives - it just goes to show how the man is gradually changing.
Somehow I was rooting for Khushi to not leave, but reading the first part of the chapter, I'm glad she did.

Loving the way you're taking the story forward! Amazing work, as always <3

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Posted: 10 November 2013 at 11:11pm | IP Logged
Beautiful! All of it, her stoic maturity, his new found patience, fear behind the earlier impatience too.. and new determination. Beautiful.. absolutely beautiful. I can sense an end and beginning here, am I reading too much?
Is this the time, you thought of breaking it into two books, time of a necessary, seemingly calm but happening separation?

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Posted: 10 November 2013 at 11:55pm | IP Logged
Painful, but beautiful update! 
Love how Arnav is trying so hard to become the person Khushi deserves! 

Please, please, please, do continue soon! :) 

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Posted: 11 November 2013 at 2:22am | IP Logged
nice update..continue soon..Smile

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Posted: 11 November 2013 at 2:39am | IP Logged
What the? Separation and full stop?

But it was totally justified! This reminds me of ipks banner they both walk in opp directions! *sigh*

I guess it was inevitable but totally understandable!!

Hmm realization!! When it happens a whole lot of dimensions change!


Cheers

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Posted: 11 November 2013 at 4:23am | IP Logged
I so wished that khushi wouldn't go away  but as Arnav understands ,they both need time to understand the other's  effect on their lives.
For once khushi has taken a decision for both of them.
Arnav is changing  indeed!

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